[Shekinah W] Writing Practice Test 1228593
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

From the information that i get in the bar chat that in 1995 people who born in Australia is really different in 2010. While i can see that the accuracy peoples born and living in the cities in Australia get in arround 50% but for people born outside Australia get in 60%, also in towns is on 20% that people born in Australia inside that people who born outside Australia get in arround 15% lives in town. Last, for the rural areas people born in Australia get in under 40% and for for people born outside Australia get in 40%, that is information in 1995.
In 2010, the people born in Australia that living in the cities is arround 60% but for people born outside Australia is 80% that living in the cities. Move to the people born in Australia but living in the town give the accuracy is under 20% different with people born outside Australia that get in under 20% but little bit lowest that the people born in Australia. The last but not least, for people born in Australia that living in rural areas get in under 20% the accuracy is same ad the towns section. For the people that people born outside Australia and live in the rural areas get in under 20% also lowest that the towns section.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
I agree that rich countries can help the poor countries by giving them money, but it is not always the right way to help the other countries that needed. Cause, there is another ways that can help other countries, i mean that the poor countries. The others types is by help them with an education, like bring a new technology to learn something new and also can bring a lot of teachers that comes to teach them the lesson that can helps them to grow, not only grow with the new lesson but also they can have a knew mindset. This things can help them to move to another levels in their life, bring a new life also i hope that can change their countries.
Another ways that the rich countries can give, is like some fruit, meals or another life needed that can help them to change their nutrisions become a healty life. With a healty life peoples can makes many activites, target also think how to grow and move bring a better future to their countries, as specially to their self first.
While if the rich countries only and always give money that can't be a good deal, sometimes their need more about the knowledge, nutrisions, love, caring and others love languange that also can makes them want to grow and grow. They know that in another countries, many peoples always supporting them and help them to get a better life in the future by giving a prayers or some supplies for their life.
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