Planning is like the skeleton of an essay. It is important to plan the essay before you start writing it. The essay plan will act like a map and give you directions about where to go next.
The following steps are very essential in planning an essay.
1. Read the essay topic intently
Most of the students fail to understand the topic and hence, answer the wrong question. To get your answer right, spend some time getting your question right.
Write an essay on the following topic
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
In the above question you are required to discuss the problems and solutions for the given topic. If you fail to understand the question well and instead discuss the causes and effects for the same topic, you might end up losing your band.
You can ensure proper identification of the topic by highlighting keywords in the question, so that you don’t stray off the topic
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
2. Develop focus questions
Once you have identified your task in the topic, create two focus questions. These will act as paragraph guides and also keep you from going off the topic
- What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- How can we tackle these problems?
3. Form your body paragraphs
The normal structure of an essay has three essentials:-
Introduction
Body paragraphs
Conclusion
While planning your essay, think about how many body paragraphs you would like to include.
Generally, the body paragraphs shouldn’t be less than two or more than three.
Now, for the given topic you can have one paragraph for problems and two paragraphs for solutions.
Always remember, each paragraph must have only one controlling idea. You cannot talk about solutions in the paragraph where you would discuss problems.
4. Answer your focus questions
Now that you have decided on the number of paragraphs, you must think about 2 to 3 points under each focus question.
What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- Overcrowding
- Poor facilities
- High Cost of Living
How can we tackle these problems?
- Government must spread awareness
- Individuals must take responsibility
5. Model P-E-E
Once you have noted down your main points, you must think about sub-points to elaborate and extend your ideas.
Model P-E-E (Point-Explain-Example) is a helpful tool for those who struggle with this task.
You first state your point, then explain it further and also give an example to support your idea. After you have added supporting points to your main points, this what your planned essay should look like.
THE ESSAY PLAN
Focus Question – What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
- Point – Overcrowding
- Sub-Points – (demand exceeds supply, depletion of natural resources)
Example – reckless cutting down of forests to facilitate housing needs
- Point – Poor Facilities and High Cost of Living
- Sub-Points– (poor infrastructure, no health and hygiene facilities)
Focus Question – How can we tackle these problems?
- Point – Government must take steps
- Sub-Points– (introduce policies, spread awareness,)
Example – family planning programs and effective birth control
- Point – Individuals must take responsibility
- Sub-Points– (educate themselves about birth control methods, co-operate with the Government to control overpopulation)
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets.
Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
A highly controversial issue today relates to prioritising the expenditure of public money. Majority of the people believe that government should allocate funds wisely. In this essay I am going to discuss both sides of the argument before reaching a final conclusion.
Primary reason we have to take into consideration is that authorities should spend the money with great care and should make a good balance between necessaties and luxuries. The main reason for believing this is that our planet is facing a lot of survival difficulties in context of weather changes, global warming, poverty and many more. It is widely accepted that saving our mother planet will definitely increase the life expectancy of its inhabitants. One good illustration of this is rapidly increasing global warming effects on atmosphere. Appropriate policy making along with financial aid allocation can reduce it leading to favorable environment for people to enjoy a healthy life.
On the other hand, it is believed that government should spend public taxes on advancement of other planets, making them a place to live. It is often argued that one must flourish in every field of life ignoring the fact that one must address the major issues first. A particular good example here is of Dubai, which made itself the most attractive place for tourists by investing a quite good amount for public security and its betterment rather than wasting the taxes and public money on space experiments.
In my opinion officials should spend money on solving the problems on earth first and then they should think of the other businesses.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that public money should be spent according to necessaties rather than wasting on useless purposes.
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