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[Deepak B] Writing Practice Test 1014142

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The bar graph illustrates how many women and men attended drama, painting, sculpture, and language courses in 2009 at an adult education center, while the pie chart provides data with regard to the ages of the course takers.

Overall, more women than men enrolled in drama, painting, and language courses, with sculpture reporting the lowest overall enrollment. Furthermore, people aged 50 or over participate in the indicated evening courses, while people under 20 are in the minority.

According to the bar graph, only 10 men attend drama classes, while for women the number doubles. The painting course shows a slight difference in the number of men and women participating: about 20 for men and 30 for women. The language course report shows on average the highest number of people enrolled: 20 men and 40 women. Sculpure has the lowest number of arrests.

The pie chart illustrates that mostly people aged 50 or over attended those evening courses (42%). To follow, 26% of the enrolled people are aged between 40 and 49 years old. There is a slight difference in percentage between people aged 30-39 and 20-29, 16% and 11%, respectively, with only 5% under 20. 

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Some people argue that gay marriage is a trend that might negatively affect society. Controversially, some others believe that same-sex marriages are natural and people have the right to choose this kind of marriage. This essay discusses why gay marriage should not be defined as a trend but regarded as a people's right, thus a legal marriage.

During the last few years, several arguments arose against or in favor of same-sex marriage. For decades, people believed that gay people should not be allowed to get married as it was considered against the traditional image of a family. For example, same-sex people wouldn't be able to love and care for a child as a traditional family could. The belief behind this thought is related to the patriarchal educational concept that a child needs to grow in the presence of a mother and a father. Thus, same-sex relations are considered unnatural by some people. Considering the definition of love and what caring for someone involves, it isn't indicated that same-sex people cannot feel and express love for each other and care for someone. Love is a feeling that transcends gender. As such, people have the right to love and get married.

Hence, due to the presence of such a patriarchal belief in most of the world's countries, gay marriage isn't a legal right yet. In a world where people express the need to be more democratic, politically correct, and free from bias and discrimination, same-sex marriage should be globally legalized. As such, a change of mindset might be needed. for example, people should begin to see marriage as an expression of love rather than a right and moral action to procreate.

In conclusion, while same-sex marriage may merely be a social fad for some, it is a natural expression of love for others. Hence, marriage ought to be legal regardless of a person's gender or sexual orientation. Governments ought to encourage and sanction same-sex unions.

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