Master IELTS General Training Volume 5 Speaking Practice Test 1
Question list
What kinds of thing make you laugh?
Do you like making other people laugh? [Why/Why not?]
Do you think it’s important for people to laugh? [Why/Why not?]
Is laughing the same as feeling happy, do you think? [Why/Why not?]
Describe a game or sport that you enjoy playing
You should say:
what kind of sport that is;
who you play it with;
where you play it;
and explain why you think doing this is healthy.
What types of sports are popular in your country? Why?
What are the benefits of playing a sport?
Do you often play a sport? Why/ why not?
Do you think the types of sport that are popular will change in the future?
How can sports bring people from different countries closer together?
Why are some international sports more popular than others?
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i believe that everyone has different opinions on this topic. But In my opinion, specialised facilities should exist only to train the top atheltes. Yet, the governments still should provide other facilities for everyone else to use, you will never know if someone has a hidden talent and potential but don't know how to improve it beause there is no place to learn. Some people volunteer and build a basketball basket outside of their property just so other kids can play.
On the other hand, countries building specialised facilities for top atheletes is not a terrible thing. People like top atheletes should have a place only for them to train. Because, they can focus and open up their full potential in the place everything they need has provided.
For instance, they still can train at a gym or other not specialised facilites. However, the amount of people around them, the equipments that are not necessary are going to distract them.
Nonetheless, i would say that there are still a plenty of people with hidden potential. Since, in some country there aren't much facilities for the residents (such as training center, public gym) and they are unable to unlock the hidden talent and what they can do. Despite of that, every country should provide their citizen the opportunity to find what their talent its and what they can do for their country. I strongly believe that if the government had already provided this opportunity, a lot of great atheletes would have been born by now.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Answer:
I extremely agree with the saying that giving money to poorer countries does not solve poverty. Let me explain several reasons why I propose this idea. First, giving money only solves momentary problems but not the root causes. If there is no careful investigation of the problem source and planning on how the money is used, then it can only be filling a bottomless well. Not enough until forever. The problem of structural poverty may vary, ranging from a low education background, having no skills, lack of work opportunities, inflation, etcetera.
Second, there is a possibility of corruption if raw money is given. Depending on the culture and work ethic of the country, in severe cases, most of the funds go to the pocket of evil men instead of improving citizen's quality of life. It will add things to be solved by the government. Eventually, become poorer instead.
Third, lending money can lead to dependence on another country in the long term, which does not go along with how a country should act so they can govern their country independently. Besides, asking for help especially material sometimes requires sacrifices and high interest. There is no country that gives its money freely outside outstanding situations such as war or other extreme unfortunate events.
Rich countries should give other types of help to undeveloped countries depending on their actual need. It could be in a health, economic, technology, education, or other area. In the other side, the poor country should learn the most urgent root causes and make a detailed plan in the long term to solve them so they could know their actual need.
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Although developed states have been providing a budget support program for undeveloped countries, it did not help to alleviate the poverty of impoverished countries. Therefore, the form of support to the underdeveloped states has to be changed. I fully agree with this opinion and I think that having support on better training facilities and adequate infrastructure education is a finer way than giving cash assistance.
A significant issue faced by third countries is the high unemployment rate due to lack of skill. People in undeveloped countries have no good qualifications for professional skills because they lack professional training experiences. Thus, providing a vocational training hub for capacity building will lead to improved skills to support their professional CV. For example, according to research on social development issues in most countries in Africa in 2012 indicates that the majority of people have no skill to compete in professional work, resulting in lower innovation leading to lessened incomes. Thus, they will improve their level of well-being in the long run.
In addition, population education levels in most poorer states are under average than developed ones. This issue is caused by inadequate educational facilities provided around the country, resulting in limited access by children for better studying. For example, if a country did not have any insufficient amenities such as better rooms, buildings, laboratories and other support learning, the learners will not gain enough experiences, skills and abilities for their future lives. Hence, they will potentially fail in professional lives and personal lives in the future, and its consequences are low incomes and poorer life conditions.
To conclude, support from developed countries should focus on human development by providing public growing facilities such as professional training hubs and sufficient educational facilities rather than financial assistance.
Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement (Band 7)
The essay addresses the prompt and presents a clear position on the issue. It provides relevant arguments and examples to support the view that developed countries should focus on providing training and educational facilities instead of financial aid. However, the arguments could be further elaborated with more detailed examples and explanations.
Coherence and Cohesion (Band 7)
The essay is well-organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The use of transition words is generally effective, but some ideas could be linked more smoothly to improve the overall flow. The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points.
Lexical Resource (Band 6)
The vocabulary used is adequate, but there are some repetitive phrases and minor errors in word choice (e.g., "third countries" instead of "developing countries" and "population education levels" instead of "educational levels"). Using a wider range of vocabulary and more precise language would enhance the essay.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy (Band 6)
The essay contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and coherence. Issues include incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement, and awkward phrasing. The sentences could be more varied and complex to demonstrate a higher grammatical range.
Revised Essay:
Although developed countries have been providing financial aid to underdeveloped nations, this approach has not effectively alleviated poverty. Therefore, the form of support needs to change. I fully agree with this opinion and believe that providing better training facilities and adequate educational infrastructure is a more effective solution than giving cash assistance.
A significant issue faced by developing countries is the high unemployment rate due to a lack of skills. People in these countries often do not have the necessary qualifications because they lack access to professional training. By establishing vocational training centers, developed nations can help improve the skills of the local workforce, leading to better job opportunities and higher incomes. For example, research on social development issues in African countries in 2012 indicated that the majority of people lacked professional skills, resulting in lower innovation and reduced incomes. Providing vocational training can significantly improve their well-being in the long run.
In addition, the educational levels in most poorer states are below average compared to developed ones. This issue is often caused by inadequate educational facilities, which limit children's access to quality education. For instance, if a country lacks proper classrooms, buildings, laboratories, and other learning resources, students will not gain the necessary skills and knowledge for their future careers. Consequently, they may struggle in their professional and personal lives, leading to low incomes and poorer living conditions.
To conclude, support from developed countries should focus on human development by providing vocational training centers and adequate educational facilities rather than financial assistance. This approach addresses the root causes of poverty and helps create sustainable improvements in the lives of people in developing countries.
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The nations of the world frequently helps other countries in different sectors such economic, health, education and many more. Among the countries there are some elite nations who many a times gives their support to the countries who are poor in terms of economy although the poverty remains one and all the same. The topic is debatable that developed countries should help the needy ones not only in terms of finance but also in other sectors. I completely agree with this idea and I will give valid reasons and examples to support my opinion.
Firstly, the wealthy and powerful countries should provide the needy nations with medical assistance so that they can operate some critical casualties and support their health sector. After that, developed nations should aid one of the main needs of humans which is food and related supplies. This could lead to the fulfilment of meal of the poor citizens. There is also requirement of solid education in the penurious nations and it can be resolved by the hierarchical states so that a child can get a basic literacy to contribute for their country. For instance, a country can provide with smart boards to the schools or institutions to make the learning easy.
Secondly, other aid that a developing country can get is through is military assistance. When terrorists or any other country creates a conflict in order to get something and there is less defence power then this assist can be useful. Further, water and sanitation issues can also be solved within the support of a helping hand. For example, by arranging awareness programs for sanitation and providing resources of water management and distribution every single person can get enough of both.
To conclude, there might me populist belief that by only financial aid a poor nation can be helped but I am of the firm opinion that not only with money but also by giving support in other sectors can stable the economy.
Band Score: 6.0
Task Achievement (Band 6)
The essay addresses the prompt and presents a clear stance, agreeing that developed countries should offer various types of aid rather than just financial assistance. It provides several reasons and examples to support the argument. However, some points could be more developed, and additional specific examples would strengthen the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion (Band 6)
The essay has a logical structure with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The ideas are generally well-organized, but transitions between some points could be smoother to enhance coherence. Some sentences are repetitive and could be more concise.
Lexical Resource (Band 6)
The vocabulary used is adequate but limited. There are repetitive phrases and minor errors in word choice (e.g., "smart boards" instead of "smartboards," "penurious" instead of "impoverished"). More varied and precise vocabulary would improve the essay.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy (Band 6)
The essay contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and coherence, such as incorrect verb forms, awkward phrasing, and subject-verb agreement issues. The sentences could be more varied and complex to demonstrate a higher grammatical range.
Revised Essay:
Rich countries often provide financial aid to poorer countries, but this approach has not effectively solved poverty. Therefore, developed countries should offer other forms of assistance besides financial aid. I completely agree with this idea and will provide valid reasons and examples to support my opinion.
Firstly, wealthy and powerful countries should provide medical assistance to needy nations to improve their healthcare systems. This support can help address critical health issues and enhance overall health infrastructure. For example, providing medical equipment and training healthcare professionals can significantly improve healthcare outcomes in impoverished regions. Additionally, developed nations should address food security by supplying food and related resources to ensure that the poor have access to adequate nutrition.
Secondly, education is crucial for breaking the cycle of poverty. Developed countries can support education in impoverished nations by providing educational resources and infrastructure. For instance, donating smartboards and educational materials to schools can enhance the learning experience and improve literacy rates. Furthermore, establishing scholarship programs and exchange opportunities can help students gain valuable knowledge and skills.
Another essential form of assistance is military support. Developing countries facing conflicts or threats can benefit from military aid, which helps maintain stability and security. For example, providing training and resources to the local military can enhance their ability to protect the nation. Additionally, addressing water and sanitation issues through awareness programs and providing resources for water management and distribution can improve public health and living conditions.
To conclude, while financial aid can help poor nations, I firmly believe that providing support in other sectors such as healthcare, education, military assistance, and sanitation is more effective in stabilizing their economies and improving their overall quality of life. By offering comprehensive support, developed countries can help create sustainable development in impoverished regions.
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In present time, pupils are less interested to take science subjects for their study. while they are interested in other subjects, which is detrimental for next generation. In this essay, I will outline, why this is happening and discuss the influence in the world.
From an overall perspective, there are numerous reasons why students are not choosing science subjects in university. perhaps the main reasons is that pupils have lack knowledge in scientific things. They do not know about the feelings to invented new things; they do not have enough confidence to take science subject as their further education; they do not know that science is the main education for this world; and most importantly, they do not have the education systems which encourage them to take science subject in university education. Another point is that, from beginning of their study they heard that science is one of the most difficult subject in the earth and if people choose this subject, then they have to be a brilliant otherwise they would not gain success in their entire life.
There are several consequences of this reason. Firstly, as pupils are avoiding science subject, then society will have lack in this job sector. For example, if any pandemic happens again like 2020 then people will die because we would not have ample researchers for invented vaccines. Secondly, a country economy will hamper drastically. As a result, our countries citizens will face a disaster situation. Last but not least, technologically we cannot develop new things such as robots, automatic cars, and latest smartphones.
In conclusion, from my opinion pupils should take science in university education because we need them for our better future. If pupils ignore science subject, then we will meet vulnerable future.
Based on your writing task, here is an evaluation along with a band score estimation for IELTS:
Task Response (5.0): The response addresses the prompt by discussing reasons why students are less interested in studying science subjects and the potential consequences of this trend. However, the arguments are not developed cohesively, and there is a lack of depth in the discussion. Additionally, the conclusion does not effectively summarize the main points made in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion (5.0): The essay has a basic structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, and transitions between sentences and paragraphs are lacking. Some ideas are repeated, and there is inconsistency in the development of arguments.
