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[Lovely Anne A] Writing Practice Test 186412

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1

This diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks is produced from a raw water.

Overall, there are five stages involve in the production of carbonated drinks before it can be supplied in the supermarkets.

First stage is the passing of the raw water in a filter for cleaning wherein water softener and chemicals may be added. And then it will pass through a pump that will go to the starting phase of stage 2 which is the heating evaporation and carbonation. In this stage, the cleaned water will go to an electric heaters to the cooling pipe then mix with the carbon dioxide producing carbonated water.

Then stage 3 comes, carbonated water goes to the big tank to mix with some colouring, syrup and added flavour. On stage 4, the mixed carbonated water will again filtered and filled in their respective bottles and cans. The final stage of the production is the packing and supplying of the final product to the supermarkets.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

Base on experience, I strongly agree that doing outdoor activities will have a great impact in children's development than playing computer games.

As i remember in my childhood days, my parents always allows me to play outside with my friends, this helps me develop my self confidence and on how to deal with different people although i am not that sporty as them. There are some activities that might help us build good relationship with others, one of those is playing the traditional Piko. We also have chinese garter game, the patintero game wherein it will help you test your skills in being a good team leader. Those games are just some of the outdoors activities that we can do in order for us to grow our inner self with the help of other people.

However, compared with today's generation, wherein playing computer games is truly a hit for young children, they may sometimes, not develop their skills in coping up with other people because they will choose to stay at home, hold their joystick, put up the headphone and play alone. In the extent that they will easily gets annoyed when someone calls them for something or even for food. Playing games will only develop their own self and their mind but not the skills of having to intercact with friends.

In conclusion, having some outdoor activities for childrens wether it is sports or just a group game can help in the development not only for themselves but also to those children who they interact with.

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