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the 21st century has witness some of the most impressive breakthrough in technology . While some people implemented them in shopping to make it easier , others think they will not . Today , i will discuss both of these beliefs.

First of all , it can be true that applying technology can bring us certain benefits such as the ability to browse anything at the buyer's will . For example , to look for water spinach , type that name onto a search bar , then it will automatically goes into your screen. In addition , using tech to buy things will make it less time -consuming as it will not need us to travel through a distant instead the things can be ordered remotely and delivered to us .

Though the advantages, applying mordern technology can complicate shopping , espeacially for the old , these genre of people are unfamiliar with online shopping and can find it hard to familiarize with it , as a consequent , their experience will be significant more frustrating. Another thing is that buying things online may pose some problems of frauding such as fake groceries , low-quality products,... . In addition , before being able to purchase, a payment method , which include some of your personal informations , will be needed , if not careful these informaions can be leaked and exposed

All in all . both views are equally deserved to be discussed and fully expand . while technology can make it simpler and less time-consuming to buy things , it also create problems.

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Laws which are imposed by the authorities must be followed by every citizen. Giving freedom to an individual, so they can do whatever they want can cause serious problems. I totally agree to the statement that without any rules and regulations the country will fall in the chaos. In this essay we will discuss the effects of not having any rules in a society.

Firstly, rules are the boundaries for limiting problems in the society. Such as traffic laws in the society, If the there are no restriction to the speed limit the will be many deaths. People will use this freedom and not care about others at all. Risking many lives and numerus accidents on the other hand crossing only over the pedestrian can also danger many lives. Running across roads where the vehicles go in full speed is putting their life in danger.Example in many countries there is a fine imposed on an individual, who do not use the pedestrian to cross.

Where as there are many other reasons that show the importance of laws. Such as lettering in public, if there is not ristriction on where to dispose the garbage. People will start throwing letter everywhere, which creates land pollution. Above all this attracts harmful insects such as mosquito and flies etc. Increases the number of sickness and health expectancy reduces. Example in many undeveloped countries they still have problem in proper disposal of garbage and according to global standards the highest number of health issues and deaths are in these countries.

In conclusion, A set of rules imposed by the government is to keep it's citizen safe and secure. Not following them will have lead to destruction and problems to oneself. I completely agree this statement that a community in the society should follow it's laws as it is a beneficial for them.

The following diagram illustrates the process of making carbonated drinks at five different stages, each stages completing the mechanism with defferent machineries.

At stage one, raw water is being filtered and transfered to water softener to soften the water and then at stage two purified softened water is being heated using the electric heater and then passed through cooling pipes to cool down the heated water, after that they are passed through carbon dioxide gas so that the water particles reacts with carbon dioxide gas particles and get carbonated.

Carbonated water is then transferred to mixing tank, at stage five, inside the mixing tank, carbonated water, colouring, syrup and flavour are mixed all together at right amount then filtered out the excess chemicals and then transfer the pure coloured, flavoured, carbonated drink at stage four,
at stage four they are beng filled in bottles and cans after that at the final stage, bottles and cans are being wrapped and filled inside boxes, later shifted to supermarkets using delivery vans.

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With the ever-evolving technological developments, playing computer games has dominated extra-curricular activities of children, yet, it warranted concern on whether outdoor activities are more advantageous for children's development over sitting in front of computers. I strongly agree that infants gain more benefits from outdoor activities than playing computer games.

It is no exaggeration to say that outdoor activities can improve children's physical and mental wellness. Firstly, children can improve their physical abilities by go hiking or practising rhythmic gymnastics in gymnastism, various studies proved that physically-strong infants can further develop their skills more effectively.  Besides, children can enhance their communication and interpersonal skills throughout participating in diverse team outdoor activities, for instance,  playing footballs, volleyballs, it can facilitate children to associate with team members and develop their friendship, subsequently, they can share sorrow and happiness with each others. Furthermore, outdoor activities can enable the children to keep in touch with the nature and experience what is going in the surroundings.

Though playing computer games cannot benefit children as much as outdoor activities, it is undeniable that playing computer games is also favorable for children's development. In reality, several games, like, FIFA, Age of Empire require players to apply and practice analytical techniques. In addition, children can also enhance their imagination skills and creativity while playing some simulation games, such as, Sims City.

To summarize, I strongly believe that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development over playing computer games. Nonetheless, outdoor activities and computer games provide different benefits and not mutually exclusive, to cultivate childrens to become all-rounded, it is ideal to balance their time spent on those activities.

Task 1 :
The diagram depicts the manufacturing process of carbonated drinks. It can be observed that it consists of five stages, from initial water cleaning to the final stage of packaging and delivery to supermarkets.

To start with, raw water is processed respectively through filter, water softener and chemicals. The filter water is subsequently passed to electric heaters via pump, after heating process, it is then injected with carbon dioxide through cooling pipe. This stage is also called Heating evaporation and carbonation process.

