[Haifa D] Writing Practice Test 99337

The graph shown illustrates the American employments evaluation between 1930 and 2010 . divided into five carriers.

Overall, over the period of 1930 farming, fishing and foresting were the most common carriers before dramatical fall when the advance of time in 2010 the industrial workers rose significantly to become the top career with the amount of employers .

In regards of agriculture, fishing and frosting a few decades ago in 1930 it was the most popular craft for people to work in where as shown in the figures approximately around 80 employments had exercised this specific carrier .However, over the time the number has decreased considerably reaching the year 2010 when the craft is almost ended with zero workers in that filed.

In contrary, industrial companies and employments started to rise from 1970 when the numbers kept increasing dramatically to reach the peak in 2010 and become one of the most popular work field in that particular period .

Many worker in education field believes that children's must learn how to play musical instruments . I tend to believe the opposite.

Many argue that children should be educating music as it is improves the child's intelligence. to be more precise , a recent studies indicates that learning an musical instrument can increase the function and ability of the brain causing a better thinking for the children's .

On the other hand , others believe that young kids must play musical instruments to communicate more with others and make more interactions with people and society . For instant , exercising music has proven to be new method of communication as it open up the mind of the child to accept others and communicate more .

However , I would argue that children's are not always required to learn music as each individual have their own intelligence and capability of their own .For example, some kids do not enjoy music and can find it difficult to learn. while in contrary , other young children's tends to learn instruments faster . Also there

are a variety of education methods that kids can gain and benefit from . To give an example, drawings , sports so is reading stories are a helpful factors to improve intelligence of some kids.

In conclusion , educationalists argue that every child is required to learn music to improve intelligence and social communication . While i believe that not every kid contains the same intelligence and ability to learn the same subjects .