[Keshav M] Writing Practice Test 1165214
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The data which is shown in the bar chart describes the changes in percentage for the people who were born in Australia and also for those who were born outside Australia. The data is collected with segregation of how many are living in rural,urban areas and towns for the time period of 1995 to 2010.
The statistical data is shown in the form of bar chart with defined segregation for people born in Australia and for those who are not. According to the bar chart, the native people of Australia have migrated more towards the city life with an increase of upto 65% in 2010 while as per the data of 1995 only 50% people were living in cities. There is a huge downfall in the crowd living in rural areas and towns, both native people and people who are born outside Australia by more than 35%.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Rich countries can primarily be stated or defined as those countries who are developed. The countries who are still developing their infrastructure, economy and society can be defined as the developing companies. These developing companies are in a huge process of building an economy and undergoing this process some countries take loans from World bank for developing there country. These debts keep on increasing if the countries GDP does not increase. In such cases rich countries provide financial support on some conditions to the poor countries. The conditions could vary as per the financial support provided by the country, it could be the land accquiring rights in that poor country, decreasing import duty for there country goods and many more.
Such transactions and the deeds in return make the country more poor as their dependency increases and the resources for there economy upliftment reduce. Instead developed countries should follow a barter system where resource sharing is done between the countries instead of lending money. These resources could vary as per the need of both the coountries.
For example, India and U.A.E share their resources with eachother where India exports spices, agricultural goods, rare metals to U.A.E and in return U.A.E being the hub and biggest natural source of petroleum, exports petroleum to India.
Sharing of resources with eachother reduces the financial contrain on the country, different summits such as the Asian summit are held where different countries take part for a cumulative development, therefore I totally agree with the statement
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