Lexical Resource (5.0): The vocabulary used is somewhat limited, and there are instances of awkward or repetitive phrasing ("science is the main education for this world"). Additionally, there are inaccuracies and errors in word choice and usage throughout the essay.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy (5.0): There are several grammatical errors and awkward sentence constructions throughout the essay, including issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Some sentences are unclear or ambiguous, making it difficult to follow the writer's intended meaning.
Overall, while the essay attempts to address the task, it lacks coherence, depth of analysis, and language proficiency needed for a higher band score. Therefore, the overall band score estimation for your essay would be around 5.0.
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QUESTION- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every Developing or Underdeveloped country seeks some sort of help from Well-developed and growing Country in few aspects such as by lending loans , doing Trade , Technology aspects and many more.
I totally disagree with the statement as helping with only Financial means is not a proper way of resolving any underdeveloped country problem as it cannot solve its Countries scarcity or its long-term conditions.
In this Essay, I'm going to give my opinion on the particular topic with few examples.
Talking about the condition of a country it comes with certain factors such as GDP, its technical growth, Percentage of Employed and unemployed population, Literacy rate etc. Aiding with some amount of Money will not going to get positive outcomes with respect to the future of that nation.
The best way to help a whole country is to become flexible with offering good job opportunities for other nationalities, doing International Trades or Business with that sort of help they can improvise the whole condition. Likewise if we look at few countries such as Germany, USA, Canda and Australia. These are the most common Countries that allow International students to study in their renowned Universities along with offering them jobs so that they can learn new skills practically and theoretically moreover they are allowed to earn handsome amount of money so that after going back to their nation they can improve their countries economy. Furthermore,In these days youngsters are much more active and into Entrepreneurship
Where they originate brilliant thoughts and ideas for initiating a business in abroad example- Opening their own Restaurants, Cafe's while making themselves financially independent
As far as my point is concerned a countries growth is not only affected by financial means but also its goods and services, Worldwide Recognisation, Education, Tourist and Travelling makes it more Developing and Growing. However Money is a crucial part of getting a stability but limiting to short-term growth .Therefore every individual should take part and start contributing their efforts in making their nation Developed
Band score: 6.5
Overall, the essay demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents a clear opinion. However, there are several areas where improvements could be made:
Coherence and cohesion: The essay lacks clear paragraphing, making it difficult to follow the structure of the argument. Each idea should be presented in a separate paragraph to improve clarity and coherence.
Sentence structure and grammar: There are some grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures throughout the essay. This affects the clarity and fluency of the writing.
Vocabulary and expression: While the essay uses a range of vocabulary, some words and phrases are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Additionally, there is repetition of certain words and ideas, which could be avoided to improve the overall quality of the writing.
Development of ideas: While the essay presents some examples to support the argument, they are not fully developed or explained. Providing more detailed examples and analysis would strengthen the overall argument.
Overall, the essay demonstrates a sufficient level of English proficiency to convey ideas effectively, but there is room for improvement in coherence, grammar, vocabulary, and development of ideas.
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Task 1
The bar charts compare, in percentages, how people born in Australia and those born outside Australia were distributed among cities, towns, and rural areas between the years of 1995 and 2010.
Overall, for both the years, the most births within and outside Australia occurred in cities, with the rural births appearing in second place but gradually declining to occupy the last place for both populations as the years progressed.
In 1995, city births outside Australia accounted for 60% while those within Australia were very well below that figure. In a similar pattern, rural births outside Australia were 40% while rural births within Australia were found to be at figures considerably below 40%. Town births strayed from this pattern with town births within Australia higher at 20% and outside Australia below 20%.
In 2010, city births outside Australia outnumbered rural births by occupying the 80th percentage mark. Meanwhile, city births within Australia capped at just over 60%. For births within Australia, those within towns and cities were almost equal at just under 20% while for births outside Australia. rural births are less than town births (both were well under 20% but rural births were closer to 0% than 20%).
Task 2
I agree that poor nations need help other than just financial support. However, in saying that, I also hold that while we provide them with other means of improving their livings standards, financial aid is also indispensable in alleviating their impoverished conditions.
Firstly, while money is the answer to many woes, it is not a permanent solution. Financial support can provide a month's ration to perhaps a small house to families in need. However, that ration will eventually deplete and that house will ultimately fall to disrepair. What is required is to invest in educational programmes to impart useful skills needed to maintain a long term livelihood, one that is independent of financial aid.
Furthermore, people victim to financially decrepit conditions can barely afford all three of their daily meals. Whatever aid they receive is ultimately spent in buying necessities, and when necessities outnumber the resources, savings are the last thing that is possible for them. There is not a constant inflow of money as the aid delivered is episodic, and it runs out faster than it can be replenished.
In addition, in many impoverished countries, there is little check and balance on where the donations ultimately go and in whose pocket. Weak administration and rampant corruption often result in the diversion of donated funds, meant for the people, straight into the pockets of the powerful. As a result, the rich continue to get richer and the poor sink deeper into poverty.
In conclusion, while well-off countries must maintain their financial support to poor countries, they must also ensure educational programs as well as co-operation with the local governments to ensure proper distribution of the funds.
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Your essay effectively addresses the prompt and presents a clear argument. Here's a breakdown of the evaluation:
Task Response: You fully address the task by agreeing that poor nations need help beyond financial aid. You provide supporting arguments and examples to justify your viewpoint.
Coherence and Cohesion: The essay is well-structured with clear paragraphing. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the argument and is logically connected to the overall thesis. Transition words and phrases are used effectively to guide the reader through the essay.
Lexical Resource: Your vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the topic. You use a range of vocabulary related to poverty, financial aid, and development. There are also instances of precise and effective word choice, enhancing the clarity and impact of your arguments.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Your grammar and sentence structures are generally accurate, and you demonstrate a good command of complex sentence structures. However, there are a few minor errors, such as in the phrase "episodic, and it runs out faster than it can be replenished," where a comma splice occurs. Additionally, there are some minor punctuation errors that slightly affect readability.
Overall Impression: Your essay effectively presents a well-reasoned argument with coherent supporting points and examples. However, to achieve a higher band score, pay closer attention to minor grammatical errors and punctuation to improve clarity and precision in your writing.
Band Score: 7.0
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Review for Writing Task 1:
Here's the breakdown of the evaluation:
Task Achievement: You accurately describe the information presented in the bar charts, highlighting the distribution of people born in Australia and those born outside Australia among cities, towns, and rural areas between 1995 and 2010. You provide a clear overview and support your description with specific percentages from the charts.
Coherence and Cohesion: The essay is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing. Your description of the data follows a logical sequence, comparing the distribution between the two populations and across different types of areas over time. However, there are some minor issues with sentence structure and transitions that slightly affect coherence.
Lexical Resource: Your vocabulary is appropriate for the task, and you effectively use percentages and comparative language to describe the data. However, there is room for improvement in terms of lexical variety and precision. Additionally, there are a few instances where word choice could be more precise to enhance clarity.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Overall, your grammar is fairly accurate, and you demonstrate a good command of sentence structure. However, there are some errors in sentence construction and verb tense consistency. For example, in the phrase "city births outside Australia outnumbered rural births by occupying the 80th percentage mark," the construction is a bit awkward. Additionally, there are some minor punctuation errors throughout the essay.
Overall Impression: Your essay effectively describes the trends presented in the bar charts and provides a clear overview of the data. To improve your score, focus on refining sentence structure, improving grammatical accuracy, and enhancing lexical variety and precision. Additionally, pay attention to punctuation to ensure clarity and readability.
Band Score: 6.5
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ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Answer
I can't say either agree or disagree on the following statement becuase there are some benefits along with some problems on rich conutries giving money to poorer countries. As a citizen of India, I have seen so many news articles about foreign rich conutries which aided india with economic support which soon led to lot controversies. For example british people are accusing india about billions of money they sent to india in the past 10 years and trolling india about landing on south pole of moon.The problem with money is money doesn't develop a government or country. A country can develop with advancement in technologies and entreprenuership. Countries can help in a country growth with investments like to start MNCs and setup industries in the countries like india. With this implementation, there will be a lot of employement opportunities to the people of the country. Exports and import business plays a key role in the development of country's economy. Countries who are doing lot of business in the export will become a poineer in the global market. So, rich countries need to support the countries by importing materials like agriculture products etc.. majorly from the poorer countries other than rich countries. This will change the quote that "the rich becomes more rich -the poor becomes more poor". Supply of machinery and advanced technologies can help in the development of poor country other than financial aid. The technologies can help to improve the productivity in agriculture. Automatic working machines will be able to bring lots of changes in the food processing industries and save a lot of time with the increased production rate.overally ,
I can say that along with money rich countries need to support the poorer countries with supply of various machinery and sharing technologies and helping in boosting economy through MNcs and export market.
Band Score: 5.0
Task Achievement (Band 5)
The essay presents a position that is partially developed and lacks clear focus. The arguments are not well-structured, and the essay doesn't fully address the prompt. The examples provided are relevant but not effectively integrated into a cohesive argument.
Coherence and Cohesion (Band 5)
The essay lacks a clear structure and logical flow. There are frequent abrupt transitions between ideas, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is absent, which affects readability and coherence.
Lexical Resource (Band 5)
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are several instances of informal language and phrasing that are inappropriate for an academic essay. Some words are misspelled, and word choice is sometimes incorrect (e.g., "controversies" instead of "controversies").
Grammatical Range and Accuracy (Band 5)
The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with subject-verb agreement, sentence structure, and punctuation. Many sentences are awkwardly constructed and lack clarity. The overall grammatical range is limited, and accuracy is inconsistent.
Revised Essay:
Rich countries often provide financial aid to poorer countries, but this approach does not always solve the issue of poverty. Therefore, I believe developed countries should offer other types of assistance rather than just financial aid. I partially agree with this statement because financial aid has both benefits and drawbacks.
Firstly, financial aid can be beneficial in the short term. It can help poorer countries address immediate needs such as food, healthcare, and infrastructure. For example, financial aid can fund emergency relief efforts during natural disasters or pandemics. However, financial aid alone is not sufficient for long-term development.
One major issue with financial aid is that it does not necessarily lead to sustainable growth. Money alone cannot develop a government or country. Instead, advancements in technology and entrepreneurship are crucial for development. Developed countries can support poorer countries by investing in local businesses and setting up multinational corporations (MNCs). This approach can create employment opportunities and stimulate economic growth. For instance, if a tech company from a rich country opens a branch in a developing country, it can provide jobs and transfer valuable skills to the local workforce.
Additionally, focusing on trade can significantly boost a developing country's economy. Rich countries can support poorer nations by importing agricultural products and other goods, which can enhance the export market of the developing country. This would help balance the global economy and prevent the rich from getting richer while the poor get poorer.
Moreover, supplying advanced machinery and technology can greatly aid development. For example, modern agricultural equipment can increase productivity and efficiency, leading to higher food production. In industries, automation and advanced processing machines can save time and increase output, benefiting the overall economy.
In conclusion, while financial aid from rich countries can address some immediate issues, it is not a comprehensive solution to poverty. Developed countries should also focus on providing technology, supporting local businesses, and promoting trade to help poorer countries achieve sustainable development.
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The pie charts show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008.
In 1958, adults spent 33 percents of their time working while travel to work takes 2 percents. They used 32 percents of their time sleeping and 8 percents for relaxing at home. Other interests or playing sports utilizes 6 percents of their time and going out with friends or family takes up 19 percents.
In 2008, adults spent 42 percents of their time working while travel to work increases up to 8 percents. They used 25 percents of their time sleeping and 13 percents for relaxing at home. Other interests or playing sports utilizes 8 percents of their time and going out with friends or family takes up 6 percents.
According to the two pie charts, working adults began to use more of their time working and time for travelling to work increases may be due to traffic. The charts show to be decreasing time spent for going out but a little up in time spent for interests or sports.
