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[Tahmina Parvin] Writing Practice Test 558312

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

The graphical presentation depicts the admissions of the students from nationals and internationals in Australian universities in a decade.

Overall the total enrollment of pupils in global perspective in universities of Australia has risen gradually with a balance with commencing wheares local students has shown a fluctuating data through the given period from 2001 to 2010.

From the first graph, students admissions predicts from the number of 20000 in 2001 which is expected to 80000 by 2010. However, the actual number of enrolling starts from below than 20000 in the mentioned first year and over a decade increased at a number of slightly more then 40000.

Though for local students universities are expected enrollment from 40000 in 2001 and will stable at a number of 60000 for last 3 years of the mentioned decades. Whatever, in reality the total number of admitted students started from fewer than 20000 and increased over this number by the next year. Neverthless, the number fallen from 2003 to 20006 and then slightly increased and again losses its students attraction and reached at a number of 20000 by 2010.

In brief this pictorial graphs shows the distinct differences between commencing and total number of enrolled students in the universities of Australia in the given period of time.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

There is two group of people who has different opinion about hosting an global programme on sports wheather it is good or bad. From my point of view it is a great work and helps to represent one's own country.

As sports events are the place for people's to sharing their positive approaces so these could make a special bonding. Not only sportsman have their own space to represent their capabilities but also scope for making friendship and improving personl communication. As a matter of fact, In international sector it creates great impact.

Neverthless, it could easily depict that if sports and sportsman could create such an positive attachment than a host should have an important aspects of creating great atmosphere. For example if anyone hosting an international Olympiad, a global sports event arranged in every 2 years, she/he could easily reached a vast crowd worldwide. Furthermore, people presenting such kind of programme can showcase their capabilities in global arena. Through good hosting they can make their own country proud and also share the cultures. With a great communicating and impression power they can attract the attention of spectators and touch the people's heart and make the programme successful commercially.

However, People who thinks that hosting global sports event is not good they have their own thoughts. They actually afraid of some misconduct and depress behaviour could come out through this type of presentation. Moreover, they scared to any acidental mistake which could defame their country's identity.

To summerize the discussion it can claim that with proper training and support a host can boost up their confidence and present any international sports event perfectly.

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