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5 Ways to Plan IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay to Score Band 8

5 Ways to Plan IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay to Score Band 8

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Planning is like the skeleton of an essay. It is important to plan the essay before you start writing it. The essay plan will act like a map and give you directions about where to go next.
The following steps are very essential in planning an essay.
1. Read the essay topic intently

Most of the students fail to understand the topic and hence, answer the wrong question. To get your answer right, spend some time getting your question right.
Write an essay on the following topic

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
In the above question you are required to discuss the problems and solutions for the given topic. If you fail to understand the question well and instead discuss the causes and effects for the same topic, you might end up losing your band.
You can ensure proper identification of the topic by highlighting keywords in the question, so that you don’t stray off the topic
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
2. Develop focus questions
Once you have identified your task in the topic, create two focus questions. These will act as paragraph guides and also keep you from going off the topic

  1. What problems do we face due to overpopulation?
  2. How can we tackle these problems?

3. Form your body paragraphs
The normal structure of an essay has three essentials:-
Introduction
Body paragraphs
Conclusion

While planning your essay, think about how many body paragraphs you would like to include.
Generally, the body paragraphs shouldn’t be less than two or more than three.
Now, for the given topic you can have one paragraph for problems and two paragraphs for solutions.

Always remember, each paragraph must have only one controlling idea. You cannot talk about solutions in the paragraph where you would discuss problems.

4. Answer your focus questions
Now that you have decided on the number of paragraphs, you must think about 2 to 3 points under each focus question.

What problems do we face due to overpopulation?

  1. Overcrowding
  2. Poor facilities
  3. High Cost of Living

How can we tackle these problems?

  1. Government must spread awareness
  2. Individuals must take responsibility

5. Model P-E-E
Once you have noted down your main points, you must think about sub-points to elaborate and extend your ideas.
Model P-E-E (Point-Explain-Example) is a helpful tool for those who struggle with this task.
You first state your point, then explain it further and also give an example to support your idea. After you have added supporting points to your main points, this what your planned essay should look like.
THE ESSAY PLAN

Focus Question – What problems do we face due to overpopulation?

  1. Point – Overcrowding
  2. Sub-Points – (demand exceeds supply, depletion of natural resources)

Example reckless cutting down of forests to facilitate housing needs

 

  1. Point – Poor Facilities and High Cost of Living
  2. Sub-Points(poor infrastructure, no health and hygiene facilities)

 

 

Focus Question – How can we tackle these problems?

 

  1. Point – Government must take steps
  2. Sub-Points– (introduce policies, spread awareness,)

Example – family planning programs and effective birth control

 

  1. Point – Individuals must take responsibility
  2. Sub-Points(educate themselves about birth control methods, co-operate with the Government to control overpopulation)

 

 

 
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Elizabeth ogechi Uka

Thanks a million times.
i found your tips quite beneficial.

haneen

Regarding writing the problems in one paragraph and the solutions in two paragraphs , why we cannot discuss the problem with its solution in the same paragraph ??

It will be confusing

You can, but it's harder to do.

Anonymous

so this points can only get you a band 6? are you kidding me?

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Nice explanation! I've learnt some necessary aspects to improve writing skills. Arigato

This is  a good tip however it does not solve the problem of getting at least 6. If you follow these tips but if your grammar, connection sentences, coherence and vocabulary have a few errors....you get the same 5 or 5.5.
Also, there is a remark and it is very confusing about P-E-E. Some Teachers say you should not loss the focus about the topic and if you introduce other problems as "depletion of nature resources" is not a good idea to introduce.
Anyway just wondering who assess to IELTS evaluators , maybe each of them has different criteria? I saw very good essays but only getting 5.5 and 6. even using a good connectors, vocabulary, grammar, structures and following those tips but the maximum they got is 6.5. I am asking if it is fair all the time or just lucky if evaluator is relaxing when assess your essay.

I am strongly agree with you !!

Anonymous In reply to haneen

I strongly agree with you !

I strongly agree with you !!

shit...im getting the exam tmr..

Your writing is graded according to different criteria. Yes, if your grammar and use of vocabulary is very poor it's unlikely you will score an overall 6, but poor organization is a big problem with a lot of candidates, and this often drags the mark down.
IELTS marking in writing and speaking is regularly assessed to ensure it is fair and standardized. Each marker works to the same criteria everywhere in the world,

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great tips indeed

Anonymous

Its good , but in task-1,I alway face a problem that my words limit is always more than 150 and so how can i tackle  this problem?

doesn't matter. in fact it is always better to write more than the word limit.

DanOnu

Well done! I have learnt some very important tips that will surely help me here.

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