Task 2
Not enough percentage of students choose science subjects in university in most of the countries today. It may be due to students beginning to persue subjects such as economy or business with the boom of industrialization. Its effects on society can be decreased scientific research and projects and less scientists. While it is a positive impact on financial sector of a country which may lead to increase GDP, it shows a negative productiivity in science subjects. It means less scientific technicians.
The less scientists, the less scientific papers for the long-term run of intelligence of science. Medicines may become less effective with the reduced research group, we have to take in consideration that may be no new medicine will get invented. Because most medical subjects include science such as pharmacology, microbiology, physiology, it also means may be less doctors for the future. It is an alarming issue which raises heads of governments. In subjects such as botany and zoology, there may be less animals and plants found and researched about how each kind works in various sectors. Since agriculture and engineering are also science, less agriculture means less food sources and less engineers means less new builings.
At the same time, more people work in other sectors than science. More job opportunities will be created with increasing business and factories. Economy will portray increased in overall wealth of each country with more available resources. In the language sector, globalization will create more people who can speak more than one language or multilingual. In the culture sector, globalization makes mixed cultures of several regions.
There are some mistakes. don't use "percents", it's wrong in this case. use "percent" or "percentage"
for your task one writing, I made some small changes:
The pie charts show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country (in) X --> (from) 1958 (and) X --> (to) 2008.
In 1958, adults spent 33 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time working while travel to work takes 2 (percents) X --> (percent). They used 32 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time sleeping and 8 (percents) X --> (percent) for relaxing at home. Other interests or playing sports utilizes 6 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time and going out with friends or family takes up 19 (percents) X --> (percent).
In 2008, adults spent 42 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time working while travel to work increases up to 8 (percents) X --> (percent). They used 25 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time sleeping and 13 (percents) X --> (percent) for relaxing at home. Other interests or playing sports utilizes 8 (percents) X --> (percent) of their time and going out with friends or family takes up 6 (percents) X --> (percent).
According to the two pie charts, working adults began to use more of their time working. (end the sentence here) Time for (travelling) X --> (traveling) to work increases may be due to traffic. The charts show to be decreasing time spent (for) X --> (on) going out but (a little up) --> (went up) in time spent for interests or sports.
The 2nd and 3rd paragraph are very similar, I recommend trying to change the wording a bit. Use words like "increase, decrease, rising" etc in the 3rd paragraph, to show the difference between 1958 to 2008.
also use the years, e.g, "in ten years, the percentage has raised [number here]." so your sentences won't be too repetitive.
You also added "may be due to traffic" in your conclusion. Add that to the 3rd paragraph instead, the conclusion is only for a review of your text.
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The diagraw shows how rain water is collected by drains in the houses and goes through the water filter to the storage tank. Then the stored water undergoes water treatment with chemicals. After that, it is supplied to the houses as drinking water. So, it goes through three main processes, that is, first, filtering, second, storing and third, treatment. It is the water process in an Australian town. Amount of rain water collected in not specified and how much capacity the storage tank can be filled is not mentioned either. And the chemicals used for water treatment may be any kind because it is not described.
Task 2
I partially agree. Because you can teach children by team work projects or assignments too. There are many kinds of team sports such as football, basketball, hockey, rugby, baseball, and so on. When children play team sports, they will learn how to cooperate and work effectively by agreeing with other team members and discussing how to win. But still, you can learn cooperation outside school as well. In a certain way, each child has family and they can learn team work with family members too. At school, apart from sports, they can have team assignments by working together. Consider, for example, you give the child an assignment with two other members to work with. That will lead to the child searching for two other members for the assignment and begin the assignment with the team. There may be disagreement among team members but they have to go through it to do perfect cooperation. They will learn how to overcome not seeing eye to eye with each other and after that, get good team play. A good team consists of members learning how to support each other as they play the game. If someone is missing in some department, the other will fill in. He or she can do the work that is needed to be done by missing member as a substitute. This is how they will learn to implement each other with their tasks in a group or team while keeping individual characteristics and skills of a team play.
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The diagraw shows how rain water is collected by drains in the houses and goes through the water filter to the storage tank. Then the stored water undergoes water treatment with chemicals. After that, it is supplied to the houses as drinking water. So, it goes through three main processes, that is, first, filtering, second, storing and third, treatment. It is the water process in an Australian town. Amount of rain water collected in not specified and how much capacity the storage tank can be filled is not mentioned either. And the chemicals used for water treatment may be any kind because it is not described.
Task 2
I partially agree. Because you can teach children by team work projects or assignments too. There are many kinds of team sports such as football, basketball, hockey, rugby, baseball, and so on. When children play team sports, they will learn how to cooperate and work effectively by agreeing with other team members and discussing how to win. But still, you can learn cooperation outside school as well. In a certain way, each child has family and they can learn team work with family members too. At school, apart from sports, they can have team assignments by working together. Consider, for example, you give the child an assignment with two other members to work with. That will lead to the child searching for two other members for the assignment and begin the assignment with the team. There may be disagreement among team members but they have to go through it to do perfect cooperation. They will learn how to overcome not seeing eye to eye with each other and after that, get good team play. A good team consists of members learning how to support each other as they play the game. If someone is missing in some department, the other will fill in. He or she can do the work that is needed to be done by missing member as a substitute. This is how they will learn to implement each other with their tasks in a group or team while keeping individual characteristics and skills of a team play.
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The graph shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. The gray line indicates visiting to the lakes and about 10 thousand visitors in 1987, about 25 thousand visitors in 1992,40 thousand visitors in 1997, about 75 thousand visitors in 2002 and about 50 thousand visitors in 2007 went. The orange line indicates visiting to the mountains and in 20 thousand visitors in 1987, about 25 thousand visitors in 1992, and 30 thousand visitors in 1997 and 2002, and about 35 thousand visitors in 2007 went. The blue line indicates visiting to the coast and in 40 thousand visitors in 1987, about 35 thousand visitors in 1992, 50 thousand visitors in 1997, 60 thousand visitors in 2002 and about 75 thousand visitors in 2007 went. In 1987, the gray line is the lowest, the orange line in the middle and the blue line at the top. In 2007, the orange line is the lowest, the gray line in the middle and the blue line at the top. Visitors going to the coast shows a dip in 1992, but increases later up to 2007. Visitors going to the lakes increases up to 2002 but decreases back in 2007. Visitors going to the mountains increases all the way.
Task 2
I think it is positive development for top athletes but negatives for everyone. Building specialised facilites to train top athletes can lead to achieving top international sports scores which is positive and top athletes can do training in those facilities for extra hours or number of days. For example, providing a football stadium for footballers and boats for oarsmen. But for everyone, having little or no sports facilities can drive up to negativity in everyone's overall health which lead up to decreased human resources in a country. That is not acceptable from a country's point of view. People should have average gyms available at least where they can spend their free time to do for example, building muscles, and building stamina to be able to withstand tiredness. But all the same, people can use natural environment to do sports. For example, using mountains for hiking and rivers for boating. From that point of view, that is not really negative in reality. However still, it is the responsibility of the government of a country to support everyone in their health to increase their productivity for increasing a country's GPA. In my opinion, a country should help both top athletes and average citizens by providing specialised sports facilities for both which will implement their growth and development, that is, a country's indicator of wealth and resources. To sum up, providing top athletes alone is not bad, nevertheless, a country comprises of not only athletes but also normal citizens so, providing for both will benefit a country.
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The bar chart describes changes about the percentage of people born in Australia and outside Australia living in cities,towns and rural areas between 1995 and 2010. In 1995, 50 percentage of people born in Australia live in cities, 20 percentage of people born in Australia live in towns and 30 percentage of people born in Australia live in rural areas. On the other hand, 60 percentage of people born outside Australia live in cities, about 15 percentage of people born outside Australia live in towns and 40 percentage of people born outisde Australia live in rural areas. In 2010, about 62 percentage of people born in Australia live in cities, about 18 percentage of people born in Australia live in towns and about 18 percentage of people born in Australia live in rural areas. Likewise, 80 percentage of people born outside Australia live in cities, about 10 percentage of people born outside Australia live in towns and about 4 percentage of people born outside Australia live in rural areas.
Task 2
I agree. Rich countries or developed countries give money to poorer countries or undeveloped countries but that alone would not satisfy. Rich countries should give other types of help such as medicines, medical equipments, educational services and technological help. For example, a developed country like the United States engages in a lot of activities to help poor countries by giving financial aid and providing them with equipments for higher technology. Giving financial aid alone would not help the poor countries solve poverty because they do not have the knowledge to use money efficiently and effectively. They would spend so much in one sector and too less in others. For instance, they would invest all in military ministry which leave little money for other important departments such as educational ministry and health ministry. For example, our country, Myanmar, has recently undergone coup by military. As a result, a majority of students in governmental schools and universites and officers in governmental departments do civil disobedience movement which means they leave their schools and offices. They went to other countries to study abroad and work in another country. That causes brain drain which is rather unfortunate for the country. This brings the country backwards and it becomes poorer. So, it is essential for other developed countries such as the United States and the United Kingdom to give other than financial aid to improve the wellbeings of myanmar citizens by helping them with sanctions for military and their governmental sectors and giving a handful lot of tools to work with the situation.
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Wealthy countries often provide poverty-stricken countries with money, however it does not solve the problem entirely. Because of that, rich countries need to come up with different types of actions for the undeveloped nations not just only providing them with financial aid.
I completely agree with this idea and I think the types of help should include developing of new work places, opening of schools, universities and so on.
One of the main reasons for the suffering of some countries from poverty is the lack of work places. People should work and thus gain money, but if country has few places for people to work, then it will be hard for them to live, not only the citizens will have money, but by that the country will improve both internally and externally.
The other point that I want to touch is increase in the number of schools and universities. One of the ways to be money free is education. By giving a healthy education to the children and youngs, the country can expect a gradual increase in the long term. For example, a research that conducted by a group of students shows how an education helps the countries to improve gradually, rather than a rapid increase.
In conclusion, I can say that, as much as I support providing poor countries with financial aid, I also think that the richer ones should take some steps for helping poor countries to be less dependent on wealthy countries in the long term, I think that will do good for both sides.
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The bar charts below compare the
proportion of people born in and beyond Australia during 15 years from 1995 to 2010. Overall, there was a noticeable increase in the population inhabiting urban areas outside Australia and a considerable decrease in the population living in towns and rural areas.
As presented in the first bar chart, approximately 50% of the residents in the megapolis were born in 1995, whereas in 2010 the number had a marginal growth up to roughly 65%. As for smaller regions, there was a negligible fall in citizens from 20% to about 18% in Australia, and as for the birth rate outside Australia, it remained fairly the same.
Taking a closer look at the village area, it is noteworthy that in 1995 relocation to the habitat outside Australia, accounting for 20%, surpassed those once settling in Australia, making up 40%. In 2010 the birth portion tremendously declined by half to 15% within the country and by 35% in remote places, from 40% to just a mere 5%.
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The bar charts below compare the
proportion of people born in and beyond Australia during 15 years from 1995 to 2010. Overall, there was a noticeable increase in the population inhabiting urban areas outside Australia and a considerable decrease in the population living in towns and rural areas.
As presented in the first bar chart, approximately 50% of the residents in the megapolis were born in 1995, whereas in 2010 the number had a marginal growth up to roughly 65%. As for smaller regions, there was a negligible fall in citizens from 20% to about 18% in Australia, and as for the birth rate outside Australia, it remained fairly the same.
