[Meet G] Writing Practice Test 1367849
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The Following bar chart depicts the percentage of humans living in urban, rural and town between a span of fifteen years from 1995 to 2010 . There are 2 divinsions in the bar graph being people who were born in Australia and people who were not born in Australia , however live there. There are two graphs and both of are different from eachother, where the first graph depicting the year 1995 and the second graph showing the year 2010.
In the first graph we can see that there were more people who lived in the cities whether they were born in Australia or not . We can also see that the number of people living in cities is almost double than the people living in rural areas, however in the case of people who were born outside Australia, the difference is a bit less than double. Human population is towns is the least and a lot less than the population in other parts .
In the second graph, which portrys the year 2010 we can see that although the people living in cities is still the highest , the people living in towns and rural areas has reduced a lot . The most affected area in terms of population are the rural areas , whereas the population in towns is decreased only slightly.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
In todays world money is the most importnat factor in solving many many problems , however money is something that is not accesible by everyone and every nation . To help the underdeveloped countries developed countries like USA, Australia or UK often give financial aid to them, but this doesn't solve their poverty problem. This essay shall discuss the affects of providing money to the poorer countries and providing materials to them istead.
The money provided by the developed countries to the underdeveloped countries is usually used by the poorer countries to develop their infrastructure to increase tourism, but tourism dosn't just grow with good infrastructue and needs other components as well, whichs takes up a lot of money and time and may not solve the main problem that the country faces, which is poverty. Countries like senegal , nigeria and many more that are financially backwards as compared to countries like USA, Canada or UK might use the money provided for aid to make the rich people even richer, these countries may have a lot of corrupt government officer or have terrorist organization that is terrorising the people living in those countries . Due to reasons like these the poorer countries might not be able to solve their poverty issues and stay under the poverty line for a lot longer.However when money is provided to trustworthy people and government that want to grow their home into a powerful nation they can do wonders with smart planning.
On the other hand if the underprivileged countries are provided whit other helpful tools like medical technology for hospitals , advanced technology for construction, better teaching materials for schools or medicines that are not produced by the pharmaceutical companies due to the lack of knowledeg or technology , these will help them grow more and rather it may make them more independent . They might grow more independent because they would be able to create their own medicine with the help of the devices provided, they would be able to grow the number of educated person in their country , which will help them grow in future .
In conclusion other types of help should be provided to underdeveloped countries and poorer countries , however money can also be provided if the government and people are trustworthy .
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