[Bùi N] Writing Practice Test 1325861

The given chart illustrates information about different occupations in the UK along with their average salary. Whereas, the table below shows the weekly working hours for each occupation.

In general, among four surveyed professions, underground drivers are those who have the highest salary although they have the smallest number of working hours. In addition, firefighters are also have a high salary, however, they have to work longer compared to the others.

On average, underground drivers just have to work 36 hours, but their salary can reach 50000 pounds in when started, and another 1000 pounds after working three years. Although firefighters could also get a high salary of 40000 pounds in the firts three years and 41000 pounds from the fourth year, they have to work 55 hours a week, 19 hours more than those who work as a driver.

Polices and nurses also have a longer working hours compared to underground drivers, 40 hours and 38 hours weekly, respectively. However, their salaries are much lower, nurses can earn 18000 pounds in the first three years of working, just one-third of that of drivers. Whereas, salary of polices is a little bit higher, stands at 21000 pounds on average.

In community, there is an argument on which subjects children should study at school. Some people assume that students have to study all subjects that are taught at school, while others believe that they just need to learn their interested subjects or what they are really good at. In my opinion, children should study a variety of courses which are essential for their development, but teachers still can spend more time instructing them on some subjects that they do better.

On the one hand, teaching students on different fields can bring them a wide range of benefits. First of all, this educational method would help children have a sufficient deveopment, both their academic background and characteristic. For example, while math, chemistry, or physic can supply them with basic knowledge and improve their logical thinking ability, other subjects such as history, or language would help them understand more about society and cultures, from that they can enhance their important soft skills. Another advantage of having more subject at school is to help students have more experiences and comfortable time there. Some subjects like music or arts would be the suitable time for them to relax after streeful studying hours and have better academic performance.

On the other hand, teachers should also spend more time observing to discover which subjects their students really good at. From that, they can design a suitable study program and method for each student to help them strengthen their strong points. In fact, Vietnamese teachers usually use this method to find good students who then would participate in some competitions for top perfomance students. This method could also be applicated in helping students have the best orientation to their major at university and career path.

In conclusion, the best educational system should supply children with a variety of subjects at school and can also facilitate them to develop their special abilities. This method would bring help them have a sufficient development, meaningful time at school, and a bright future.