Taking a closer look at the village area, it is noteworthy that in 1995 relocation to the habitat outside Australia, accounting for 20%, surpassed those once settling in Australia, making up 40%. In 2010 the birth portion tremendously declined by half to 15% within the country and by 35% in remote places, from 40% to just a mere 5%.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Answer
There are many rich countries give money for many poor and week economy countries for their betterment and as a financial aids. They don't give money in cash but they provide fund for education, and divine blessings health and for many purposes. I disagree this statement because poor countries have many problem to spend this money for their public facilities.
First we discuss about the problem of poor countries and under developed countries. Lack of Education is big problem of poor countries because due to lack of fund government don't have much and enough educational facilities for people. Education is very important for any nation to survive but if any nation doesn't have education opportunities by their government then they face many challenges in their life. Health facilities are also cause of underdeveloped nation. Poor countries don't have much medical resources for their public. In poor countries public office holder are not honest and trustable. They don't spend whole fund for facilitate to their people. Foreign countries don't have check and balance their fund which they give poor countries for betterment of its people. As we think about polio Vaccine bill gate give fund many poor countries for polio vacination.
Unicef international NGO is give million of dollars to many poor nations for education sectors.
Their aim is educate the people of poor nations. When poor people are educate then they will promote thief family as well as their countries. WHO is give million of dollars for health facility to many poor counties. Many Arabs countries are also denote money to poor countries for public's health, education and many other sectors.
In conclusion, many big and developed countries give financial aids to many poor people for reduces of their poverty. And make their lives better.
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The issues of international aid and effectiveness in the fight against poverty is multifaceted and complex. Therefore, financial assistance from developed countries to poor nations was the main one to eliminate global poverty.
In this essay I will argue that developed countries can invest in poor countries but this cannot stimulate economic growth also developing countries may be addicted on richer countries, rich nations should research alternative ways to support developing nations.
On one hand, its undeniable that the provision of financial aid hasn't been effectivee to eradicate poverty in many developing countries. This aid can help alliviate many financial problems in the country so that country distributes assistance to diffrent sectors such as education, millitary and infrastructure.
On the other hand, financial assistance can be addictive device so that this doesn't happen richers need to invest to other projects and give freedom growth to poorer countries. For example, support on trading ways provide place to competition with other countries and provide new technologies exchange between countries and investment in healthcare can create constant and productive growth in the long term.
In my opinion, rich nations shoud find balace betwen this views and come up with new approaches. Investment in education, healthcare can be the best way to economic growth. Also developed countries should supporter but give encouragement for poorer nations to be on the same level with other countries.
In conclusion, financial aid can be important to solve poverty, developed nations should create starategic ways to growth in the long term.
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Is it a positive or negative trend that certain nations focus on constructing specialised training facilities for elite athletes rather than offering sports facilities accessible to the general public in order to excel in international sports. This trend can have both postive and negative perspectives, and this essay will discuss both views and then presenting a personal opinion .
On one hand, proponents argue that investing in specialised facilities for top athletes can lead to significant benefits. By providing state-of-the-art equipment and resources, athletes can receive the best training possible, which may result in improved performance and increased chances of success in international sports competitions. This approach can also attract talented athletes from around the world, as they seek out countries with the best training facilities. Furthermore, the success of top athletes can inspire and motivate others to pursue sports and strive for excellence.
On the other hand, critics argue that focusing solely on specialised facilities neglects the broader population's need for accessible sports facilities. By prioritising the training of top athletes, governments may be neglecting the health and well-being of the general public. Accessible sports facilities can promote physical activity and a healthy lifestyle among people of all ages and abilities. Moreover, providing sports facilities for everyone can foster a sense of community and social cohesion, as people from different backgrounds come together to engage in sports and recreational activities.
In my opinion, while it is important to support and invest in top athletes, it is equally crucial to provide sports facilities that are accessible to everyone. Specialised facilities can undoubtedly contribute to the success of elite athletes, but it should not come at the expense of the general public's well-being. Governments should strive to strike a balance by allocating resources to both specialised facilities and community sports facilities. This way, they can cater to the needs of top athletes while also promoting physical activity and inclusivity among the wider population.
Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
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The pie charts illustrate the information about what working time yougster spend in diffrent activites in particular countries in the year of 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it can be seen that both the charts adults more time spend on sleeping and working while they less time spended on traveling to work.
To begin, in 1958 adults most time spended on working at 33% then in 2008 they incerese 10% around at 42% respectively. sleeping 32% and 25% consequently.while adults realxing at home its increase 5% in 2008 at 8% to 13% respectively. The period from 1958 to 2008 travel to work a sharp rose in the youngster activites time period list .
Additionaly, in 1958 going with friends and familys was adults spendede more time at 19% while down up in 2008 at 6% respectively. adults spended ther time on sports activites at 6% in 1958 and at 8% in 2008.
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Although some people are not satisfied with their work, they ready to work in a companies that would occupy them with high salary job. However, I believe that job satisfaction is important with its advantages of providing productivity and avoiding health related issues for long term. This essay will highlight the issues if workers prioritize high-paying job than contentment, and explain why job satisfaction is important.
Still, most workers don’t consider the importance of fulfillment in their workplaces and be reckless about their company’s setting. Individuals, who are working in the environment they do not want, interact with their colleagues or manager every day that are the part of this environment, which means there is a possibility of getting a trouble with them because of being nervous. On the other hand, this movement can also affect on company itself. Because such workers, with the notion of “job satisfaction is not necessary “, are occupying workplaces of other alternatives that are encouraged to do their favourite job.
The first reason why workers should choose job satisfaction is it can help them to demonstrate their full potential, which would in turn can cause to promotion. For Instance, a manager in a particular company is not promoted when he or she came to the company at first. It happens when a worker is productive and deserve to be. Additionally, job contentment can avoid early presence of various health issues, causing stress such as heart disease, blood pressure or headache, as worker can do better without stress in its preferred environment.
Overall, considering there is a high possibility of appearing problems such as getting in trouble with colleagues and objecting in a way company because of working without job satisfaction, I would be disagree with the idea that “Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction”.
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I would estimate that this essay would likely fall within the Band 5 to Band 6 for Task 1 and Band 4 to Band 5 range for Task 2.
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The chart presents the change in the proportion of people living in urban, rural, and town areas who were born in and outside Australia between 1995 and 2010.
In general, it was seen that most of the people of the world were born in cities compared to towns and rural areas in the years 1995 and 2010.
From the chart, it is clear that in the year 1995, the highest population 60% and 50% born in the cities inside and outside Australia respectively. While people living in towns are the least occupying 20% and 10% whereas, the population of rural areas is 30% and 40% in Australia and outside Australia respectively.
On the other hand, in the year 2010, 80% of the total population was born in cities outside Australia which is more than the people born in Australia which is slightly more than 60%. Similarly, people born in Australia in towns and rural areas are the same having 18%. whereas, people born outside Australia in towns were slightly more than people born in rural areas having around 15% and 10% respectively.
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There were lots of grammatical mistakes, please check the tenses as well
There were numerous grammar mistakes, and the tenses needed to be checked.
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Based on the information provided, I would estimate that this essay would likely fall within the Band 6 to Band 7 range for IELTS.
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"The maps provided illustrate the layout of the current industrial area in the Norbiton town and the plan for its future development to convert it into a housing society. While the overall layout will remain consistent, additional services have been added to accommodate the residents
All the factories are planned to be converted into housing schemes. The factory currently located in the south-west of the main circle will be relocated as a residence building to North-West of the circle with a few km of distance. New shops to accommodate the people will be built in the south-west of the main circle. The two factories located at the east of the main circle are planned to transform into a single residence building. Whereas, a new medical centre will also be open in the south-east of the main round-about, to assist the medical emergencies of the locals.
The empty place between the two factories in the north-east will be converted into a playground for children to do fun activities. A school will also be built to the straight end to the east of the main circle passing the residences. Additionally, a new path will also be built to the north of the main circle passing the river to the farmland, where more apartment buildings will be constructed."
impressive, used a high level of lexis but could have been more careful to avoid some very small grammatical mistakes.
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"The maps provided illustrate the layout of the current industrial area in the Norbiton town and the plan for its future development to convert it into a housing society. While the overall layout will remain consistent, additional services have been added to accommodate the residents
All the factories are planned to be converted into housing schemes. The factory currently located in the south-west of the main circle will be relocated as a residence building to North-West of the circle with a few km of distance. New shops to accommodate the people will be built in the south-west of the main circle. The two factories located at the east of the main circle are planned to transform into a single residence building. Whereas, a new medical centre will also be open in the south-east of the main round-about, to assist the medical emergencies of the locals.
The empty place between the two factories in the north-east will be converted into a playground for children to do fun activities. A school will also be built to the straight end to the east of the main circle passing the residences. Additionally, a new path will also be built to the north of the main circle passing the river to the farmland, where more apartment buildings will be constructed."
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I think you misunderstood the first task. you were shown the proportion of people living in cities, towns, and rural areas, not the percentage change. I would also try and say if the change was an increase or a decrease. also try and make comparisons between two different sets of bar graphs, rather than just within one set e.g. comment on how the percentage of people born in Australia in cities increased from 50% in 1995 to around 65% in 2010
For the second task, you made a lot of good points. I would say that when talking about increasing employment, developing infrastructure, and providing education, try to have different explanations as to why this helps improve the financial state of the country, rather than repeating the same point about increasing employment rates. Also, you had some spelling mistakes so check those. you also said that you don't completely agree or disagree with the statement, but you only gave points on why you agree.
In the first task, the question was: 'The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.'
It clearly says that 'changes about the percentage of people'. i don't think my answer is wrong, is it?
I agree with you on the second task.
oh yeah i think you're right. question is worded badly tbh. But the point I made about making comparisons between two sets of data should still apply.
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The line graph comprares three overseas groups in term of thousands of visitors to three different areas in a European over a 20-year period.
Overall, it can be seen that the number of the coast, the mountains and the lakes all increased sharply, it is noticeable that the highest number is the coast.
Regarding the mountains, at beginning the period, starting at 20 thousand then this number went up to 30 thousand in 1997. After that it saw a slight rise about under 40 thousands in 2007. There was a drammatic increase in the figure for the lakes from 1987 to 2002, was 75 thousand. However, after 4 years, that number fell considerably by 25 thousands.
The number of the coast stood at 40 thousand in 1987, after that a slight downward trend was seen in that number, about 35 thousand in 1992. It is noticeabel, the figure for the coast grew steeply and lead with 75 thousand at the end of period.
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The chart illustrates the proportions of citizens born in and outside Australia residing in urban, rural and town from 1995 to 2010.
Overall, citizens born in and outside Australia that lived in cities from 1995 to 2010 fluctuated reaching the highest of all other regions while those that lived in the town that were born in and outside Australia decreased dramatically . Also citizens that lived in rural areas slightly increased before declining at the end.
For those citizens that were born in Australia in 1995 had a increased proportion of approximately 50% compared to those in 2010 with about 60% while those born outside Australia that lived the city were 60% in 1995 and increased to 80% in 2010. For those that lived in the town that were born in Australia were 20% which drastically fall under 20% in 2010 and those outside Australia were below 20% in both 1995 and 2010.
Citizens that lived in rural area that were born in Australia in 1995 were around 30% which falls to below 20% in 2010 and those born outside the country were below 20% in 1995 and took the smallest percentage in 2010 of all the others
Task 2
Advanced countries should render alternative help to under advanced countries aside financial assistance .
I strongly agree that advanced countries should not only help under advanced countries with financial aid but also help them in terms of providing them with latest technologies amenities that could benefit the country and also information that could help the government move from the level they are to another level which would help the country.
