[Kamran F] Writing Practice Test 1094068

Below there is a graph illustrating the average daily temperature of two cities located in Australia. There is also a chart representing the average number of rainy days in the cities. In this essay, I will describe these data visualizations and extract useful information.

By comparing the highest and lowest temperature levels in Brisbane and Canberra, we can conclude that people of the former experience hotter days. Another extractable fact is that overally, the gap between the maximum and minimum temperature is constant for Canberra, sitting at near 8 degress Celsius. On the contrary, this gap varies notabely in Brisbane, wranging from roughly one to 10 degress.

Turning into the rainfall chart, it shows us that almost from summer to mid-autumn, Canberra enjoys having more rainy days, while in other months, Brisbane sees more days with rainfall. It is also worth noting that in the first three months of the year, the number of rainy days in Brisbane is roughly 2x.

To summarise, we may come to conclude that in generall, the people of Brisbane enjoy a better climate, with lower temperature and more days with rainfall.

These days we're witnessing a hype for doing beauty surgeries. While some people may consider it a positive trend, others oppose them. Personally, I stand with the latter and I'm going to share my ideas with you.

I believe that this hype originates from two sources, First, is that being pretty has become a value worldwide, especially among the female. Nowadays, things like character and skills and morality comes after appearance. The second factor fueling this trend, as I believe, is social media. Platforms like Instagram, Snappchat, and Tiktok are where you gain much attention, only if you're charming and attractive.

That said, many people find no option but to become pretty, no matter the cost. They go for any shortcut that comes to their mind, whether it's makeup or cosmetic surgery.

To my opinion, this hype will have undoubtedly negative impacts on the socities, and also the people who go under surgery. In some cases, these kind of surgeries have had terrifying harms to the patient's appearance or even health, breathing as an instance. But even if the surgery goes well, those people will become hollow ones who only care for how they look.

The macro impact of this trend is on the socities and how they value and see a person. If the appearance sits at the top of the list of factors we judge, know, and behave a person, then we will witness the fall of the ethics.

To wrap it all, I totally disagree with this hunger for becoming pretty. As I mentioned before, this trend will lead to negative results, harming both individuals and the socities.