[Bonsu D] Writing Practice Test 1001767

The line graph compares the maximum and minimum daily temperatures in Brisband and Canberra averagely. The bar chart also provides detail on the average daily rainfall recorded in the same cities.

Overall, temperature was very high in both cities in February whilst it was low in July. Also, higher amounts of rainfall was recorded in Brisband in the first quarter and last month of the year where as the opppsite was true for Canberra which saw significant proportions of rainfall in the middle of the year.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, starting around 27 degree celcius, the maximum temperature in Brisband saw some fluctuations reaching 20 degree Celsius in July. It rose steadily reaching nearly 30 degree Celsius in the latter part of the year. The minimum temperature in the same city began at 20 degrees and climaxed with 20 degree despite some drop in the middle quarter of the year. The maximum and minimum daily temperatures in Canberra started around 25 degrees and 10 degrees respectively and culminated with a proportion slightly above 25 degrees and 10 degrees respectively.

In the first three months, rainfall in Brisband was higher around 12 to 14 compared to Canberra. Nonetheless, that of Canberra was higher than Brisband with a figure more or less 10 from June to October despite some minor drop in August.

An increasing section of the public are opting for cosmetic surgery to look beautiful. This essay shall put forth reasons for this new trend, however, I think this is a negative development because it upsets family budget and also have detrimental effects.

Admittedly, cosmetic surgeries help improve upon some people's general appearance thereby boosting their confidence level. Some people instead of avoiding sedentary lifestyles and also checking their diets opt for cosmetic operations to get rid of excess fats from their body tissues. In the long run, they can join modelling agencies which would fetch them contracts and hence a lot of money.

Nonetheless, to perform such surgeries, one requires huge sums of money for the specialist who will undertake the operation. The money which could have been used to undertake a viable project by the individual is being used for this. Also, to maintain that particular shape, they have to revisit these specialist facilities for months after the procedure which also requires money. Secondly, prior to the surgery, certain chemicals are injected into the body to help shrink some fats before the surgical incision is made. Every patient undergoing surgery is also at risk of infections since the integrity of the skin is compromised. The adverse effects to this may be chronic infections, paralysis or death.

In conclusion, cosmetic surgeries enhance people's self esteem and also fetch them huge sums of money when they enter into modelling. Nevertheless, the upset of family budget and the detrimental effects such as chronic infections, paralysis or death attached to it cannot be overlooked.