[yousef a] Writing Practice Test 1081664
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The chat show the percentage of poeple in Australia. Dividing them into two parts; people who were born in Australia and people who were born outside Australia in 1995 and 2010.
In 1995, the percentage of people who were born outside Australia was higher than that of people born in Australia in cities and rural areras. It seems to be opposite in towns as percentage of people who were born in Australia is greater from those who were born outside Australia.
Some of these percentages have changed in 2010. Percentage of people who were born in Australia in towns and rural areas was greater than those who were born outside Australia. However, the percentage of people who were born outside Australia is still greater than those who were born in Australia.
To sum up, there seem to be less immegrants to rural areas and towns in 2010 but their number increased incredibly in cities.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Alot of developed countries give significant amount of money to developing countries but still thse countries are poor. How can they make the economic conditions of these countries good if money doesn't make any difference to these countries? Each developing country has a reason why it isn't developed yet or why it takes to long?Are there other forms of help to these countries to make them developed faster?
When developed countries give the developing countries alot of money they don't know where that goes? How it is being redirected? Some presedents steal that money and take it for themselves. Others, try to fix their counry but in wrong method. For example, if you gave a poor man a fish every day how can he learn how to catch fish byhimself. The child never gets educated alone.
There are many ways available to help these devloped countries. First, there must be supervision over the money they give where it goes and how extent it is useful to this country. Second, some politicians should come and learn these people their rights and how to make deals with other countries in trading, exporting, and importing goods. Strict laws should be put to every presedent or administrator who steals money and take it for himself.
To sum up, money isn't the only way to help developing countries. Developed countries should send some experts in every sections and field to teach them how to be strong and wwelthy country. Developed country should also invest in these countries in order to increae their economic conditions.Every theif who steals money from his country should be put in prison because he is a traitor.
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