[Nielsen L] Writing Practice Test 1338952

the line graph provide 4 different type of transport people in one of the european state used to commute in 3 different years.

in 1960s, the highest percentage of transport people used was bus with almost 40 percent of commuters. with that, it is also makes the bus at that year the highest of all time. and then followed by tube with 28 percent and train 19 percent. lastly, car with only 7 percent and makes it is the lowest of all time compared to another transport.

in 1980s, there was only slight different among the 4 transport people used at that time. the highest was train and followed by bus with only 2 percent different. and next was car and tube with only 1 percent different.

in 2000s, the highest at that time and also the second highest of all time was car with 38 percent. then followed by tube,train, and bus.

in this past decade children that got obesity in the western country has risen quite significant by almost 20 percent. this essay will provide the causes and effect of this problem with an example and explanation.

firstly, the causes of this problem are from the supervisor of the children that is their parents. parents must controlling their children meals everyday by cooking some healthy food for them. but unfortunately nowadays many parents out there did not have much time to prepare food for their children because they busy with another matter like work and etc. and because of that they prefer to buy fast food to feed their kid but as we all know fast food is unhealthy and greasy that makes the children whom consume alot of fast food become obesity and sick. for example as we can see nowadays fast food restaurant are more crowded with children and student because their parents did not preparing food for them and because its more cheap and instant.

and because of that, the effect of this problem is it can ruin their future. when they become obesity their body immune will become weak that makes possibility for a disease or even cancer to infected them. for instance, there is a youtuber that created mukbang channel for several years. at first started he still look healthy and thin but after several years of producing mukbang content with eating fast food, last year the youtuber was founded pass away because some illness.

in conclusions, parents or supervisor need to pay more attention to their children to keep them always eating healthy food and do some exercise.