Carbonated water is put into a mixing tank to add colouring, syrup and flavor in prior to being filtered again. Afterwards, carbonated drink is filled into diverse containers, such as, bottles and cans, and then packed into boxes. Eventually, these boxes are delivered to supermarkets by trucks so that consumers can purchase the items if necessary.

To sum up, carbonated drinks are required to undergo quite a number of manufacturing procedures before being sold in the supermarkets.

This chart demonstrates how the different languages are linked and emerged from the mother language English.

In overall, the English is categorised into two groups and several branches are emerged from each one of them.

Firstly, the American English branch has eight sub divisions under the two categories of USA and Canada. Nearly 70 percent of the languages falls under the first category.

Secondly, the British English branch consists of six main division and each of them has their own groups. The Indian Pakistan division is leading with multiple subgroups of different forms of Indian English .

The maximum distribution can be seen among British English which consists of 18 language schemes on total 26. The minimum subgroups of each two classes can be observed from Canada, West Indies , Australasia and Far east.

Surprisingly, the African Continent including West ,East along with Angelo Phones also falls under British English Branch.

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Task1
The figure below illustrates the formation of drinks that Carbon one of its main ingredients.

That process consists of 5 main stages that the drinks must go through in order to be produced. In the first and second stages, fresh water goes through filtration, softening, heating, and cooling steps and ends up mixing the water with Carbon dioxide, by that way the carbonated water conducted via tunnels to reach the mixing tank. Now stage 3 takes place. The mixing tank allows the carbonated water to be mixed with coloring agents, syrup and flavors, then the end mixture goes through filtration again. Finally, the remain two stages are held now, By further filtration of the liquid and by filling it in the bottles and cons, the drinks are ready now to be packaging and shipping them to the markets.

All in all, there are many stages that must take place in order to form carbonated drinks and shipping them all over the markets.

Not only a giant machines needed to do so but also, the filtration process must present in more than one stage to make sure the drinks are pure without any unpleasant contaminations.

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Writing Task 1:
Given figure illlustrate the procedure of creating the carbonate drinks. Which is further divided into five stages (Water cleaning, Heating evaporation and carbonation, Mixing, Filtering and filling, Packaging) showing from raw water follow five stages before it go to supermarket.

In stage 1 water softning, chemical pumping take palce While in stage 2 and stage 3 cooling and carbonate water coloring, syrup, flavour take place. And in stage 4 , stage 5 filling and packing of carbonate water take place.

In terms of stage 1 ,2,3 usuage of heavy machines take place from filtering raw water to water softnar to adding chemaical to puming this mixuture to cooling pipe , elimination of carbondioxide , carbonate water mixing with colouring , syrup, flavour , filtering all of it takes place with the help of heavy machines .

For stage 4 and stage 5 after generation of carbonate water its filtering, packing and delivery to supermarket takes place . Packings are done in two forms one in cans and other ones in bottles then put them all in boxes . These boxs loaded into trucks then delivered to the supermarket with the help of trucks.

WRITING TASK 2:
Many people suggest that those children who spend their time on outside of their houses are more advance as compared to those who spend their time on home playing video games.

In my opinion , i agree that outdoor activities are more benefical for childrens . when childrens go outdoor they do physical activities like playing soccor , cricket and other sports which make them active help them to grow both physically and mentally. Childrens also make some new friends which is good for childrens to understand and learn from each other . Other than that it also help childrens to observe and uderstand our natural nature which makes them to protect the nature . However, i also beleive that knowledge of computer technologies are also necessary for childrens progress because in today era everything can be done using technologies . Our and childrens both lifes are highly affected or depended on computer techologies like online classes etc. Which makes it necessay for children to understand the today technologies to get the more benefit from it . And it also help childrens to get updated on today worlds. Tech helps childrens to communicate with their friend and family from anywhere in the world One can gain enough knowledge from online world using computers and can develop something of their own which makes the children more responsible and productive.

In the end i can say that outdoor activities and computer games have their own benefits and drawbacks but overall both are necessary for the advancement of the childrens.

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The diagram show process of carbonated drink by seperate to 5 stage. First stage is called Water cleaning. This stage, raw water will pass filter, water softener and chemical. Next stage is Heating evaporation and carbonation. Between first stage and second stage are conneting by pump and tube. At second stage have cooling pipe that is tube to machine for pressure carbon dioxide into water. Water, that was press this process, is called carbonated water. Go to third stage is Mixing. Mixing tank cotant carbonated water, coluring, syrup and flavour. After this stage is filtering and filling. This stage, carbonate drink is comple so it is filling into bottles and cans. At the last all bottle and can are packaged for delivery to supermarket.

