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[Uchechukwu M] Writing Practice Test 161200

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

The diagram describes the five stages involved in producing carbonated drinks.

Overall,the manufacturing of carbonated fluids originated from stage one, which contains water cleaning down to stage two of heat evaporation and carbonation,and also stage three talking about mixing,then filtering and filling being stage four.And finally, packaging as stage five.

Looking at stage one to stage three,we can see that a row water was put into a filter,from there,it entered water softener where chemicals was added.it was taken to the pump which started our stage two, where it was heated by electric heaters,then it was transported to the cooling pipe ,there carbon dioxide was added making it carbonated water,and then it entered the mixing tank leading us to stage three.

Looking at the state three,the carbonated water was filtered before pouring into bottles and cans which is the stage four.And the final stage which involves packaging and sending in supermarket for buyers to purchase

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Outdoor games involves the activities children engage in outside the comfort of their homes.it can include any type of game, including swimming, playing with their mates and others.outdoor programs can really be beneficial to the children's growth when compared to playing computer games and I will strongly agree with this point because,it gives the children the sense of confidence knowing that they can organise and play with their mates on their own terms without being told how to do it.Not only that,it gives the children the ability to communicate with their mates and also build's their physical strength.

When a child endulges in an activity with other mates,it gives them the confidence they need to tackle communication and handle activities when they grow up as opposed to a child that plays only computer games.for example,a child going outside the house to engage in certain activities with their mates will help them not only to know their mates and converse with them,but will make the child to have autonomy to his or her own decision as to the kind of play he or she wants to get involved in and also gives the confidence to know that they can do whatever they set their mind to do in the future without much obstacles.Such child,when compared to a child that stays only indoors with their computer games,will surely have an edge over them.

In addition to the point above, strength and control will be added to the childs characteristics,as such child will engage in all sorts of activities that involves building the muscle and hence,their strength.It will also able the child to learn control and know when he or she is tired and needs some rest.For example,a child playing with his or her mate may tend to fall once in a while, making them to the strong and building them up.Some plays involves running, climbing, singing and others,and all these will help in building their muscles and also enable them and their parents discover what they have interest in.It gives them control over their ability to do things and also their temperament.All these are what will help a child in their future development and discoveries.

Having said all these,I will say that I strongly agree that a child should be allowed to engage in outdoors activities,as it has more advantage to offer than disadvantages.Though,the child can still have time for computer games as it also helps in their mental development,but outdoor activities should not be overlooked

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