[Alfarook A] Writing Practice Test 1078602
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

This bar chart describes the changes in resent years between people who were born in Austrilia and outside Austrilia.
In 1995, people who were born inside of Austrilia represent almost 50 percent in the cities and the rest was divided between Towens and Rural areas.
people who were born outside of Austrilia shows that 60 percent were born in cities, 15 percent in towns and 40 percent in rural areas.
In the begining of 2010, the numbers estimating the new borns inside and ouside of cities did not chanfe much. but when it comes to towns inside and ouside of Austrilia we notice a decrease in the borns.
As for the rural areas the deacreas in people who were born ouside of Austrilia is noticable more than the people who were born in Austrilia.
in conclusion, the new borns in 1995, inside and ouside Austrilia between towns and rural areas have deacreased gradually untill 2010.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
When it comes to helping third world countries (developed countries), a lot of aspects need to be consider.
For example: what if this countrys governement is courrpted or not? and how bad if it is? .
Take for example the country of Libya, where in 2011 a revolution happend to take down the old and faulty system where no one can have the freedom of speech.
after 2 years after the revolution happend alot have starting to change, where millitas have taken over and the governement couldnt do anything to stop the riot acts of these millitas. even tho they had financial aid from other rich and stable countries that could have helped them to minimize the damage, but unfortuntealy they were to busy stealing and giving a way what is supposed to be the begining of a new and a stable country.
I belive that rich countries can offer more than finanical aid to help with the poverty and other problems regarding the stability of the country.
one of the types of help that the rich country could offer is to send a committee that evaluates the most damage aspects of the country, and with the help of the capable people in this country by working together to ensure that the goes according to plan and in the same time to offer jobs to the people of this country.
In conclusion, i agree that the rich countries could offer alot of help that does not requier financial aid such as education, infrastructure.
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