[Bilal I] Writing Practice Test 1477359
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

According to chart in 1995 most people born in city compared to towns and rural areas in austrailia and outside of austrailia as well. Population of city outside of austrailia is 15% higher approximately. 20% people are born in towns of austrailia and approximately 33% to 35% people born in rural areas so, rural areas are 13% to 15% ahead of towns of austrailia.
If we talk about outside of austrailia so, in 1995 60% people born in cities while only 10% people born in towns and 40% people born in rural areas.
In 2010 65% people born in cities of austrailia and 80% people born in other cities outside of austraila. In austrailia 15% people born in towns and the same number people born in rural areas approximately.
While the only 10% of people are born in towns and 5% of people are born in rural ares outside of austraila.
If we compare the chart than we get people are moving to cities from towns and rural area because if we see the chart it tells us that from 1995 to 2010 20% population is increased and the percentage is decreased from towns and rural areas it means people are moving to the cities.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
In my opinion, rich countries should't give money to poorer countries as financial aids so, it mean I agree with the statement. Why I am agreeing, Because if rich countries keep giving financial aids to undevelop or poorer countries than those country won't be able to develop because they doesn't need fincaial aid they need help in form of investment of bring companies which make profit for those countries.
Most of the poorer countries uses financial aids to coverup their expenses cause they cannot collect enough taxes to cover their expenses and they cannot make enough profit, They need source of income but they are not able to make until some of the develop country help them to bring some opportunity for exporting those poorer countries goods and give them better opportunity to make money.
Develop countries should send some companies which installs their plant in poorer countries so, thise country would make some profits and starts establishing themself it would make great effect on solving poverty.
In conclusion I would say that develop countries should make better way for poorer countries to make them develop and create opportunities in their countries so they can solve poverty in their country and make themself establish. Financial aids will nevel help to those poorer countries because they wll not be able to develop themself with that money they only can cover their expenses with that money and than those countires will be in the same condition after few months so, They need to send less financial aids and start creating opportunities for them.
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