[Hansen Dwi P] Writing Practice Test 992859
Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

In 1995 many people in Australia and people outside Australia were born in Cities. The number percentage of people in Australia are more than 40 percent was born in cities, 20 percent was born in towns and more than 20 percent was born in rural areas. Next, the number percentage people outside Australia are 60 percent was born in cities, low than 20 percent was born in towns and 40 percent was born in rural areas. In 2010 has many changed. People in Australia dan people outside Australia were born in Cities too. The number percentage of people in Australia are more than 60 percent was born in cities, low than 20 percent was born in towns and rural areas. Next, the number percentage people outside Australia are 80 percent was born in cities, low than 20 percent was born in towns and low than 20 percent was born in rural areas. The diagram chart showing to us about every year people was born in cities. Because, many people work in cities and married in cities. So, them decided to move to cities. So, every year many people borm in cities.
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Yes, i agree. Rich countries can't give the support just like money to poorer countries. Many support can give the poorer countries like give the technology, a qualified worker to develop company, make the contract to work together make some business and give the support in school or university like exchange student. If the rich countries just give the money, poorer countries just can solve the problem of financial for a moment. If the money lost, the problem will come again. So, the rich countries can give the technology to poorer countries example the oil filter, maybe poorer countries have many oil but they can't produce it because they don't have technology. If they have technology, they can produce oil and export to many countries. This is can make poorer countries solve the financial problem. Rich countries can give a qualified worker to help poor countries make a company for fix financial problem. They can make new business and ,make income from company. Next, about the support in school or university this is very important. If they can exchange student from poorer countries to rich countries that is very good. The student can learn from rich countries for how to make something or business. This is can help for solve the financial problems in their countries. So, rich countries must contributed too for solve financial problems in poorer countries.
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