[EL QUINA MAS'UDAH A] Writing Practice Test 1402040

there is a change between the bar chart of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia between 1995 and 2010, it mades a difference by the previous years, it seems that people in 2010 has high demand at giving birth in the cities because as we known the different quality the hospital has in cities are better comparing to the town and the rural areas, so, many people choose to give birth in the city.

i agree that by giving financial aid to poorer country does not solve poverty, but i disagree with the sentence "should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid", because financial aid are the mostly needed, but Rich countries can also supporting the poorer country with other help too such as education, foods, and livings needed.

with that it'll probably could solve the poverty, because besides the poorer countries need financial aid they also need an education that equals to the rich countries, because everyone and anyone deserve the same and best educational systems.

and in my opinion why financial aid does not solve the poverty are because it most likely didn't fully cover what they needs and the probability of financial aid does not arrive to them are big, because as we known there is a lot of corruption.

that's also the main reason why everyone and anyone need an equal education, so they can defend themselves and could tell which is right and live independently. lots of countries mostly poorer country does not have the chance to have education, that's because the high fee of the school, and the school usually make it hard for the students to join them, they have lots of qualifications that just not makes any sense some time, and usually in the poorer countries, whatever if you have your degree or high degree such as magister degree, it doesn't assure you to got a job, many of them are unemployed, so i have wondering why is that, and i figuring the cause are because the low numbers of companies and the high number of people who want to be employed.