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[Juliah M] Writing Practice Test 324312

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The bar chart provides information regarding the extend of pollution caused by electricity generation, transport and industry in PMM,in China, Amarica, Japan and Australia in 2021.

Generally, China faces the highest level of pollution among the three causative agents, whereas Austaria experiences the lowest pollution thought the the period. America and Japan encouters avarage pollution among the three causes throught the period.

To bein with, the level of pollution by industry rises sharply in china at 80 PPM and Japan at about 42 PPM. However there is a significant drop in extend of pollution generated by industry to approximately 29 PMM and 19 MM in America and Australia respectively. Moreover, transport level of pollution followed closely to 70 PMM in china and about 58 PMM in America while there is a drastic fall to 30PMM in Japan and approximately 28 PMM in Australia.

On the contrary, electricity generates the least pollution, china which has the highest level of pollution has 58PMM, this drops significatly to approximately 30.5 PMM in America, 15 PMM in jan and 29 PMM in Australia.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

WIth the increased sensitisation and awareness of dangers associted with smoking. Individuals still carry on with their smoking habits because of the peer pressure which leads to addiction. Fortunately this can be prevented by putting alot of emphasis on helath education regarding the dangers of smoking to the community especially youths in schools and many public places that they tent to visit.

First and foremost, individuals countinues to smoke becuse of peer influence and addiction. This is because majority of the adolescents and youths are enrolled to smoking habits by their peers which inturn leads to addiction. Moreover, they end up being humiliated by their peers if they do not indulge in such behaviour and are seen as either being more holier or outdated with current world trends. For instances, in the Kenya University students find themselves smoking bhang and cigarrates which has been introduced to them by friend, which they take up for them to fit in the group. Thus, due to feer of victimisation they end up being trapped in this abnoxious behaviours.

On the other hand, smoking can be curbbed through community sensitization in health eduction on the dangers associated with smokings such as the lung cancer. this can be done through inculcating such teaching in school curriculum to sensitize the children from their tender age the risks of smoiking because they are already exposed. Furthermore community remiders like an eye aid in public bulding such as meseum, public parks on the risks of smoking probably a daigram with various body organs struck by various disease following smoking can be quite beneficial in creating awareness to the society. For example, in my community there a number of printed diagram eye aid showing various organ disease assoiated with smoking hence this has practically reduced the number of youth smoker since they were planted. Thus, because because people believe in what they see visual aids would contribute to reduction of smoking habits.

To sum up, despite the awareness on the health dangers that arise as a result of smoking people still countinue with these habit due to peer influence. However, constant community sensitization is key in reduction of such behaviours.

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