[Hempry P] Writing Practice Test 1367029

the table show comparison between people born in australia and outside australive base on living area. the comparison focus in 1995 and 2010, overall it shows that people born in or outside australia dominated by living in the city which getting higher in last 15 years, and the other indicators showed decent for the last 15 years

people who live in the city increase around 10 to 20 point for the last 15 years for born in australia and aslo born outiside australia . people who livin in town has decent number for the last 15 years for both indicator. criteria for people born in australia show that people in rural areas in 2010 drop almost 2 times lower then in 1995. interestingly, based on people born outside australia for who live in rural dramatically change from 40 in 1995 to 5 in 2010, almost 3 times lower then last 15 years.

rich countries could help other country based on financial or non financial aid. it certainly true that give other types of help is better.

financial aid actually important to develop all aspect for a country, developing country need all aspect, with financial aid they could solve the problem they are facing. education, enviroment, economy, and many others. the financial aid could also become bigger problem, instead of other types of help, developing has to manage the financial well. bad management of financial aid lead them to other disaster. corruption and economics chaos are two of the biggest problem they could face. for the reason that could solve this potential problem, the develop country might try to help by give other type.

non financial type is better aid from developed countries to developing countries, this aid not focus on financial but non financial aspect, investment and cooperation are on of the best way to help. monitoring the aid, developed countries could do. monitor by cooperation is to make sure that they running well. investment also really important, investment could reduce unemployemet and criminality, so its best way to achieve. they are indicated that developing countries actually need non-financial aspect based on arguments above.

to sum up, it seem to me that financial aid could lead countries getting worse, because they feel free to manage all the money comes to them. the other type of help is non financial aspect is better than financial help because there are colaboration to manage the aid.