Helping the country boost the economy by teaching them about what could bring revenue to the country . For an instance , if an under developed country does not know the usefulness of limestone, golds, diamonds which are in their country there is no way the country will be developed but when an advanced country teaches them on how to put those natural resources materials into use , it will not only help the country but also the citizens of the country.
Again, providing latest technologies amenities to the under developed country would be a great help as it will increase their knowledge on how to increase productivity by the use of latest technologies. For instance, if a country know how to make use of tractors to make heaps and plant instead of human labors it will increase the number of production the country would make in a year thereby increasing the country economy.
Also, providing them with information on foreign exchange would also help an under developed country as it will connect the country with other countries internationally which in turn boost the country economy. For example, people in the under developed country would have the access to buy and sell from other countries, they would be able to exchange goods from one country to another , exchanging different currencies at their disposal which in turn increase the country's trade.
In conclusion, advanced countries should render alternative help to under advanced countries aside from financial assistance as money can finish anytime but knowledge and information last longer.
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Task 1:
This chart shows the percentage of people and the changes, who were born in Australia and the other place which were outside of the Australia, particularly who were living in urban, vellages and down towns in 1995 and 2010
The chart which is located on left side is describing the people's place of living in different categories. First of all, high percentage which is near to 55% of the people were living in the cities in 1995 within the Australia, and next is the rural areas which 25% of people were living on that time. The last one is the towns around 20% were residents. In contrast, in the same year which is 1995 the people who were living outside of the Australia is likr 60% in cities, 40% in rural areas, and 10% in towns.
On the other hand, in 2010 which quite various, and it is estimated as following. to began with inside of the Australia, around 63% have been living in cities, and 17% were living in towns and rural areas which are the same. But, let's see the people who have been living outside of this country, in the cities almost 80% were living, 7% in rural areas, and 10% in town
Task 2:
The world is consist of many different countries and variety of people and environment, so it has some places which is worth than other parts. Moreover, some countries are developed and many others are developing, and even there are some countries that they don not have access to all facilities and resourses. I totally disagree with the statement which is explained that the money does not solve the financial problems like poverty. I have couple of reasons for this which I will show you on the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, wealthy countries can help the poor governments through the financial issues. If the government get rich, it can provide job opportunities for it's people. In this case not only the people get safe of poverty, but also the country get the chance to build the infrastructure and many other different factores.
On the other hand, the mean sourses of the income of rich countries are the envestments, new inventions, and to they build their business to deal throughount the world. Thus, if the unwealthy countries recieve some cash helps, they would do their own business and inovation which can be one the factors to reduce the poverty and famine. For instance, many countries are making their enterpreneurs and they send their people to go in couple of the cities to meet and check their management.
In conclusion, nowadays many rich states are taking hands of the poor nations to help them to get rid of the straggling with their finance. Eventually, those countries who are well known and has the big power is not expected to help other countries in any other types of materials, unless money. Money is the life saver in todays market.
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The below bar chart specifies percentage of people who were born inside and outside australia in different places like cities towns and rural areas from 1995 to 2010.
In 1995 most of the people were born in cities in outside australia with a percentage of 60.Also greater number of people were born outside australia in rural areas.However, percentage of people born in australia were greater in towns.
in 2010 80 percent of people were born in cities outside australia where as the percentage of towns and rural areas were greater in australia.
If we look to both 1995 and 2010 graphs it shows that percentage of people in cities outside australia were greater in both durations however, in 2010 people born in towns and rural areas were greater in australia than outside australia.It shows that large number of people were shifted from ouside australia to rural areas of inside australia.
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Sports are generalized for every human well being. In my perspective, those countries which achieve international sports by creating specialised facilities to train top athletes is for making the economically build up. In other ways , providing sports elements . the people can use for their health well bieng. Nowadays, the people are using more advancely of sports facilities like indoor and outdoor sport.
One of the countries economic guarantee is sports culture . Moreover, it brings the most expenditure for talented athletes. If there is one top certified athlete in a country it will bring the long term impact on a particular person as well as for the nation. The nation would be focused by media, empowerment programms , and so on. For instance, in India , the famous boxer , Mrs. Mary Kom , she won the olympic medal for the nation. That moment of reality makes the nation wholesome of greatness. After, that the female boxers would gradually grow up to learn boxing because the influential of famous boxer, increases boxing classes, boxing competetions and direct entry to the olympic like games competetions and builds up the women empowerment programs.
Secondly , the sports provided for everyone would develop the health based communities. The reason is sports would give mentally, physically, healthy well being so it will be great for every people who choose sports . The sports elements can be gym, outdoor sports, indoor sports, passion related sports and so on . This would create lack of stress and can be a good mentally well disciplined . Moreover, people can find the perfect good habit routine in their own lifestyle . For instance, some surveys shows that those person which actively participate in a particular sports especially in physically activised sports their brains are more intellect than non physically activised person.
The above mentioned dialects is one of the nations's economic and human resource increment is definitely the competetive games. Every people has right to do every physical exersices becuase that grows the health atmosphere in all over the environment . In my percpective , I support that physical activities should provide for every persons only then the human can grow more actively than being in a hospitals .
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Task1:
The bar chart describes the distribution of people living in cities, towns, or urban areas, among those who have been born inside and outside of Australia has changed between 1995 and 2010. Overall, the trends show a decreasing proportion of people living in towns and rural areas between 1995 and 2010, resulting in the proportion of city dwellers to increase, while also maintaining its position in representing the majority of the population across the board.
The population of people born outside of Australia have been migrating to cities from towns and rural areas, increasing the percentage of people living in cities from 65% in 1995 to a whopping 80% in 2019. The proportion of people living towns and rural areas were equal at about 15%, but decreased by 5 and 10% respectively. In 2010, only 15% of those born in Australia live in towns and a mere 5% live in rural areas.
Among the population of people born inside Australia on the other hand, between 1995 and 2010 the proportion of people living in the city saw a slightly smaller increase from 50% to 60%. Unlike those born outside Australia, a higher proportion of people live in towns and rural areas, those living in rural areas make up the second largest proportion of people, and saw a 10% increase, from 30% to 40% in 2010. The proportion of people living in towns decreased from 20% to 10% in 2010.
Task 2:
I agree that aid richer, more developed countries is instrumental in the success and progression of poorer countries, and that this aid is not merely monetary but rather other kinds of aid. Although financial aid can be helpful in boosting the economy of poorer, developing nations, there is the matter of the way in which the money is used. It cannot always be ensured that the funds are being utilized appropriately for the success of the country. An exchange of information on the front of socioeconomic policies and strategies could better optimize the use of these funds. Lastly, policies, collaborative efforts, and interventions can aid in ensuring the country progresses to the point where external aid is no longer needed.
Richer nations are at a point where they they derive the benefit of decades of knowledge, honing down the tools of the trade, developing social institutions that set up their success. This has resulted in social, political, and economic benefits that benefit its residents. Poorer nations do not have the same wealth of information - in order to progress, they must navigate the unchartered waters that is presented by its specific geography, resources, political situation, and economic situation. I believe richer nations taking on the challenge to take on a holistic approach at developing the nation on all fronts is the best move forward. Having long-term goals that include programs targeted towards young professionals, governmental subsidies and regulations, and other such self-sustaining efforts, are some ways that can boost the local economy.
The philosophy is akin to the saying "Give a man a fish, and he eats for a day. Teach a man to fish, and he eats till he dies". Laying the foundation for an underdeveloped or developing nation for its path to success can be a long and dwindling process, but can be assisted greatly with help of all forms.
Dear neha,
This is the correction of your Task 1 Writing.
"The bar chart describes how the distribution of people living in cities, towns, or urban areas among those who have been born inside and outside of Australia has changed between 1995 and 2010. Overall, the trends show a decreasing proportion of people living in towns and rural areas between 1995 and 2010, resulting in the proportion of city dwellers increasing while also maintaining its position as representing the majority of the population across the board.
The population of people born outside of Australia has been migrating to cities from towns and rural areas, increasing the percentage of people living in cities from 65% in 1995 to a whopping 80% in 2019. The proportion of people living in towns and rural areas was equal at about 15% but decreased by 5 and 10%, respectively. In 2010, only 15% of those born in Australia lived in towns, and a mere 5% lived in rural areas.
On the other hand, among the population of people born inside Australia, between 1995 and 2010, the proportion of people living in the city saw a slightly smaller increase, from 50% to 60%. Unlike those born outside Australia, a higher proportion of people live in towns and rural areas; those living in rural areas make up the second largest proportion of people and saw a 10% increase, from 30% to 40% in 2010. The proportion of people living in towns decreased from 20% to 10% in 2010."
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The graph below illustrate the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 1007
Overall the coast is the area which have the most sustainable overseas visitors developed in five years . However there is some problem in two year from 1987 to 1992 which cause the quantity of the coast visitors decrease from 40 thousands of visitors to nearly 35 thousands , after this period the number is considerably go up in four year and reach 75 thousands of people in 2007 . On the other hand, the mountains is the lowest overseas visitors in three area with insignificant change in five years and remain stable . The last area is the lakes which have the dramatic growth in first three period of years and jump up to 75 thousands of visitors in 2002 , therefore it suddenly decrease in five year after the period and just estimated 50 thousands of people in 2007
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THE CHART DEPICTS THOSE BORN INSIDE AND OUTSIDE AUSTRALIA IN THE YEARS 1995-2010. IT ALSO ILLUSTRATES THE LOW AND HIGH NUMBERS ARE BORN IN DIFFERENT AREAS.
OVERALL, THE LARGEST NUMBER OF BIRTHS IN THE YEAR 1995 INSIDE AND OUTSIDE OF AUSTRALIA ARE IN CITIES, FOLLOWED BY RURAL AREAS AND THE LOWEST RATE ARE IN TOWNS. THERE WAS DIFFERENCE, IN THE YEAR 2010 IT WAS ALSO SHOWN THAT BIRTHS IN CITIES WERE HIGH, WHICH INCREASED BY 20-25 PERCENT BORN INSIDE AND OUTSIDE AUSTRALIA. BUT THIS YEAR THE NUMBER OF BIRTH IN TOWNS AND RURAL AREAS DECREASED.
THE NUMBERS OF BIRTHS INSIDE AND OUTSIDE AUSTRALIA IN CITIES IN THE YEAR 1995-2010 CONTINUES TO INCREASE, THERE WAS A CHANCE OF INCREASE AND DECREASE IN BIRTHS IN THE YEAR 1995 IN TOWNS AND RURAL AREAS, WHILE IN THE YEAR 2010 THERE IS EQUALITY OF PERCENTAGE OF BIRTHS THAT BORN IN AUSTRALIA AND APPARENTLY A 5 PERCENT DECREASED IN BIRTHS OUTSIDE OF AUSTRLIA.
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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table depicts the changes in people who travelled internationally (Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe and the Middle East) in 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005. (million).
Overall, the total number of travellers increased significantly between these years. Also, their most visited continent is Europe, and the Middle East was the least visited one.
The number of visitors to Africa rose slightly from 18.2 million to 28.7 million between 1990 and 2005. As for travellers to America, the count grew by over a half from 1990 to 1995 and fluctuated to 118.2 million and 113.2 million, respectively, in 2000 and 2005.
The number of people who visited Asia and the Pacific showed a constant growth of approximately 20 million over the years. For Europe, the number of travellers increased dramatically between 1990 and 1995, from 280.2 million to 390.3 million. Although in 2000 and 2005, the count increased slightly to 393.2 million and 400.2 million, respectively. In addition, the number of people visiting the Middle East remained steady during the period.
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Developed nations are frequently seen donating money to developing countries but it does not seem to solve deprivation. Therefore, it is advised that underdeveloped nations should be provided with alternative forms of help. I completely agree with providing aid rather than money.
