WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Sample:
The graph compares the number of foreign travellers that visited the United Kingdom for three different reasons over a twenty-year period from 1989 to 2009.
In general, holiday was the main reason prompting foreign tourists to come to the UK, although its figure fluctuated wildly over the period. In contrast, visitors who travelled to the country for work and to meet acquaintances saw a significant increase over the years.
Looking at the chart in more detail, it is clear that at the beginning of the period, travelling for holiday was the most popular reason, with about 6.5 million foreigners doing so in the UK. This number remained the same in the next two years, before experiencing some fluctuation. Despite some ups and downs, the number of overseas visitors on vacation reached the peak of 9 million in 1994 and 2009, and was at the lowest point of 6.5 million at the start as well as in 2004.
On the other hand, other statistics showed very similar upward trends. At first, foreigners on business trips stood at 5 million in 1989. After a slight drop, this number managed to increase gradually to reach the highest point of 8 million in 2008, before declining marginally to 7 million at the end of the period. Similarly, there were approximately 3.5 million tourists who arrived in the UK to meet friends and family members. Then, this figure experienced a moderate and steady rise, reaching 7 million in 2008, before declining slightly to 6 million in 2009.
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The bar charts illustrate the comparison of the proportion of services arriving on time for a bus company between actual and target, and the statistics of the number of complaints per thousand travelers from 1999 to 2003.
Overall, it can be seen that the bus company performed worse than the target in all years, especially in 2000, except in 2003 when the actual service level was better than the target. Additionally, except for 2001, the number of complaints increased continuously from 1999 to 2003.
Examining the first bar chart in detail, in 1999, the actual service arrival on time was 85%, which was 1% lower than the target. In the following year, although the target remained the same as 1999 at 86%, the result represented a dramatic decrease to 82%. In 2001 and 2002, the bus company set the target at 85%. Although they were unable to achieve the KPI, the gaps between actual and target narrowed down to just 0.5% to 1%. Finally, in 2003, it was the only year they could achieve their target at 84.5%, with the actual rate just under 85%.
Moving to the next bar chart, in 1999, the number of complaints was the lowest at just under 70 complaints per thousand passenger journeys. The number increased significantly to 100 in the following year before dropping to just over 80 in 2001. However, the figure rose considerably to approximately 110 in 2002 and further climbed to reach its peak at 120 in 2003.
Nowadays, there are many students that have difficulties keeeping up their concentration during classes. In my opinion, the reasons related to this lack of concentration is due to the present school enviroment and how lessons are structured.
Firstly, teachers need to improve the quality of their lessons. In our school system, students learn new things from a person who’s only talking and showing slided for an hour or more. Not only the lesson can result heavy and boring, but also student can lose their concentration easily. Consequently, they do not learn nothing. So, the question is: how students can pay attention for the duration of the entire class? For example, teachers could involve their pupils with some interactive exercises, such as speaking or comparing toughts with their peers. Moreover, showing and teaching actual and real events is another way to not lose attention, since there are taught true facts that can stay more vivid in student’s mind.
Secondly, school enviroment needs to be reconsiderated. Many young people think that school is a dull place, where they can not have fun. In this way, their interest for subjects and learning things can be lost. For instance, teachers and school cordinators should make students choose what subjects they really like and make them do project in groups, having them interact with other peers. In addition, make them work in groups is a way to pay attention on what the others think. Consequently, not only they are expanding their knowledge on what they are interested in, but also they are making friends and being social.
Provided are two bar charts illustrating the performance of a bus company regarding its punctuality and the number of complaints received from 1999 to 2003.
In the provided charts, it is noted that the bus company usually falls short of its targeted percentage of services arriving on time. Yet, its service was on time over 80% of the time. Considering the number of complaints received, there is a constant increment in the number of complaints received on and after 2001.
For the on-time rate, the bus company fell short of its expectations in 4 out of 5 years during the period provided. Yet, most of the time its difference is within 1 percent. Except for 2000, where the actual on-time rate was 4 percent less than its expectation. For the only year (2003) where a better-than-expected on-time rate is observed, it was still lower than its expectation in the previous year. Also, the targeted on-time rate was adjusted downward every other year.
