[Vaishnavi B] Writing Practice Test 1266251
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart illuastrate about the change happened in the Australia about the people were born and people who born outside the Australia,living in urban,rural and town in span of 15 years from 1995-2010.
In 1995 , The people born in cities of Australia is less than the people born outsiude the Australia.When we compare the birth rate in towns.Native people birth rate is high (20%) and outside Australia birth rate is low which is below 20%.In rural areas, people born in australia is low less than 40% and people born outside Australia is higher which is 40%.
In 2010, The people born in cities of Australia is above 60% but the people born outside Australia is higher than those who born in Australia which is equal to 80% .The birth percentage of people in Australia for both towns and Rural areas are equal in percentage .It is among 0-20%.People who born outside Australia are higher in Towns when compared to Rural areas.
Comparetively , the birth percentage of cities of outside Australia s lesser than people born in year 2010.There is a gradual increase of 20%.People born in Australia is gradually decreased in both towns and Rural Areas in 2010.Rural areas birth rate outside the Australia is least among all years and areas which is among 01-10%.
In conclusion, The birth rate was drastically decreased in 2010 when compared to birth rate in 1995 exceprt the percentage of increase in cities.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Rich countries provide funds to poor countries in order to develop the nation and solve the poverty of country.In my opinion, developed countries should provide funds to poor countires but instead of providing only financial support they also consider to provide the infrastructure and moral support for development of country.
First , the developed countries fund will help the poor countries to overvcome their basic needs and sustain in lives.The financial help not sufficient for complete development of country.For instance , countries like China provide loans and funds to countries which need financial support . Make a trade business in order to decrease the poverty rate in poor countries .Such facilities like introducing the education sector projects ,decrease the charges over exported products , providing good infrastruture and many more .
Second , Rich countries should bring some innovative ideas and thoughts in to implementation in poor countries which help those countries to increase their GDP(gross domestic product).These GDP raise will increase countries economical status.For example , let us consider India , In 2014 Indian government implemented the strategy of imposing the rules , ban on china imports and encouraging the local products .Indian government made changes in taxation guidelines and rules which help india to boom their economy and made india as 5th richest country in the world.
Finally, Countries should share the technologies with other countries which will helpful to develop the nation .For example ,In 20th century Russia shared the rocket technology with the india such as providing the rocket engines to India space agency . technology sharing helped india to develop their own technology now . Such as chandrayan 1,2 success . Which helped india to get external business from all parts of wolrd.It will dradually increase in future days.
In conclusion , the financial support will help poor countries only in fullfulling the basic needs such as food , water and shelter But the technology sharimg and building infrastruture will lead poor countries to build their own source of income . Automatically countries will come out of poverty.
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