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[wadha m] Writing Practice Test 317696

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The bar chart illustrates three sours of atmospheric pollution in 2021 which are electricity generation, transportation, and industry in four countries, namely China, America, Japan, and Australia. Unite measured in PPM.

Overall it is clear that the higher air pollution in all four countries is in China, while the lowest in Australia with significant numbers almost aligned with each other. Furthermore, in America, transportation has the highest effect among the two other causes, whereas Japan's highest effect is industry.

In terms of electricity generation, China's impact 59 PPM which is the highest effect, whereas America reaches almost 30 PPM. Next, become Australia with around 25 PPM. Japan is the lowest accounted about 18 PPM.

Turning to transportation, Australia is the lowest accounted almost 20 PPM and then become Japan with 30 PPM following up with America accounted around 60 PPM which is the highest among the two other causes. Finally China at 70 PPM.

Moving to industry, the highest country with industry pollution accounted for 80 PPM. As opposed Australia shows lowest for under 20 PPM.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Smoking is very dangerous as well known and caused many diseases. Even though many people keep doing it. Smoking not only hurts the person who is smoke but also other people around who breathe that toxic air into their body. In this essay, I'm going to explain why people keep smoking while knowing the effects of smoking and what are the available solutions.

To begin with, many people start this habit at a young age as they were teenagers because they thought that by smoking a cigarette with becoming adults. When children watch their parents smoke they will follow the habit since they believe this will make them look older. Moreover, one of the cigarette components is "Nicotine". Nicotine is widely accepted as an addictive substance that makes the human brain wants to smoke none stop.

To solve this problem, first of all, it should be illegal for parents and adults to smoke in front of children. Furthermore, the government can build a smoking room in public and streets so adults can smoke there while the children cannot see them. Moreover, cigarette companies can have nicotine-free versine cigarettes. As a result, people can receive less damage and addiction so eventually they quit.

In conclusion, smoking is a bad habit and causes many damages as well as diseases, yet people continuing doing it because most of them addicted to smoke from a young age and also because of the nicotine. In my view, to solve this problem we should use nicotine-free cigarettes and protect our children and teenagers from this habit by keep smoker people away from their eyes.

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