
5 Ways to Plan IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay to Score Band 8
Planning is like the skeleton of an essay. It is important to plan the essay before you start writing it. The essay plan will act like a map and give you directions about where to go next.
The following steps are very essential in planning an essay.
1. Read the essay topic intently
Most of the students fail to understand the topic and hence, answer the wrong question. To get your answer right, spend some time getting your question right.
Write an essay on the following topic
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
In the above question you are required to discuss the problems and solutions for the given topic. If you fail to understand the question well and instead discuss the causes and effects for the same topic, you might end up losing your band.
You can ensure proper identification of the topic by highlighting keywords in the question, so that you don’t stray off the topic
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
2. Develop focus questions
Once you have identified your task in the topic, create two focus questions. These will act as paragraph guides and also keep you from going off the topic
- What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- How can we tackle these problems?
3. Form your body paragraphs
The normal structure of an essay has three essentials:-
Introduction
Body paragraphs
Conclusion
While planning your essay, think about how many body paragraphs you would like to include.
Generally, the body paragraphs shouldn’t be less than two or more than three.
Now, for the given topic you can have one paragraph for problems and two paragraphs for solutions.
Always remember, each paragraph must have only one controlling idea. You cannot talk about solutions in the paragraph where you would discuss problems.
4. Answer your focus questions
Now that you have decided on the number of paragraphs, you must think about 2 to 3 points under each focus question.
What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- Overcrowding
- Poor facilities
- High Cost of Living
How can we tackle these problems?
- Government must spread awareness
- Individuals must take responsibility
5. Model P-E-E
Once you have noted down your main points, you must think about sub-points to elaborate and extend your ideas.
Model P-E-E (Point-Explain-Example) is a helpful tool for those who struggle with this task.
You first state your point, then explain it further and also give an example to support your idea. After you have added supporting points to your main points, this what your planned essay should look like.
THE ESSAY PLAN
Focus Question – What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- Point – Overcrowding
- Sub-Points – (demand exceeds supply, depletion of natural resources)
Example – reckless cutting down of forests to facilitate housing needs
- Point – Poor Facilities and High Cost of Living
- Sub-Points– (poor infrastructure, no health and hygiene facilities)
Focus Question – How can we tackle these problems?
- Point – Government must take steps
- Sub-Points– (introduce policies, spread awareness,)
Example – family planning programs and effective birth control
- Point – Individuals must take responsibility
- Sub-Points– (educate themselves about birth control methods, co-operate with the Government to control overpopulation)
Comments:
The first pie chart shows the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 2007 and second pie chart shows the same for the year 1991.
There has been a drastic increase in number of houses in UK from 22 million homes in 1991 to 27 million homes in 2007. In the pie charts, the mode of procurement of homes is categorised into four types, they are home ownership, social renting, private renting and social housing.
Home ownership accounted for major share of the pie in both years and social housing got the least share in both years. There was a considerable increase in home ownership from 1991 to 2007 and the percentage of homes under social renting and social housing were halved in 2007 from 1991 figures. However, the percentage of people living under private renting remained same in both years.
Overall, more people have moved to owning a house than living under social renting and social housing which indicates that economic status of people living in UK has improved over the years.
It is true that in some countries people spend long hours at work and it happens for several reasons including development of economy, market competition, maximisation of individual wealth, etc. I feel that there are both positive and negative ways of looking at this. However, the negatives outweigh the positives.
People work for long hours in order to achieve great things in life. Long hours of work has helped people to become billionaires. People like Jeff bezos, Jack ma, Elon Musk and Gary Vee have spent most of their waking hours working. In fact, there was a time when Elon Musk used to sleep for just one hour a day and that hard work has paid off. He is one of the most richest people on Earth. It is fine for people living in developed countries to work less, but people in developing countries like India, China and Brazil, work for longer hours in order to survive. The companies in these economies want to work longer to dominate the market and to have an edge over their competitors because of the universal rule, who works more, achieves more.
However, it is unfair that people have to work this hard and long. Why do we live? People these days are born to work until they die. Is this how the system is supposed to be? I don't think so. People must be able to spend time with their family and friends which is becoming uncommon these days. Even entrepreneurs like Elon Musk have said that people should not work this hard. It is not true that people who work less don't succeed. Take examples of countries like Norway, Denmark and Netherlands where people work for lesser hours and still enjoy life as good as people who work for longer hours in countries like India and China.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people should not keep working for major time of their lives. They must spend time with their loved ones more than they spend time at office. In fact, recent studies have shown that people who work for several hours together are less productive.
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In today's society everything needs to be done as fast as possible with good quality. Many people choose to work long hours because of a few reasons. It can be because of supporting their family's needs, getting higher position in the company they work for or the need of being busy all the time. Reasons for that can be differentWe for everybody. There are good and bad sides of that and some of them will be shown in this paper.
What we know is that with hard work and many hours in the office or our work place we can earn better position with higher payment. With that comes more responsibilities but more benefits as well. We are able to afford more trips, own a home, provide better life for our children and live a life with less worries. It can motivate us and to give us passion about our work. Depending on the job we do it can make us feel good about ourselves and to help the people around us. For example working for NGO as Green peace it helps many people and our planet. However there are many good and bad sides of working more than our usual hours.
The negative side it can be bad mental health, often feeling tired and with less energy at home. Partners can split or divorce because of too much ambition at work and less time spend together. If the expectations after many working hours are not met then the person would be disappointed and out of inspiration. That would affect everyone around us and it can lead to the use of alcohol or other addictive things.
Overall we have to find the balance between healthy working hours and free time. Ambition is never a bad quality to have unless it gets dangerous for us. It can take us far or change our lives in bad direction.