[Munkhtuul G] Writing Practice Test 1193296

People of cities both born in Australia and outside Australia was increased in 2010 comparison with 1995. However, people born in and outside Australia were decreased in towns and rural areas. When in 1995, people live in rural area who born outside Australia were more than who born in Australia. Then 2010s, more fewer people live in rural and towns who were born outside Australia. As same as who lived in towns and who were born in Australia.

Who were born outside Australia, people live in cities more than who domestic people. And people live in rural areas who were born outside Australia more than who were born in Australia in 1995. Although it is changed in 2010, rural area's residents decreased both born in and outside Australia, especially who were born outside Australia. The residents of towns, decreased in years. This graph shows people migrant to cities from towns and rural areas in year by year.

I agree with this topic. This is a common phenomenon that rich coutries give or lend money to poorer and developing coutries. But poor and developing countries who take money, money is not a solution. In this countries, so often take a charity and lend other countries, real promblem is keep increasing. Example when take a money, they does not expent it wise, actually. There are so many examples of poor countries who take a money and get more poorer and poorer. Therefore it deepens corruption and bribery and money does not reach the section and people who it is actually needs. Sometimes can be developed country's charity is very helpful in some countries. But not everytime it helps. Maybe high developed countries really want to help to developing countries that must be another thing rather than financial aid. This is can be educational services, knowledge of human rights and accessible and quality education, helps to build a good health care system, hopsital and hopsital technics etc. And may be recovery of nature. Or may be not direct recover of nature or direct goods or something else instead of technology and knowledge. Knowledge is rather than free gifts, knowledge is power, power is inspiration. Someone said "do not give a fish to someone, teach how to take fish". That word explain everything what I want to say. When someone give to me a fish, I eat a fish one or two day, but someone teach me how to do things, I will be reach my own needs.