[Alireza S] Writing Practice Test 1118583
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

These charts plot the birth data in Australia at different times one in 1995 and the other in 2010. Some valuable data can be extracted from these graphs that will be discussed further in the reading.
First of all, in 1995, some 50 percent of people born in Australia were born in cities which is about 10 percent smaller than people born outside of Australia. Comparing the percentages of births in towns and rural areas who were born in 1995 to 2010, we can see that it has dropped notably.
In 2010, the percentage of births increased a lot for cities despite being born outside of Australia or in it. It can be inferred that the population of cities has increased in contrast to towns and rural areas.
In conclusion, the percentage of city births remains the highest in both 1995 and 2010 but the percentage of towns and rural areas in births has decreased.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Many wealthy countries aid countries in need by donating them money, but the results show that these contributions don't help them solve their poverty. Instead of giving money to poorer countries the way of spending and managing money wisely must be taught to get better results.
Some countries are poor because they don't know how to use their potential to grow. By teaching them to use their resources to their own advantage and by guiding them in this path we can manage to help those countries effectively. Because the world is like a puzzle every part of it is a country. Each country has its own unique potential that other countries are in need of that and by discovering this they can get out of misery.
The other reason can be due to money mismanagement in poor countries and this is highly related to the government of the country. Some governments exploit the money for their advantage without considering their country and by stopping these governments and increasing awareness of how to use resources, countries can grow and advance.
The other method to help a country out of its plight is by making education amongst its people more common. By doing this, people will become more educated and can contribute to their country for their own good. So richer countries can build help poorer countries build universities, schools, etc. They can also encourage people to become educated assigning some subsidies for it.
In conclusion, every country in this world is unique and it can get out of desperate situations by using their land's potential. They can also increase their education level among their people to acquire great achievements and grow in the world between other countries.
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