[Divya shree J] Writing Practice Test 1198380

The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of people born in Australia and outside Australia between 1995- 2010 categorized by their place of birth such as cities, towns and rural areas.

In 1995, Australia citizens and foreigners were born in cities wereas foreigners 10 perecnt higher in population. Whereas in towns 20 percentage of citizens born and foreginers are lesser than that of perecentage. And in county’s foreign born are slightly higher than people born in Australia.

In 2010, there is drastical fall from 20 percent to below for peple born in towns and county’s whereas there is continuous standard from 65 percent to 80 percent raise in people born in urban in both Australia born and foreign born.

In conclusion, the data from 1995-2010 reveals that there is a steady increase in urbanization of Australian people with parallel decreasing trend of rural and town people. Even foreign born people also preferred living in cities than in towns and county’s.

The question is whether money provided by rich country is essential to solve proverty in poorer countries. only by providing money will not eradicate poverty. Instead there should be multifaced developments such as in buildings, schools and hospitality is to be provided or improvised. I will argue that both fianancial aids and alternative forms of technical help need to be provided to develop a poor countries.

Firstly, financial aid will help during times of natural disaster such as floods, earth quake etc but providing food, shelter, clothes all other basic needs while as other bemnecificals for financial aid is improving buildings, developing in skills for citizens, hospitials which are fundamental and basic improvising conditions in a poor country.

However, helping a poor country by providing money is not a only solution to eradicate poverty in long run. Instead providing a proper technology development and supporting in the skills of there technical development and improvising there advanced agricultural practises and trading goods from there country will enchance job empovernment and healthcare and education will significantly boost their eligibility which help under developed countries to overcome poverty and enhance their government for futher developments in there country.

In conclusion, financial aid will not only be solution for developing a country as it only concentrate on critical tool of addressing poverty. Instead developed countries should concentrate more on impoving poor country economy by means of trading and providing oppurtunities for there business expansions such as raw materia; imports and exports etc which sustain the developmant of poorer country financial aid.