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[Lovely Anne A] Writing Practice Test 285767

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The bar chart illustrates the level of air pollution in four countries by three different causes such as Electricity generation, transport and industry in present year.

Overall, industry causes the most air pollution especially in China and in Japan. Moreover, the lowest level of such pollution is cause by Electricity generation.

It is clear that in China, the most commonly cause of air pollution is because of their industry 80. Secondly, it is cause by the smoke coming from the vehicles which comprises to 70 and the last one is from the electricity generation (almost 60). Whereas in America, Transport being the highest number which is almost 60, then the two more causes are with almost equal number, about 30.

Furthermore, same as in China, Japan also experience air pollution cause by their industry about 40 and dramatically drop in number for the transport and electricity generation, 30 and almost 15 respectively. On the other hand, In Australia, the levels of air pollution are almost equal for the three causes.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

We all know that cigarete smoking is dangerous to our health, but most of the people are still doing so. This essay will discuss the causes why many people are still doing the bad habit and some suggestions on how we will reduce.

There are many causes why many people specially youngsters are still smoking even if they are aware of the concequences in the future. One example is that, they usually do it because they learn it from their friends or what we call peer pressure. Sometimes, in order for you to make friends or to be in in a group, you should also do what they are doing even if you know that it is bad. Second causes is the TV advertisement that bring wrong information to the young viewer. Teenagers now a days think that whatever they see on TV, is the right thing to do not knowing that it may affect their health.

However, there are some measures that may help us in reducing smoking the society. If the social media is the one controlling the mind of the youngster now, why not use it in reminding them the bad effect of smoking in their health? They can televise some effect of cigarette and what disease they can get out of smoking so that they can have an idea on how dangerous it is to their health. Moreover, the government should take an action by implementing a law about the usage of cigarette. They should not allow the minor to use it.

In conclusion, there is not enough information on what might be the effect of cigarette smoking that is why people still doing it. They should have proper knowledge of what may it bring not only to them but also to the people around.

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