[tasneem.mustaf] Writing Practice Test 132394

The trend of USA labour force employment changed a lot in the past 80 years. The below graph demonstrates the number of employment among different labour forces in the USA in the period between 1930 and 2010.

Firstly, 80,000 of the laborers worked in farming, fishing & foresting in 1930. This number started to fall gradually over forty years, only to decrease drastically to reach less than 10 thousands in the year of 2010.

Secondly, industrial and technical employment was at its lowest in 1940. It started to increase slowly to reach nearly 30,000 each.

Moreover, Sales and office jobs took a zigzag pattern, but eventually increased to reach 20,000.

Lastly, another labour forces that followed a similar zigzag pattern before flattening out is the other services provided by USA labour force employment.

To summarize, various labour force employment in the USA followed different patterns between 1930 and 2010. Less people seem to prefer farming, fishing and foresting.

Music is widely taught in schools as an extracurricular activity rather than an essential subject. Some educators argue that all children must gain the knowledge on how to play a musical instrument. I agree with this statement as I think music plays an important role in children’s intelligence and performance, and it creates a window of future opportunities.

Firstly, it is well noted that people who are in touch with their creative sides tend to be more capable and smart while doing other activities that requires an amount of focus. In that sense, music helps children from a young age to be able to use their senses in a unique manner. Moreover, some children start to learn how to play simple musical notes by mimicking their parents playing music, sometimes before they say their first words. Others argue that children who have a musical ear, most of the time perform better at school.

Secondly, besides having a regular day job music can create other future job opportunities. It is a good thing to have a hobby or an enjoyable thing to do that you can turn into a career. In fact, many musician have regular jobs but they are more famous for their music. It is also said that if you enjoy your job you’ll never have to work another day, and what is more enjoyable than playing music.

In conclusion, I agree that music should be taught to all children from a young age due to its role in improving their performance and securing their future.