Firstly, when money is given to undeveloped countries it might help them in the short term but if we think about the long term it does not help as money does not last long we need to survive. When people get donations of money they use it they use it to pay rent or any temporary costs. For example, in 2015, when there was a massive earthquake in Nepal most of the countries donated money but it was only enough for about 2months after that it was very hard for them to survive.
Moreover, the developed countries should mainly focus on long-term help like education or health. If places like health care and schools were built then it help both children and give employment opportunities to people which benefits in two ways. When younger ones get a proper education it will help them for a lifetime rather than getting money for a short period. Secondly, it will also help in the stability of government as when money is given there might be chances that government people might corrupt that money. However, before providing any sort of aid, it would be better to provide financial help as it is said money solves all problems.
In conclusion, I favor the opinion that rich countries should provide different benefits rather than money as it might help with employment opportunities.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is often argued that weathier nations providing money to under-developed nations are not sufficent to solve poverty. Hence, rich countries should opt to lend a helping hand to poverty-stricken countries apart from financial support. I strongly disagree with this suggestion as money is the ultimate basement which can provide better hospital facilities and can dramatically increase employbility rates.
The first reason for pointing out money as the best aid for assistance is its provision to improve basic facilities, especially in hospitals. Owing to lack of hospital facilities, death rates are becoming common in under-developed countries. Therfore, providing financial help would help such contries to enhance their hospital atmosphere with latest technology oriented equipments, which can make the country less prone to diseases and improved healthier society. A recent research conducted in a poor country concludes that about 54% of people endure various health problems, which were not able to get cured only because of their lack of enough hospital resources.
Secondly, Finance can play a major role in declination of unemployabilty rates, which is the major concern faced by poor countries. Therfore, creating more job opportunities for the people is integral for upbringing of under-developed nations to developed nations. In addition to that, jobs have enough potential to meet basic requirements of people. As a prime example, in India, government with the help of assistance from a foreign country initiated several employbility programs that gradually inclined their employability rates and made the country to be a part of the list of developing countries.
To elucidate, providing money alone can be helpful to poor nations in creating better hospital infrastructure and tools as well as it can substantially increment employbility rates.
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In this bar chart describes percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born in outside Australia.Summarise the information there is percentage of Australia living in urban,rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Overall,It is a clear that In 1995 and 2010 the people born in Australia and outside hit a pick.The rural ares in 1995 represented the highest persentage than 2010.The persentage of towns declined steadly from the 1995 to 2010.According to the figures the bar chart rocketed in 1995 and 2010 in rural areas.Also reached the lowest point in the rural areas in 2010 people where born in Australia.
The people born outside in Australia in 2010 was dramatic 80 percent compare with people which born in 1995. The lowest point was in 2010 which were born in rural areas 5 percent.Also in 1995 people in rural areas gradually increased
In this day lots of developed countries help to the other poor countries with financial aid.In my opinion it is totally right to help another poor country and people.Even if it does not solve the problem, it will give the laugh to another person.
Firstly,I want to say that it would strengthen relationship among the countries.Most of us know how is vital to keep friendship around the countries.Especially for the people who really want only pice of worldlife without any war.In 21st century we see and hear about wars in the countries,and we are really afraid about them.Conseqantly I woulad prefer lots of unions around the countries.
Secondly,I totally believe that humanity and kindness above all and i know everyone agrees with me.In the development countries like USA, and in the other countries in Europe have several types of volunteers.Volunteers want to show to the world that we live in one big country which is cold 'earth'.I think it is nothing if you have an intention to help them just join to them,instead of money you will get the big thanks from every one.
In conclusion, if you everything on your hand just help to another who is poorer than you.We can not predict our future life, who is know if we will be instead of them. Also we need to teach to other growung children to see the world with big love.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many individuals experience that these days they are overwhelmed with the choices. I completely agree with this, and in my opinion there are two factors that influence it, which are technology and Globalization.
In this era, many choices exist due to Technology, even for a basic activity such as ordering food became a complicated things to do. Technology provides various of platforms to help us ordering food, for instance It can be done by phone call, mobile apps and also by online website. However, these platforms brings on a distraction, as each of them offers a different kind of promotions, which lead us to confusion to make decisions. For example, back then people would simply just come to the restaurant and order their desired food, meanwhile today due to online food ordering system, customers oftenly contemplate when ordering food. In addition, there are some alternatives like Go-food, Grab-food and Shopee-food, where they also offer different kind of discounts and cashback.
Similar to the technology advancement, globalization also plays a role on the occurrence of choices that were exist today. In a F&B industry, globalization makes it easier for restaurants to find ingredients and it increased the number of potential vendors for many restaurants. However, this also means that we are faced with numerous vendor that offer different choices and mass of food alternative to serve. Restaurants once limited to local farms for their produce needs, now can have their ingredients flown from anywhere. As a result, many newcomers in business restaurant are struggle to find the best supplier and trouble to set a menu, even though the potential of market seems to promising.
As a conclusion, I acknowledge to the argument that today many people are battling with the massive variations that were given and the reasons of that are due to Technology and Globalization.
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TASK 1
The bar chart illuastrate about the change happened in the Australia about the people were born and people who born outside the Australia,living in urban,rural and town in span of 15 years from 1995-2010.
In 1995 , The people born in cities of Australia is less than the people born outsiude the Australia.When we compare the birth rate in towns.Native people birth rate is high (20%) and outside Australia birth rate is low which is below 20%.In rural areas, people born in australia is low less than 40% and people born outside Australia is higher which is 40%.
In 2010, The people born in cities of Australia is above 60% but the people born outside Australia is higher than those who born in Australia which is equal to 80% .The birth percentage of people in Australia for both towns and Rural areas are equal in percentage .It is among 0-20%.People who born outside Australia are higher in Towns when compared to Rural areas.
Comparetively , the birth percentage of cities of outside Australia s lesser than people born in year 2010.There is a gradual increase of 20%.People born in Australia is gradually decreased in both towns and Rural Areas in 2010.Rural areas birth rate outside the Australia is least among all years and areas which is among 01-10%.
In conclusion, The birth rate was drastically decreased in 2010 when compared to birth rate in 1995 exceprt the percentage of increase in cities.
TASK 2
Rich countries provide funds to poor countries in order to develop the nation and solve the poverty of country.In my opinion, developed countries should provide funds to poor countires but instead of providing only financial support they also consider to provide the infrastructure and moral support for development of country.
First , the developed countries fund will help the poor countries to overvcome their basic needs and sustain in lives.The financial help not sufficient for complete development of country.For instance , countries like China provide loans and funds to countries which need financial support . Make a trade business in order to decrease the poverty rate in poor countries .Such facilities like introducing the education sector projects ,decrease the charges over exported products , providing good infrastruture and many more .
Second , Rich countries should bring some innovative ideas and thoughts in to implementation in poor countries which help those countries to increase their GDP(gross domestic product).These GDP raise will increase countries economical status.For example , let us consider India , In 2014 Indian government implemented the strategy of imposing the rules , ban on china imports and encouraging the local products .Indian government made changes in taxation guidelines and rules which help india to boom their economy and made india as 5th richest country in the world.
Finally, Countries should share the technologies with other countries which will helpful to develop the nation .For example ,In 20th century Russia shared the rocket technology with the india such as providing the rocket engines to India space agency . technology sharing helped india to develop their own technology now . Such as chandrayan 1,2 success . Which helped india to get external business from all parts of wolrd.It will dradually increase in future days.
In conclusion , the financial support will help poor countries only in fullfulling the basic needs such as food , water and shelter But the technology sharimg and building infrastruture will lead poor countries to build their own source of income . Automatically countries will come out of poverty.
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Part 1:
The two given charts illustrate the birth rate of people who were born in and outside Australia between the years of 1995 and 2010.
In 1995, we might see clearly that new born Australian citizens in big cities were always higher than the other two groups which are groups of towns and rural areas.
To be specific, cities' newborns occupied approximately 50% in Australia while this same group took 60% in big cities outside Australia. Meanwhile, the birth rate of people in Australia rural areas is 30% and slightly higher abroad which is 40%. The percentage of children who were born in Towns is always the lowest compared to other groups which are 20% inside Australia and are only 10% abroad.
In 2010, there was a big difference amongst the birth rate of these three groups. While the percentage of Cities' newborns are as highest as always which particularly 65% domestically while this rate is higher as usual which is 80% on total. Coincidentally, people born in Towns and Rural areas were equal which were around 18%. Meanwhile, the oversea birth rate in rurals is a half of being in town which are 10% and 5%.
Part 2:
While developed countries in the last decades have supported poor countries by dedicating financial aid to improve instant issues, the others have chosen to offer different ways to help. In my opinion, I believe both dedication are good depending on different purposes, nevertheless, I am more supporting the other types of helping poor countries, by this essay I am indicating specific reasons supporting my belief.
To begin with, instant financial aid is able to help poor countries in their rush situations such as starvation or environmental disasters. By this I mean, money source which comes at the right time would help poor countries better than anything, local citizens would be able to afford food and basic life demands, and authorities would have more opportunities to solve any potential risk issues such as robbery or violence which would be caused by poverty and the lack of food. For example, the United Nations has started a campaign of giving food and necessaries to Africa where poverty has been under-controlled in the last few years, in fact, these actions have saved several people from losing their lives.
On the other hand, as I mentioned earlier, supporting the developing countries in different ways besides financial aid would harvest several long-term benefits. To clarify this, some developed countries have offered education support and free health service and so on, which literally helped a certain poor country having more opportunities to develop themselves. For example, South East Asia are the countries heavily suffering damages from the colonization, since then, these countries were likely to have had the late steps on the general development. By receiving the support from developed countries who imposed the labor-exchange campaign to offer these Asian laborers better working opportunities on their land, as long as sending professional laborers to these developed countries to spread new techniques and science.
To sum up, while giving instant money is actually able to help the developed countries, offering other ways for supporting would be considered much more useful to them in a long-term strategy.
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The building of specialised facilities to train top athletes is a positive development because, less people have access to these facilities. A very good example is the track and filed sport. If more people had access to the track, it will then become crowded, making it difficult for these athletes who are competing on behalf of the country to properly focusand train. What makes training better is if you have people with the same zeal and mindset as you, training together rather than those who are there for leisure purposes. Not just that, if these facilities are used by non athletes who do not properly understand their uses, it becomes very likely to be damaged easily.
However, there are also drawbacks to this. Due to difficulty in accessibility, non athletes who enjoy sports and play for lesiure are neglected. Sports is a form of stress relief, when these facilities become prohibited to them, then it becomes a negative development. For example, the gym. This a specialised facility that not only enables people truly be themselves, it can help them be fit, loose weight, gain weight as well release of happy hormones (serotonin, endorphins), where not only top athletes should train, but non athletes as well. When restrictions are then placed on these facilities on non athletes, then it is not fair.
In conclusion, although restricting these facilities to non athletes may seem like a negative problem, it is for the benefit of the country. Government officials can be helpful by building ones that are mainly for leisure so that non athletes can also participate and feel included.
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Most of the esteemed schools focuses on the academics of the student. Many argue that practical and manual art skills should not be included in the school curriculum and the institutes should give importance to the written tests. In my opinion I totally disagree with the statement I contend that academics are the most important however, having a practical knowledge is more important which should be taught in schools. This essay will discuss why practical skills and manual art should taught in institutes.
Firstly, practical skills and manual art are the most important skills which need to be taught in institutes because that helps students gain concentration, problem solving, self appraisal which they cannot achieve these from the academics and written tests. For epitome in Narayan institutes they only concentrate on exams and their success which does not give any practical knowledge to the children where they cannot solve any question which is not included in the study plan.
