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[Kasra A] Writing Practice Test 1022889

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

A majority of continents and countries contains delighting and intriguing highlights, while on the other hand some of them are dismaying because of their pleasureless properties. One good example of that could be Australia

The infamous continent/country contains several evolutionized insects and animals that linger all around the country, which is an obvious reason why tourists and residents would stay as far away from Australia as possible.

Now, why did I say this? Well, as we can see in both 1995 and 2010, towns and rural areas are unlike cities, extremely low-populated.

Cities are probably populated as they are usually hygienic, which therefore results in a low amount of insects.

although towns had an average population in 1995, they experienced a noticeable drop in 2010. If I had to guess, I would say that happened because of a ludicrous and dire infrastructure.

To sum up, dire properties such as a damaged infrastructure or nightmarish, evolutionized insects that horrify the citizeens can cause the population of a region to drop.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

A majority of countries that are dependent on other countries were once independent and much more powerful than their competitors.

A good example for what I said could be iran. Around 50 years ago, iran was one of the most wealthiest and most powerful countries to exist, the problem is that other countries started to pressure iran to the point that it became one of the weakest and most anonymous countries around the globe.

Personally, I think that all of these "financial aids" are ways to con the country into thinking that their competitor is friendly, such as Iran and Russia.

Now, what can other countries do to solve the issue? Well, the most helpful way is to donate weapons, such as guns and armor to poor countries to protect them from their hazardous neighbor countries, this way the poor country has a way to defend itself from other countries.

Secondly, what most poor countries struggle from is gas, currently, even affluent countries such as America is struggling with the cost of fuels, whether it's because of the price of them or them being rare to find. Affluent countries such as Saudi Arab should share their fossil fuels with countries that are struggling with the cost of gas.

Last but not least, many countries around the globe are having issues with sicknesses and illnesses, therefore they are in desperate need of medicine.

Overall, medicine, weapons and fuel is what most countries struggle with, other countries should be reverent and help the poor countries solve these issues.

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