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This illustration describes the steps involved in the manufacturing of carbonated drinks.
In the first stage, water is passed through a water filter to remove solid impurities. It then goes through a chamber  that contains water softener and other chemicals which help to remove substances that are already dissloved in  it, following which, a pump then propels the filtered and impurity-free water  to an electric heater.  This marks the beginning of the second stage.  The steam generated from the electric heaters then passes through a cooling pipe and into a chamber with carbon dioxide. This carbonated water is then transferred to a mixing tank.
The third stage of this process starts at the mixing tank where colouring, syrup and flavor are added to the carbonated water and stirred thoroughly.  The resultant liquid once again goes through a filter and on to stage four where it is put into bottles and cans and then to stage five where it is transported to supermarkets to be sold to the final consumers.
In summary, the making of carbonated drinks is a five stage process that includes purification of water till when the final product is delivered to retail stores.

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Does unlimited personal freedom contradict the function of society? Some people believe that permissiveness lead to distruction of law obedience and degradation of moral values. Others suggest that in case an individual has no constraints in actions, it leads to prosperity and flourishing for both human being and the whole global community.

At a first glance the idea might seem brilliant. If a person does whatever he or she wants, everybody should be happy. But unfortunately it is not that simple.

Firstly, human society differes from the wildlife. While nature is driven by selection of species and pure survival, the key milestones of human society are inscripted in rules that cannot be denied. All people come from different backgrounds and their motivation in life varies tremendously. In this regard unlimited freedom might result in malbehavior, increased level of crime and insafety. Subsequently, it leads to unstability and unpredictiveness which in turn can cause chaos and the lack of development.

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The diagram above depicts the structure of relationship within the family of English languages.

Basically, there are two main branches - American and British English. In terms of geography, American English is wide spread in the USA and Canada, while British English is commonly used in former British colonies including West Indies and British Isles, India, Pakistan, Australia, Africa and the Far East.

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Moreover, West Indies English include languages spoken in Jamaica and Barbados, British Isles English consists of Irish and Welsh dialects, Australasian branch involves both Australian nad NewZealand English, while Far East subbranch consists of Malay and Chinese. Additionally, there are plenty of forms of Indian and African English.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development them playing computer games. I partially agree with this statement.

Outdoor activities are important for a development of a child. It help them grow physically and improve their hand eye coordination. Physical exercise keeps the childs health in a good condition. It help them become more social by interacting with children their own age. This help them development their social skills. Outdoor activities like baseball, basketball, cricket, etc helps improve hand eye coordination. Its a relevant skill for adult too for stress relief.

But this doesn't mean computer games don't help in the development of a child. Gaming helps a kid improve mentally by making them do certain tasks. There are specific games designed for kids that help improve their focus. Their a scientific study that shows gaming has helped kids with ADHD focus better. Gaming is used by certain doctors not just for children but also adults to help them improve mentally. In the future it also helps children inspire to learn how games are made. Inturn making them wanna learn things like coding, animation and graphic design. A career in gaming industry is very beneficial as it is a developing industry high income. But gaming can have its drawbacks to.

Excessive gaming has showed signs of depression, aggressive behaviour, mental problems, difficulty to diffentiate between reality and games. A career in gaming can be highly intense. But every industry has its drawbacks just like everything in life.

The balance of outdoor activities and computer gaming is perfect. Both should be done in moderation giving you the best results.

The diagram defines the process of making a carbonated drink. In stage one raw water is filtered after which a softerner and chemicals are added to it. It is then pumped on to stage two in which it is put through a electronic heater and then transferred through the cooling pipe to a tank for carbonisation by adding carbon dioxide to the water. The carbonated water is then sent to a mixing tank. The mixing tank adds 3 different substances to the water. The 3 substances being colouring, syrup and flavour. The water is then again put through a filter. Adter the water is filtered it is transfer to stage 4. Stage four comprises of filtering and filling. The drink once filtered is filled into bottles or cans. After the filling is done it is then packed into boxes. Once packaged it is sent to supermarkets using transportation vehicles like trucks.

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Nowadays, technological advances have generated controversies regarding children behaviour. It is argued that infants should spent more time doing outdoors activites rather than stay playing video games and other sedentary activities. Clearly outdoors activities contribute to mayor benefits for toddler´s health therefore, the following essay will support this thesis.

Outdoors activities , such as walking, going to the park, and other phyisical movements are necessary for children so that they can undergo a proper growth. Expersts recommend that children should perform an average of 1 to 3 hours of phyisical activity, mainly because muscles and bones need to be excercised and stimulated so that they can grow strong. In comparison to children who prefer to stay at home conected to video-games, they will not acomplish the required minimum of phyisical daily activity therefore, their growing factor could be negatively affected.

In addition, one main advantage that outdoors activites have is that they promote socialization. Children interaction is a primordial factor for developing social habilities; it is essential that toddlers meet other people as well as other surrounding so that they learn to communicate, share, feel empathy, and to construct future relationships. At this point it can be infered that sedentary activities lack these benefits and will not have the same positive impact either in child´s mind or body.

In conclusion, children tentation to spent most of the day playing computer games is extremely high due to the addiction that electronics generate. However, toddlers should be encouraged to perform outdoors activities due to the several benefits that these last can have in their health and development.

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