WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.
You should write at least 150 words.
Sample:
The map displays the layout of a school in 1985 and now.
Overall, it is obvious that a great number of new facilities have been constructed in this school to cater for the needs of the growing student population.
In 1985, with a students’ population size of 1500, the school used to have a rectangular car park and a road located in the north of the school. In the eastern part of the school, there was a classroom block with two levels. A large playing area was situated in the southern part of the map, and to the west of the school, there were some buildings including an office, a library, a small car park, and a small classroom block.
At present, the population of this school has increased significantly to 2300. The car park in the north remains but its size is slightly smaller. To the west of the school, the classroom block has been renovated with the addition of the third storey so as to accommodate a substantially increasing number of students. The playing grounds in the south have been redeveloped to make way for a brand new pool and fitness centre. On the left of the school’s layout, the small car park has been demolished to construct some new classrooms, and the library has been converted into a learning resource centre with a computer room.
(228 words)
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I'm really how this guy score a band 8 despite using some of the simplest vocabulary. I put it on ChatGPT and that was the score it provided. Not sure if this is credible or not
I think that in IELTS exam we cannot use " I ". is that correct ?
what should we use back then?
we can use I, I normally used it to give conlcusion only. "In conclusion, I strongly advocate for...."
it's acceptable to use them though. This is an opinion essay, and use "I" is certainly needed to clarify your position
so we use what?
my teacher said me we cannot use 'I will or I am gonna explain' in essays but the person used it in this essay. Is that right or not? can someone explain me that?
"I will" is totally acceptable, because if I'm not mistaken it expresses your position or opinion, any things equal to that, straightforward. But make sure you only use it in the introduction and conclusion, as body paragraphs are reserved for general academic explanations. Also, for "I am gonna explain", it's definitely a big no-no, cause it's an informal way to address yourself and only found in daily life text messages