[Osciel M] Writing Practice Test 1171260

The graph is a comparative of borns between years 1995 and 2010. In the firts graph can be observed the people born in cities in Australia is about 50%, but in 2010 an increase is observed near 12% reaching a little more than 60%. In contrast the people born in Towns and Rural areas beein a decrease, with the most notable decrease in Rural zones. The Rural zones from 30% to less than 20%, futhermore, Towns the decrease was less significative.

In the other hands People born outside Australia increased a 20%. Also can be observed than Rural areas had a extreme reduction from 40% to less than 10%. The born in Town outside of Australia was remained stable.

Overall the graph show the significative decrease born in Towns and Rural areas over the years. While the borns in Cities showed an great increase both in Australia and Outside of Australia.

The rich countries give a lot amont of money to poorer countris, but despite of this the poverty is not reduce significantly. The the first-world countries should try with new inicitives. Differents studys demostrates that it is not enough to donate large amount of money, but rather to encourage the productive matrix. For example poor countries have a poorly developed and regulated extractive economic matrix, leading to a poor working environment and often a black market in these areas, such as cartels that control them. so it is necessary diversify their productive matrix and strengthen the regulations. Other effective measure can be incentive the innovations in differents areas like agriculture, technology, renovables energies. In addition underdeveloped countries are highly contaminated, this is another problem area, because the developed countries demand more use of renewable energy sources from the poor countries, but this countris do not have sufficient investment to develop it, and fossils combustibles are more cheap.

Also many times the donations end up falling into the hands of corrupt individuals, than enrich with this helps from rich countries, and they do not distribute it in an equitable or strategic manner. In the poor countries are existing an sentiment of humiliation and resentment against the rich countries. because these feels have been looted and are used as cheap labor. So they only feel that donations are for rich countries to make themselves better off.

In conclusions i do disagree with the donations like only way to help poor countries. I believe than another ways to help poor countris, like more inciatives, developed their industries and respect their cultur and do not only see them like poor people in need.