[Trinh T] Writing Practice Test 1281600

The bar chart illustrates the propotion of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town over the period of 15 years, starting in 1995.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage people who were born in Australia and people born outside living in towns and raral areas were both go down, while that people who were born in Australia and people born outside Australia living in cities was remained unchanged.

In 1995, the percentage people who were born in Australia living in cities stood at 50%, it is the highest percentage, after that it rose to 75% in 2010. People who living in rural areas is the second highest with 30%, however, it fell to under 20% after 15 years. The percentage people who were born in Australia living in towns was 20% before falling down slightly in 2010.

The propotion people born outside living in cities was 60% in both 1995 and 2010. People who live in towns stood at 15% and saw a slight fall in 2010 with 18%. It is noticebale that people living in rural areas was 40% in 1995. After that, it declined sharply by 30% in 2010.

Many people think that rich countries should give many to poorer countries to help them. But for me, it is not the best solution. i am totally argee with therapy that advanced countries can help them in many other ways instead of giving them money.

On the one hand, giving money can help them overcome difficulties immediately, It can also be a stepping stone for them to be able to do jobs that they have never had the opportunity to do before. For example, poor children can go to school, sick people can go to the hospital. Overall this is a pretty good measure.

However, supporting money is only a temporary measure because developed countries can not support them forever. Instead, they should find other ways to help poor countries such as educational support or labor export.... These ways are better than just helping financially. In the future, they can rely on themselves to make a living and no longer depend on other countries

In short, for fishing rods, not for the fish. Developed countries should help poorer countries in many ways, not just financially. This is good for both sides and good for the whole world. Let's develop and move forward together