[Sami H] Writing Practice Test 1412156

here a bar chart is shown, describing the changes of percentage Australia's people who were born in Australia and the people born in the urban, and rural areas outside Australia between the time of 1995 and 2010.

Let's go with the bar chart flow, starting with the people born in 1995 in Australia. In 1995 almost 50% of the population lived in the cities, 20% in the towns and the remaining 30% in the rural areas. But on the other hand if we take a look at the people born outside Australia there is a huge difference in all three living areas. If we talk about the ratio or the percentages of the people living in cities are 60%, 10% in towns, and 40% in rural areas. But in the era of technology, we can clearly see the less amount of people living in towns and rural areas. Let's talk about the people born in Australia first, 65% in the cities and 18% inboth towns and rural areas but at the opposite side, 5% in rural areas, 10% in towns and 60% in cities.

In this task, we have been asked about the rich countries often give money to poorer countries but still, it doesn't help. So should rich countries help in other ways rather than financial aid to the poor countries.

There is no doubt that rich countries always show that they are helping other nations but on the back end it is always for their own benefit. They lend them money to stand on their feet but as we all know they put too much interest on that money which is very difficult to pay back for poor nations. So as I asked that developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid, I totally agree on this point, because it helps both countries to stabilize things for their people. Especially it will benefit more to under-developed country. This can open so many opportunities for them and for their currency globally. Let's take an example here, if a developed country opens an industry in a poor country, it will help them to get jobs, and the investment in the industry stabilizes the stock market. It will help to bounce back their money at the international level so they can compete with other nations too.

Such kind of initiatives should be taken by the developed countries to make this world a happy place for all where every nation can live happily and to achieve their goals by staying on their homeland and not to move to developed countries to settle themselves.