[Lin M] Writing Practice Test 226593

The chart illustrates the quantity and quality of water that was supplied to two regions such as Australia and South East Asia in 1990 and 2010.

Overall, it is notable that both the amount and quality of water supplied to Australia was by far higher and cleaner than those water supplied to South East Asia.

Firstly, in 1990, the amount of water supplied to Australia was 80% while almost 40% of water went to South East Asia region which mean the amount of water obtained by Australia was by far more than South East Asia.By the time 2010, South East Asia obtained nearly 80% of water supplied which was twice as many as the amount of water obtained in 1990.

When it comes to the cleanliness of the water, Australia experienced a moderate growth in quality of water, from around 70% in 1990 to over 80% in 2010. In contrast, The degree of water cleanliness dropped from 40% in 1990 to around 38% in 2010.

It is argued that moving from rural to urban regions is the common activity that people from all over the world do today and it somehow contribute some problems in a society. This essay will suggest that one of the prime causes of this moment is scracity of job opportunities in remote regions and submit creating employment opportunities as a solution.

First and foremost, people who live in countryside tend to consider moving to urban and populous regions because they cannot find proper jobs in their surroundings. Most of the companies are likely to operate their business in urban cities where transportation system is advanced and city facilities are just near their operation zone. For instance, according to the survey that was conducted by rural university association, around 70% of the fresh graduates consider moving to urban cities so as to get well paid job and safe working environment.

One of the appropriate solutions for this problem is to introduce alternative job opportunities to rural resdents. That means, government should insist on business investors to operate their business near the areas of countrysides and hire local graduates as their employees. For example, government should make sure the balance between employment opportunities in urban and rural areas so as to enforce the rural residents to live and work near thier community rather than moving to urban cities.

All things considered, scracity of job opportunity is the one that enforced people to move to urban areas and it can be solved by creating job opportunities in rural regions.