[Meidoraeka R] Writing Practice Test 209560

The diagram above explains information about the stage of creating carbonated drinks. There are 5 steps to follow from raw ingredients, half processed ingredients, until the finished product.

Firstly, water purifying. At that stage, raw water will be filtered in a water softener machine from the chemicals contained. Secondly, the water softener machine will connect to a pump and it will distribute the water to electric heaters. This activity called heating, evaporation, and carbonation. After the water got evaporated, it flows through the cooling pipe into a big tank which filled with carbon dioxide. The water and carbon dioxide will react then the result is carbonated water.

Thirdly, the carbonation machine that links to the mixing tank will dish out the carbonated water to go through a stirring process. Inside the tank, it will be given a color, syrup, and flavor to make it tasty. The fourth called filtering and filling. There will be several bottles and cans that ready to be filled. After the drinks are set, it enters the last stage, packaging. Those bottles and cans will be inputted into a box or cartoon before it's perfectly complete to deliver to the shopping center.

There is a group of people who creates a statement that outdoor activities are giving more positive points than playing video games for children's development. I would like to agree with this point of view and this essay will elaborate on the benefit of playing outside a room for children's development over computer games.

First, children are normally active people. They are easily getting bored while staying in a room for a longer time. They like to see everything in nature such as plants and animals. These creatures are kids in learning centers. They learn about physical appearance, smell, sounds, and also its name.

On the other hand, playing games bring an interactive way to learn through it such as teamwork, logic, strategy, and calculating. These are also good for the kids' improvement, they still count the positive way from games. However, playing games are creating an addiction that may affect their balance in life. It may disturb their sleeping pattern or meal schedule. Playing with real stuff is more interesting than just seeing a video. Children start to understand other people while they have friends and maintain interaction with humans. Something that digital tools cannot bring to life.

To sum up, open-air activities give more strong points such as live learning centers, more attractive, and facilitate them on real interaction with a human. Despite it, indoor video games also have a good thing for children's improvement but possibly addicted to the kids and mess their discipline schedule in life.