[Sandra S] Writing Practice Test 1279934

The bar graph depicts proportions of Australians and people from outside Australia, who resides in cities, towns and rural areas in a short period of time from 1995 and 2010.

Overall, cities are the most popular destination for both people. Besides it, people living in towns and rural had witnessed a gradual decrease at the end of the period compared to its inital stage.

In 1995, people from outside Australia had a moderate increment of nearly 10% on comparison to Australians. In towns, Australians were contributing almost 20% with regards to non-natives who were about 10%. Coming to the rural areas, non-Australians had a modest increment who were about 40%, whilst Australians contributed neraly 30%.

In the year 2010, non-australians were about 80%

It is often argued that weathier nations providing money to under-developed nations are not sufficent to solve poverty. Hence, rich countries should opt to lend a helping hand to poverty-stricken countries apart from financial support. I strongly disagree with this suggestion as money is the ultimate basement which can provide better hospital facilities and can dramatically increase employbility rates.

The first reason for pointing out money as the best aid for assistance is its provision to improve basic facilities, especially in hospitals. Owing to lack of hospital facilities, death rates are becoming common in under-developed countries. Therfore, providing financial help would help such contries to enhance their hospital atmosphere with latest technology oriented equipments, which can make the country less prone to diseases and improved healthier society. A recent research conducted in a poor country concludes that about 54% of people endure various health problems, which were not able to get cured only because of their lack of enough hospital resources.

Secondly, Finance can play a major role in declination of unemployabilty rates, which is the major concern faced by poor countries. Therfore, creating more job opportunities for the people is integral for upbringing of under-developed nations to developed nations. In addition to that, jobs have enough potential to meet basic requirements of people. As a prime example, in India, government with the help of assistance from a foreign country initiated several employbility programs that gradually inclined their employability rates and made the country to be a part of the list of developing countries.

To elucidate, providing money alone can be helpful to poor nations in creating better hospital infrastructure and tools as well as it can substantially increment employbility rates.