For the number of complaints received, more than half of the time there were over a hundred thousand complaints received in the year. In general, an increment trend is observed. There are two peaks observed in the provided datum, namely in the years 2000 and 2003. The second peak is higher than the first one for 20 thousand complaints.
It is interesting to note that despite the actual on-time rate generally showing an increasing trend, there is still an increasing number of complaints received by the company.
The chart manifests about the accomplishments in terms of timeliness, in both actual and target of the bus company. and whereas the other chart illustrates about the volume of complaints and travelers in the bus.
Overall the pivotal point of graph is percentage of targeted services was dropped for 2 years, and the actual services was less than targeted services.
In the time frame between 1999 and 2000 target services was 86% nevertheless whereas 85% services was offered in 1999 and 82%of services in 2000.The targeted services In 2001 and 2002 was 85% but whilst the actually services in 2001 was slightly less than targeted services and 84% in 2002. In 2003 the actual services was slightly than targeted services in 2002 the targeted services just less than actual service offered in 2003.
The complaints had proliferated for every year in 1999 70complaints had received per thousand passenger's then it surpassed to 100 in 2000 in 2001 it dipped to just above 80 complaints followed by the year 2002 it proliferated to 110complaints. in 2003 it rose to 120complaints.
many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, most students have been having difficulties paying attention during classes. Although they make an effort to focus on the class it is a hard task. This essay will discuss what are probably the reasons for this problem and what can be done to address it.
To begin with, many students are experiencing a hard time concentrating on their studies due to several reasons. Firstly, the distractions of social media applications from their mobile phones. For instance, Facebook and Instagram, purposefully strive for engagement by pushing real-time updates on friends and viral videos that young users find difficult to ignore during classes. Secondly, students are getting distractions from online games. This definitely bothers their focus while they are studying and what they think is only how can they continue the game level on their devices. For example, surveys conducted by many high schools around the world point out that more than 70 percent of students playing video games are having a hard time concentrating on schooling.
To address those causes, I would propose two solutions. Firstly, schools should impose a complete ban on portable devices in classrooms. All personal handsets could be stored in a secured room and returned to their owners after classes. This would effectively block the stream of potential distractions from online networking sites. Secondly, limiting students from playing online video games at home. By reducing the intensity for young pupils, is considered effective in increasing students' focus on learning at school. For example, Havard University has already researched those solutions and according to the information collected, it can be concluded that the student's achievements are significantly improved due to restrictions practiced by the local schools in some areas in the USA.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why students find it difficult to focus on studying due to the advent of social networking platforms and video games. However, if schools adopt handset-free classroom policies and students can discipline their time to play video games, that issue will be resolved in a short time
The bar chart shows the performance of a bus company, with regards to punctuality, giving the target and actual percentages, as well as the number of complaints per 1000 passengers between the years 1999 to 2003. Overall, the targeted level of punctuality was consistently at 85% and above over the five year period, except for the year 2003 where the target fell to 84.5%. On the other hand, actual figures of the prompt arrival of buses has always fallen below target, except for the year 2003. Furthermore, the year 2000 was an abysmal year with the actual percentage of buses arriving on time plummeting to 82%. In addition, passenger complaints was on a steady rise with the complaints spiking to 100 complaints per thousand passengers in the year 2000 from about 70 complaints the previous year. The complaints crashed to about 85 in 2001 and continued on an upward trend till it peaked at 120 in 2003.
The two bar charts separately provide information about the performance of the bus company in terms of punctuality, what was the target and how much they achieved and the number of complaints per thousand passenger journeys.
In 1999, the target for arriving on time was 86% and the achieved was 85% and for the year 2000 the target remains the same at 86% and the achieved was 82%. In 2001 and 2002 the target for arriving on time was reduced to 85% while the achieved was 84.5% in 2001 and 84% in 2002. However, in 2003 the target was 84.5% which was slightly over-achieved compared to the previous years.
