[Amier F] Writing Practice Test 1386165

The graph illustrates the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia and who were born outside Australia in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. In general, there are significant different between the people who are born in Australia and who are born outside Australia.

To start, people who are born in Australia which is living in the city are rose significantly from around 50% at 1995 to around 60% at 2010. In addition, the polar in a town are totally different which is it decreased around 10% from 1995 make it 10% at 2010. Similarly with rural areas the percentage also dropped form 30% in 1995 to 10% in 2010. In contrast, the percentage of people who are born outside the Australia in cities were increased subsequently around 20% make it 80% in 2010. Otherwise, the percentage at the town were remained same at 10% at the both years. Lastly, the percentage at rural areas have a significant dropped from 40% at 1995 to 5% at 2010.

In conclusion, the percentage of people who are born in Australia and outside Australia in the cities are increased substantially at 15 years period.

What is poverty? Poverty is a situation that people barely have money to buy anything especially food. many rich countries nowadays have a awareness about this things and give a help to the poorer country to help them solve this poverty problem. I agree that developed countries should give other types of help to the poorer rather than financial aid such as building development and health care.

First of all, the developed country can give in term of building development to the poorer countries. For example, help them to build a lot of building such as hospital and home for the homeless. This in the same time will help the people around the country and can decreased the population of poverty. As a result, the county that indeed will keep improving in term of solving this poverty problem. In addition, by this building development also can give a significant job for the people in the poorer country. This will help the people who does not have a job from being jobless or become homeless. So, this people will have a money to survive and can also increase the economy of that country. Thus, this will make the poorer country become more develop.

Next, the developed country can help in well-being or healthcare. Having a bad desease such as influenza also one of the effect why the certain country can not solve poverty. By become a medical suppliement, it can help the people at the poorer country who are affected with a desease. This will help the country from affected with the more crisis decease that will lead to the disaster at the country. Basically, decease come from the people who does not have money to do a treatment. So, it not only help for the health but in the same time can solve the poverty problem.

In conclusion, building development and well-being or healthcare are other types for developed country to help the poor countries. The poverty problem can be solve in a significant way if the country is agree to help each other because when we work together it become more stronger.