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[Kishore K] Writing Practice Test 1048747

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The bar chart provides information about some variations in the percentage of pupolation were born in australia and people born in outside australia living in three areas like urban, rural and town side from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, the percentage of people born in cities experienced a upward trend during the period, while towns and rural areas experienced a downward trend through out the period. the percentage of population living in three areas had some fluctuations during this period.

Initially, the people were born in cities in australia was about 50% in the year 1995 and increased by around 65% in 2010, then people born outside australia was 60% in 1995 and it is expereinced a upward trend to 80% in 2010.

Secondly, the people in australia living in towns was almost 20% in 1995 and steadliy decline to around 15% in 2010 and outside people were about 16% in 1995 and then decreased to 15% approximately in 2010.

Finally, the people in australia living in rural areas was 30% in 1995 and hits a low point to around 18% in 2010 and outside people were about 40% in 1995 and then decreased to 10% approximately in 2010.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Poor countries took the money frequently from the Richer countries, however it is not the solution for poverty. So, poor countries require assist in different ways from the well-deeloped countries instead of getting financial need. Yes, I completely agree with the statement, poor countries need to develop with the help of already developed countires with new ideas not with money.

First of all, countries which have poor income in government because of lack of literacy people and it should be recovered with improving the quality standard of education. For instance, if developed countries provide well educated teachers to poor countries, then the people will automatically improved thier skills and it will used for country development. Thus, the quality of education will enhance the student skills and they can give it to thier nation for development.

Secondly, government should start the new industries in order to develop the country income. In the other words, if higher officials will make a decision to establish a startups with the help of developed countries and utilize their new technologies, that will be very helpful to the employees to improve their professional growth. For example, a company called Tata in india, if government of the Srilanka would approach the developed companies like Tata to invest the money to start a industry in that country, they gain the profit to government and it will automatically develop thier income and also it leads to prevent the people from the poverty. Thus, the government can bring a companies to poor countries from the richer countries.

To conclude, I belive that in order to develop the poor countries from richer countries they need literacy people from quality education and companies for employees instead of getting only money.

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