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[Elena M] Writing Practice Test 176910

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

Represented diagram gives us information of how row water can be turned into any carbonated drink. The process starts from filtering raw water to make it softer with adding chemicals. After that it goes through pump and gets into the electric heater where the water becomes warmer or even boils and then it is transferred through cooling pipe to special tank where it is fulfilled with carbon dioxide.

After all carbonated water goes through long pipe getting to mixing tank. At stage 3 that is called mixing, carbonated water can be enreached with colouring, syrup and flavour. This way the water has special tastes, different colours and varies smells. At the end the ready drink gets through filter again and pouring in different containers such as bottles or cans. At the last stage drinks are packed and delivered to different supermarkets.

We can see the process of making carbonated drinks is very complex and it requires special equipment.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Modern children are addicted to modern entertainment such as playing computer games, while people are absolutely sure that any outdoor activities is more useful for them. I fully agree that any physical activity is wonderful opportunity for children's growing up process.

Firstly, it is good for their health, it keeps them fit and makes their health stronger. Any street game is beneficial for mental health, because playing in the fresh air especially in sunny and bright weather conditions is positive for mental health and mood. Secondly, young generation train their physical skills doing different outdoor activities. Moreover, being involved into any social action children improve and upgrade their communication skills via interaction with each other. Finally, kids and youth expand their horizons in cooperating with outside world.

At the same time I should admit that such modern way of spending time like playing computer games are dominating now. It became difficult to explain children the benefits of physical activities. Computer games seized fully children's free time that's why they are losing soft skills. Young generation suffer from mental health disorders, obesity, lack of interest to education, parents and real life. This virtual reality trend should be under the full control of parents and the have to explain children all the disadvantages of computer and advantages of outdoor activities.

To sum up outdoor activities can be really attractive to children with help of different sports and entertainment clubs, School programs and family trips. Computer games won't disappear, but they should be mixed with real life useful activities.

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