On the other hand, Written tests are more important for the academics however when it comes to the understanding a problem and taking a required measures for resolving the issue it does not depend on the knowledge that achieved from the schools. Esteemeed schools should involve manual arts in their academics which helps in their success and also brings the fame to the school. For example they can send their best students to the master chief from the school which helps in them in their success.
In conclusion, In academics both practical and manual art skills need to be taught in their institutes which helps in their success of the school.
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Science is one of the greatest inventions the world. In the era of new technologies, limited number of students opt science subject at universities in many countries. while it is possible that students contend science is one of the toughest and time consuming subject among all other subjects. this essay will discuss about the reasons and effects on society for not opting the science subject.
Many university students consider science is the one of the challenging subject rather than other subjects
university level science subject require the intelligence, the concentration. for epitome in the computer science it has more than 100 lines in one single program where students have to concentrate more on classes because a single error can bring lot of problems in Final result.
secondly, solving a problem in science need substantical amount of time and also patience. To solve a science problem it does require more syntaxes rather than solving a math problem which costs students time. for example when i was in my 1st year of graduation there was a subject called Applied physics it has 200 formulas in a single chapter which takes two to three hours of time, the subject science is of the time consuming compared to other subject.
The technologies in the modern era are developed by science, students not opting science this phenomenon leads to the significant draw backs to the society and also effects the development of country this is why i advocate that government should provide more encouraging policies for students.
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Teamwork has become so valuable in many countries throughout the world that schools often try to teach students this skill. Thus there is an argument that playing sports that include teams is the best way for children to acquire this at school and I mostly agree with this idea.
Although team sports are one way for students to learn teamwork, there are also many other ways for this to be taught.
An example of this is arranging group examinations and tasks such as cleaning the classroom together. By cleaning the class together students will learn how to help each other which is a good way to socialize and working together. To add on, doing examinations as a group will also help students think and learn together. And if one person cannot answer correctly it will lead them to study together for future exams which is one skill done in teamwork.
On the one hand, I partially agree that team sports may be the best way for children to learn cooperation. It would help them realize that the smallest disloyalty to the team may lead to an irrecoverable loss in the game. For example, if a team member passes the ball to another player from the other team, it may result in them losing the game. Therefore, the importance of teamwork and loyalty will be revealed to them. Cooperation in a team sport also simulates an atmosphere for them when they should work with their colleagues to achieve their goals.
To conclude with, although there are many other ways to teach children to cooperate, playing team sports is one of the most effective ways to teach them this skill.
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The table shows information about the changes of overseaes visitors in diferrnt part of the world in four diffent year. Overall, It can cleary see that the number of people are large change between 1990 and 1995. Moreover, the majority of people in all four years travel to Europe more than a half of other countries.
Eurpore have the biggest number of people on other countries. There was 280.2 million people visiting Europe in 1990 and dramatic rose to 390.3 in 1995 and then increase gently to 400.2 million in 2005. Similarly,Asia and the pacific had the same pattern with Europe. There was 60.2 million at starts grew to 80.3 million and then to 135.8 million in 1990, 1995, and 2005 respectively.
The number of Afica and Middle East was 18.2 million and 9.8 million in 1990. In additional, the number surges around 2 million people in every four years. In other hand, the numer of America was variation. The number of people who went to America ws 80.5 million in 1990, peak to 118.2 in 10 year later, and then plummeting drop to 113.2 million in 2005.
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The line graph displays the information of the three place in a European contry that foreign visiting
in five different year with the five years interval, starting from 1987.
It can be clearly seen that the number of overseas visitors to the mountains growth over past twenty years. The figure gradually dropped from 40,000 in 1987 to about 35,000 in 1992 and then increased dramatically to 75,000 in 2007. The number of overseas visitors to the coast also experienced of a increase during this period, The figure rose very sliightly from 20,000 in 1987 to around 35,000 in 2007.
Meanwhile, the pattern of overseas visitors to the lake grew steadily from 10,000 to 40,000 between 1987 and 1992 and then peak to 70,000 people in 2002 before dropped to 50,000 in 2007
Overall, the number of visitors to each areas saw a upward trend however at the end the number of visitors to the lakes was decreased dramatically.
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The follwing bar chart shows some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were bron outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
In Australia country three main varation, that are cities, towns and rural areas, in 1995 people born in australia the percentage of different arears, In citie the population is 50%, in town 20% and rural area 30%. People born outside Australia, In citie 60%, town 12% and rural area is 40%.
In 2010 People born in Australia, In citie 63%, In town and rural areas both are in same population. People born outside Australia is in a citie is 62%, town 10% and rural area 5%.
Overall the comparisons in 1995 both outside and inside Australia people are outside is the high level population in cities and rural areas and town is least than the inside people. In 2010 Only citie people are in large place and both towns and rural area are more than the outside people.
In citie the population is 50%, in town 20% and rural area 30%. People born outside Australia, In citie 60%, town 12% and rural area is 40%.
You wrote cities spelling wrong. Make sure you read your essay twice before submitting in actual exam. Also if you can write this sentence "The population is 50%, 20 % and 30% in cities, towns and rural areas respectively." that is more convenient to read. Also there is punctuation and grammar mistakes in your essay. Focus on that part. Overall good try. Keep it up.
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Hello. I think the the graph in Task 1 shows the percentage of people born in those areas and not people who like to live there. Thank you
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You need to include an overview. One sentence at the beginning which tells the whole story of the data.
Remove all inferences. Task one is about reporting the information given, not what your opinion is.
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Richer countries are known to extend their help to financially challenged countries by means of donating money. However, I do not believe it is enough for them to rise above poverty, and additional action must be taken by nations with more wealth to help their poorer counterparts.
Rich countries can not be thanked enough for extending their help and giving money to the less fortunate countries. This additional cash flow goes a long way in improving economy, healthcare, education, and media, among the many other things which are instrumental in building the foundation of a successful and powerful nation. If handled carefully, the poorer countries can become self-reliant and soon come out from the quicksand, called poverty.
As the popular proverb goes, 'Give a man a fish, and he will not sleep hungry. Teach a man to fish, and he will be taken care of for the entire month', meaning a short quick easy-to-do solution be attractive, but serves little to no purpose in the long run. Similarly, just handing out money is not the solution rich countries should adopt while dealing with the poverty of other nations. An absence of an established and stable administration will lead to a mismanagement of funds, and soon there will be no money left, forcing the poor countries to be reliant on the richer ones. Rich countries should send economists and bureaucrats to educate and guide the governments on how to handle money and help them set up proper channels to distribute the money. They should also make rules and regulations to ensure any malpractice, like bribery, does not take place, as corruption can uproot a developing country.
I would like to conclude by saying that though richer countries are doing their part in uplifting poor nations, it is not enough to help them escape poverty.
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I think that too, my score much higher in Cambridge books, but here I stucked 5.5 score :~(
Same here
That's same also for me I got 7.5 in listening in Cambridge but here I got only 6 barely it's really complex
same here as well. I only got 7-8 in listening and 6-7 in reading here but I managed to get 9 bands in listening and 8.5 in reading on the actual exam so i would say difficulty is higher in this website
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Hello. I passed IELTS in January in Turkey. I had 5.5 or less here and 6.0 on the real exam.
I have not yet given the actual test, but I feel like the listening tests on this website are a bit harder. I say this based on the practice tests I attempted on the office idp website and from the Cambridge IELTS practice test books.
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Try pasting it on chatgpt. It gives you a score and also provides feedback. Hope it helps
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some passages are really tough...will the real exam also have tough passages in reading section? please reply
It depends, but I do believe that reading passages will not be very difficult in the real exam.
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i believe that everyone has different opinions on this topic. But In my opinion, specialised facilities should exist only to train the top atheltes. Yet, the governments still should provide other facilities for everyone else to use, you will never know if someone has a hidden talent and potential but don't know how to improve it beause there is no place to learn. Some people volunteer and build a basketball basket outside of their property just so other kids can play.
On the other hand, countries building specialised facilities for top atheletes is not a terrible thing. People like top atheletes should have a place only for them to train. Because, they can focus and open up their full potential in the place everything they need has provided.
For instance, they still can train at a gym or other not specialised facilites. However, the amount of people around them, the equipments that are not necessary are going to distract them.
Nonetheless, i would say that there are still a plenty of people with hidden potential. Since, in some country there aren't much facilities for the residents (such as training center, public gym) and they are unable to unlock the hidden talent and what they can do. Despite of that, every country should provide their citizen the opportunity to find what their talent its and what they can do for their country. I strongly believe that if the government had already provided this opportunity, a lot of great atheletes would have been born by now.
hey i am not vey good at writing myself and it impossible for me to write an essay without spelling mistakes however since i would love if someone helped me i tell u my opinion.
i think you should work on your grammar. u have done a wonderful job in your sentence structures however some mistakes in the paragraphs really hits you in the face also i don't know if it was just me but i couldn't quiet figure out the introduction otherwise it was amazing specially your connectors i think i am going to use some of it myself.
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There some grammar mistakes and problems with coherence, but my opinion is that you would get 6.5 from this.
Many mistakes. Try to learn about structuring essay for IELTS.
Overall score: 5
YOU NEED TO LEARN ORGANISATION !!!! THIS ESSAY SEEMS LIKE YOU DIDNT EVEN THINK BEFORE WRITING IT .
ALSO DONT USE PERONAL PERNOUNS THEY ARE INFORMAL
band 7
Overall, your essay covers the topic reasonably well, but there are some areas for improvement. Let's break down the strengths and weaknesses:
Strengths:
Clear Position: You state your opinion clearly in the introduction, stating that specialized facilities should exist for top athletes, while other facilities should be provided for everyone else.
Examples and Support: You provide an example of people volunteering to build a basketball basket for kids to play, which adds credibility to your argument.
Coherence: The essay has a logical flow and is generally well-organized.
Areas for Improvement:
Grammar and Language Usage: There are several grammatical errors, such as capitalization, misspelled words ("athletes," not "atheletes"), and inconsistent tense usage. Work on improving your grammar to enhance clarity and coherence.
Sentence Structure: Some of your sentences are run-on or poorly structured, leading to confusion and impacting the overall readability of the essay. Break long sentences into shorter, more concise ones for better clarity.
Evidence and Development: While you briefly touch on the benefits of specialized facilities for top athletes, you could strengthen your argument by providing more specific evidence or examples to support your stance.
Counterarguments: It's always a good idea to acknowledge potential counterarguments and provide a brief rebuttal to show a balanced approach to the topic.
Your Possible Score is: 5.5 for this Task 2 writing essay
Your essay has several strengths, but the weaknesses in grammar, sentence structure, and lack of detailed development prevent it from scoring higher. To improve your score, focus on enhancing your language proficiency, providing more substantial examples, and addressing potential counterarguments.
GPT-4 Response:
As an AI model, I will assess the essay based on the key criteria used in IELTS grading: Task Achievement, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy.
Task Achievement: The essay generally addresses the prompt, but the argument could be clearer and more directly connected to specific points. It presents views on both specialized facilities for top athletes and public facilities for discovering new talent. But the author's perspective could be more explicitly articulated and backed with stronger, more specific examples.
Coherence and Cohesion: The essay has a basic structure, with an introduction, body paragraphs presenting different points of view, and a conclusion. However, the transitions between ideas could be smoother, and the overall structure could be better organized.
