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[VIet N] Writing Practice Test 1319640

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words.

It is believed that people living in developed countries do not find it fulfilled when there are additional increases in their national economy. In my opinion, I do not agree with this view.

Due to the fact that citizens living in rich nations have had mostly all of their fundamental needs covered, the marginal utility of money will gradually decrease. Therefore, these people, after reaching a certain level of satisfaction, will not work for money as hard as their poorer neighbors.

On the other hand, even though they do not have to worry about living in the lack of physical needs, wealthy nation's citizens still have higher goals in the mental and spiritual realm. Many of these people continue to spend their time supporting the community around their area or even in other nations. Some continue to work and earn largely additional amount of money so that they can keep their businesses, pay their employees or simply keeps chasing their dreams. Elon Musk is the richest man alive and he continues to work 14 to 16 hours a day. The billionaire still want to earn more money so that he can build a stronger financial foundation and make his dreams of turning humanity into a multi-planet species come to reality.

In conclusion, despite having all of their physical needs covered, people living in wealthy nations still find an additional increase in economic wealth satisfied because they can use that extra money to solve many problems and to bring a better life for humanity.

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