The customer complaints were around 65 thousand in 1999, which has increased to 100 thousand in 2000. In 2001 there was a drop in customer complaints and from 2001 an upward trend has been seen reaching the total number of complaints reaching 120 thousand in 2003.
Overall, in 2003 the actual achieved number was slightly above the target for arriving on time. However, the number of complaints from passenger were high in the same year.
Most of the students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. In this essay, I will discuss what are the reasons and how this can be tackled.
There are numerous reasons associated when it comes to student’s concentration or focusing problems. The very first is the exposure to technology such as computer games and mobile phones. Most of the students are allowed to access cell phone, the internet, and computer, through which they gain a lot of information that is sometimes not essential and get stored in their brain. Which they recall while doing a monotonous task or a task that needs focus. They are constantly indulging in the thoughts of playing games or action movies and heroes, which distract them while studying by diverting their focus.
This problem can be solved by altering the distractions. Due to the availability of resources these days students are allowed to use cell phones, the Internet, and computers by their parents. They are being given these devices/platforms to extract information and be “Tech savvy” from a young age. However, most parents do not have control over what their kids are watching and how it will impact their brain development. Parental control plays a key role here to solving this issue. Also, exposing them to indoor games such as video games or computer games instead of outdoor games, leads to develop aggression and other emotional traits in them.
In conclusion, there are numerous ways to solve this issue. However, if the parents and teachers with proper intervention limit students' exposure to technology and allow them to play more outdoor games, rather than being fussy. This will lead students to develop their thought processes and concentration power.
Owing to growing addiction of gadgets and dependencies on technology, has reduced the focus time of youngsters specially towards studies. The online games, social media such as Facebook, and many such digital platforms have impacted the concentration levels of adolescents, who are considered to be impressionable. It is imperative to reduce the usage of such technologies and proper intervention is required from both parents and school teachers. This will help students realize the aftermaths of loosing out on studies now, and will help them save their future.
First of all, it is quite evident in today's surroundings how advertisements and social media trends affect children get into habits of gaming and chatting. For example, Whatsapp and Facebook have statistically proven to be the most used apps among young people, and consume majority of their day, which leaves little to no room for studies. Moreover, the game company's advertise in such a way, that they target these impressionable minds, who are not matured enough to understand hazards of this addiction towards games. They miss out on valuable studies, and regret it later when they find themselves in the abyss of depression and no way out to regain their lost time.
Having said that, only the games and digitalized media cannot be blamed completely. As a society, the responsibilities lie with the parents and school authorities too. They need to arrange counselling sessions and interventions if required, explaining the demerits of the technology, importance of time and studies, and given career-guidance. This will ensure that children make sound decisions and not based on alluring advertisements.
To conclude, the young minds must be enlightened with the facts and details about the distracting technologies, They must be made aware about their career goals. With proper guidance and motivation, they would be able to stay adrift of this addiction, and concentration will improve towards studies. If such efforts are made by all, it will ensure that coming generation is righteous in decision making, focused and it will enrich our community with knowledgeable youngsters.
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Usually, people cross by a school for at least 12 years, some of them can be good students, whose it is easily the learning process, and another group of students are who try to be good students but it is difficult to concentrate in class and at the end they do not understand too much. This effect can be explained by disorder around the student or even by classmates who speak during the class.
Without a doubt, the disorder is a big distractor for any activity, If there are a lot of things around the person, there is a high probability that the individual will not be focused on the task, that is the same reason for any student, if he has a lot of papers around him, he will not feel free to pay attention on the main activity because he will read, play or think in the papers. Even if the student has a smartphone close to him, he will probably take it to start watching any app, see the gallery, or just scroll down and up the screen.
In addition, classmates play an important role in the learning process of a student, because the student always shares the space and time with them, so if they are in class but his schoolmates just talk or launch little papers at another one to start a conversation by papers, this affects the guy who is trying to pay attention in the class.
In conclusion, it is essential to count on great teachers who try to keep control of the classroom, such as promoting cleanliness and order, silence when someone is talking, and ensuring that students are understanding by asking some questions about the topic that it has taught. All of these strategies help students to concentrate at school and improve their learning process.