Lexical Resource: The range of vocabulary used is relatively limited, and some words are repeated too often (e.g., "potential," "facilities"). The use of synonyms and a wider range of expressions would enhance the essay. There are also some spelling errors (e.g., "atheletes," "facilites") that need correction.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: There are some errors in grammar, including inconsistent use of articles (e.g., "the governments still should provide other facilities for everyone else to use") and tenses. Also, the essay has multiple instances of unnecessary capitalization (e.g., "But In my opinion"). It would benefit from the use of more complex sentence structures to display a higher level of English proficiency.
In conclusion, the essay shows potential but needs improvements in clarity of argument, vocabulary range, and grammar. I would suggest the author practice writing essays on a variety of topics, read high-level English texts for vocabulary acquisition and grammatical insights, and revise the essay multiple times to refine ideas and correct errors.
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personally, i think your essay is good, but it has a range of various grammar mistakes, however you showed your cohesion and coherence skills, which means that you are fluent writer. Also, you can add some tenses and conditionals related to your topic. Keep in mind that your goal is to answer the question above. Have a great time!
you should first paraphrase the question given to you in the introduction
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Task Response and Coherence/ Cohesion:
The essay addresses the topic of whether specialized facilities should only be available for top athletes or if they should be accessible to everyone. It presents a clear opinion and supports it with examples and reasoning.
There is a logical structure with introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, which aids coherence.
The essay transitions smoothly between ideas, with some use of linking words and phrases (e.g., "Yet," "On the other hand," "For instance," "Nonetheless").
Lexical Resource (Vocabulary):
There is a range of vocabulary used throughout the essay, including words and phrases relevant to the topic (e.g., "specialized facilities," "hidden talent," "unlock the hidden talent").
However, some phrases could be improved for clarity and precision (e.g., "the place everything they need has provided").
Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
The essay demonstrates control of basic grammatical structures, though there are some errors and awkward constructions (e.g., "atheltes" should be "athletes," "for their country" could be "for their countries").
There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures used effectively.
Overall Impression:
The essay presents a clear argument and provides relevant examples to support the opinion.
While there are some grammatical errors and areas for improvement in clarity, the overall communication is effective.
The vocabulary range is sufficient, but there is room for enhancement in precision and sophistication.
Based on the evaluation, I would assign this essay a band score of around 6.0 to 6.5.
Overall, this is a solid essay that effectively addresses the task and demonstrates a reasonable level of English proficiency. With some refinement in grammar and vocabulary, it could achieve a higher band score.
i know I am replying very late but try to paraphrase the question first before writing your opinion. Avoid saying "you" in an academic essay. When it comes to body paragraphs, they are the parts where you should write the most information in. Instead of writing all that in the introduction it would be better if you spread your ideas in the body paragraphs. Avoid saying "thing" when writing an academic paper as well. In the second paragraph, you wrote "because" after a period which is not correct and you would definitely loose marks in grammatical range and accuracy. In the second body paragraph the idea is not clear I fear, so try to write in more detail. In the conclusion, "some country" would need an ies, so the examiner understands that you are talking about more than one country. Contractions, words such as (its, they're, aren't) basically words that are said in short as not academic so try to not use them. The last sentence does not make sense. Hope this helps
I believe that everyone has different opinions on this topic. But In my opinion, specialized facilities should exist only to train the top athletes. Yet, the governments still should provide other facilities for everyone else to use, you will never know if someone has a hidden talent and potential but doesn't know how to improve it because there is no place to learn. Some people volunteer and build a basketball basket outside of their property just so other kids can play.
On the other hand, countries building specialized facilities for top athletes is not a terrible thing. People like top athletes should have a place only for them to train. Because they can focus and open up their full potential in a place everything they need has been provided.
For instance, they still can train at a gym or other not-specialized facilities. However, the amount of people around them, and the types of equipment that are not necessary are going to distract them.
Nonetheless, i would say that there are still plenty of people with hidden potential. Since, in some country, there aren't much facilities for the residents (such as a training centers, or public gyms) they are unable to unlock the hidden talent and what they can do. Despite of that, every country should provide their citizen the opportunity to find what their talent its and what they can do for their country. I strongly believe that if the government had already provided this opportunity, a lot of great athletes would have been born by now.
This is the complete one I fixed for you
Your essay has some strong ideas, but there are areas where you could improve clarity, grammar, and flow. Here's a revised version with suggestions:
Original:
I believe that everyone has different opinions on this topic. But in my opinion, specialised facilities should exist only to train the top athletes. Yet, the governments still should provide other facilities for everyone else to use, you will never know if someone has a hidden talent and potential but don't know how to improve it because there is no place to learn. Some people volunteer and build a basketball basket outside of their property just so other kids can play.
Revised:
While opinions on this topic vary, I believe that specialized facilities should be reserved for training top athletes. However, governments should also provide public facilities for everyone else. Hidden talent might go unnoticed if there are no opportunities to develop it. For instance, some people even volunteer to build basketball hoops outside their homes so kids in the neighborhood can play.
Original:
On the other hand, countries building specialised facilities for top athletes is not a terrible thing. People like top athletes should have a place only for them to train. Because, they can focus and open up their full potential in the place everything they need has provided.
Revised:
That said, constructing specialized facilities for top athletes is not a bad idea. Elite athletes deserve dedicated spaces to train, where they can focus and reach their full potential with everything they need at their disposal.
Original:
For instance, they still can train at a gym or other not specialised facilities. However, the amount of people around them, the equipments that are not necessary are going to distract them.
Revised:
While top athletes can still train at regular gyms, distractions from crowds and unnecessary equipment can hinder their focus.
Original:
Nonetheless, i would say that there are still a plenty of people with hidden potential. Since, in some country there aren't much facilities for the residents (such as training center, public gym) and they are unable to unlock the hidden talent and what they can do. Despite of that, every country should provide their citizen the opportunity to find what their talent its and what they can do for their country. I strongly believe that if the government had already provided this opportunity, a lot of great athletes would have been born by now.
Revised:
Nevertheless, many people with hidden potential may remain undiscovered, especially in countries with limited access to training centers or public gyms. Every country should offer its citizens the opportunity to discover and develop their talents. I firmly believe that if these opportunities had been available earlier, many great athletes would have already emerged.
Overall Feedback:
Clarity and Structure: The essay could benefit from clearer transitions between ideas. Try to avoid jumping from one point to the next without connecting them smoothly.
Grammar and Word Choice: There are minor grammar issues (e.g., “Because, they can focus...” and “what their talent its”) that need fixing. Also, more precise word choices like “emerge” instead of “be born” could improve the essay.
Focus and Flow: While the ideas are valid, the essay could be more concise. Consider sticking to one main point per paragraph and expanding on that fully.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although wealthier countries tend to donate money to less wealthy countries, it is unable to solve impoverishment. As a result, other forms of help should be taken into consideration, I believe the alternatives are more sustainable and effective in solving poverty.
On the one hand, poorer countries are often filled with corruption thanks to a weak and ineffective government. As a result, the financial aid from more developed nations is gradually eaten by greedy individuals and poor management to the point where only a small portion gets to the ones in need of them the most. For example, the government of Greece were confronted by the EU on several occasions regarding their poor handling of aid, often wasted on unnecessary projects like monuments rather than dealing with their climbing inflation, which puts many more in poverty.
On the other hand, there are certain things that cannot be achieved using money alone. To begin with, in most cases, basic commodities are hard to come by in the first place in poorer countries, which means there are barely enough existing supply to support the people, not to mention selling them. For instance, agricultural goods, which is valuable as a reliable source of food, cannot be easily produced in desert countries in the Middle East, therefore making more sense to send those countries consumables like rice instead.
In conclusion, financial aid is not an effective way to solve poverty since there are limits to what money can achieve and how trustworthy the ones in charge of them are. Developed countries should dedicate their resources to help those in need using other means instead.
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Practice test 1
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
In my opinion, I agree that rich countries should give more than money to solve poverty in countries with less means.
Therefore, in order to make a significant difference, I think we should give the opportunity to have a good education to every single child in these poorer countries. Unfortunately, most of the times, children have to start working from young age or, in the case of young girls, the need to get married so, they end up, dropping school.
Apart from that, implementing a more advanced healthcare system would be a good change too. In this case, having experienced nurses and doctors, with access to different kinds of medication and equipment, would be a way to prevent many deaths in these countries.
Transportation is a big factor as well. For people that live far away from the main city for example, having to walk to school or work could take hours and it's not practical at all. This way, building streets, making cars more affordable, having buses and trains will help solve this problem.
Also, a better access to internet could be important. This will help people in these places, to become more informed about other subjects and to be able to explore other options in terms of what to do for a living for example.
Of course that, for all this to be possible, we need money in the first place. Financial aid is given by rich countries but not with guidelines on how to use it.
So, for everything to work out the best way imaginable, a detailed plan has do be made. A strong leader could make all the difference, leading the people in the right direction towards success.
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In my opinion, rich countries should give more money to solve poverty in countries with fewer means.
Therefore, to make a significant difference, I think we should allow a good education for every single child in these poorer countries. Unfortunately, most of the time, children have to start working from a young age or, in the case of young girls, they need to get married so, they end up, dropping school.
Apart from that, implementing a more advanced healthcare system would be a good change too. In this case, having experienced nurses and doctors, with access to different kinds of medication and equipment, would be a way to prevent many deaths in these countries.
Transportation is a big factor as well. For people that live far away from the main city for example, having to walk to school or work could take hours and it's not practical at all. This way, building streets, making cars more affordable, and having buses and trains will help solve this problem.
Also, better access to the internet could be important. This will help people in these places, to become more informed about other subjects and to be able to explore other options in terms of what to do for a living for example.
Of course, for all this to be possible, we need money in the first place. Financial aid is given by rich countries but not with guidelines on how to use it.
So, for everything to work out the best way imaginable, a detailed plan has to be made. A strong leader could make all the difference, leading the people in the right direction toward success.
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Practice test 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
This text will summarise the information about living in urban, rural and town locations, between 1995 and 2010, in Australia.
For starters, in 1995, we can observe, in the chart, that the majority of people was born outside of Australia, mainly in the city. Apart from that, we can see that more people were born in rural areas, with just a few people living in small towns.
Now, in 2010, there was the same amount of people born outside Australia, in the cities, which was still bigger than the amount of people born in Australia. Also, there was a huge decrease in people, both born in Australia or outside Australia, regarding the rural areas and little places, like towns.
So, after this analysis, it seems that, over the years, people prefer to live in the cities, which can be justified by the better access to food and clothes, for example.
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5 band or may be 4
There are mistakes in how they evaluate... and some mistakes in the instructions.
I tried to test myself on this example for task1 please give me your feedback to improve.
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This bar chart shows the animal adoption rate from the year 1990 up until 2000. It is clear from the graph that the rates are not similar across the years. We can see a stable increasment with cats while the opposite can be seen for dogs. Birds and reptiles on the other hand are swinging up and down through the years.
According to what is shown, we can conclude that cats' adoption rate rocketed through the years. In comparison the dogs adoption capacity has decreased and been stable at 400 for about 4 years. While birds and reptiles has been in a good balance bouncing up and down around the same rate.
To sum up, we could say that while adoption rate went down for dogs a contrary pattern exists for cats that compromises the losses. Generally speaking the year 2000 has a better overall rate than the previous years.
I would like to give you some of my personal feedback on what I have learned in the IELTS English course.
First, it is essential to write an overview statement. you will lose marks if you don't.
In the overview statement, details are not needed. keep it general.
Ex: Overall, it is clear that the adoption rate went down for dogs a contrary pattern exists for cats that compromises the losses.
second, writing 156-160 words to show your vocabulary and grammar is best. use linking words to help you.
Note: task1 you don't need to write a conclusion, it is okay to stop when you cover all the important features and word count.
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