[Melina P] Writing Practice Test 185871

The image depicts the way that carbonated drinks are manufactured.

Overall, there are several steps to this process, starting from when the water is cleaned to when the soft drinks are delivered to supermarkets.

In detail, the first step, as it is mentioned before, is when the raw water is passed through a filter to a water softener. Once the water undertakes the softener, chemicals are added, and then, the water is pumped. The second step is when the water is passing from the pump to an electric heater, and then the clean water is cooled by a cooling pipe. Once, the water is cooled, it is transported to a container where the carbon dioxide is added. Next, the carbonated water is passed from a large pipe to the mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, syrup and flavour. The next step of this process is when the sodas are passed to a filter, where are distinguished from bottles to cans. The final step is when the products are filled to boxes and are packed to trucks, where they are delivered to supermarkets.

Nowadays, the way that kids are educated has changed a lot, in comparison with the previous years. For example, when video games came to the spotlight, many parents argued that their value in kids development is minor, in contrast with an ordinary activity outside. There is some controversy about this situation because some others believe that computer game and contribute to kids beneficial. In this essay, I will explain why I think that video games have many advantages in young peoples lives.

Firstly, through video games, can educate kids, when an outdoor activity have limited education values. Regarding the educational meaning of video game, take a new language for example. Most video games are in English, hence young people are able to learn a new language through a joyful way. Due to their visual appearance, computer games can attract kids easily conversely with a teacher in the classroom. I tend to think that this is one of the most essential usages of video games that an ordinary activity fails.

Additionally, in our day's video games can improve kids socialization in the same way that activities outside. For instance, many computer games offer a chat which is simulated as a common conversation. In chats, children can talk to their friend or other people of their age who they are interested in the same game. Also, kids through this process can make new friends from all around the world, where in contrast, it's unorthodox for kids to make a new friend from other countries in their garden Clearly, kids have chances to improve their skills, such as socializing.

On the other hand, parents have to be struck about the time that their kids utilise this type of games. Furthermore, as a precondition, video games which are selected by parents must not include inappropriate images for children, such as games with scenes of conflicts or killings. Moreover is necessary for parents to supervise their kids, as they play.

To sum up, video games can contribute to children development. This type of game can be helpful, in the same way as an outdoor activity. Through the improvement in kids skills, such as socializing, and also can offer to kids a wide range of educational subjects.