[Erika L] Writing Practice Test 556276

The diagrams illustrate the proposed of rennovation for an house. The first diagram reppresents the existing floor and the second ones the proposed changes. On the right there is a key with some explenations about the words present in the diagrams. The rooms involved in the project are the living room, the kitchen and the hall, even if there could be changings also in the positions of the stars.

Overall the proposed changes do not have a hall and use the space in order to have a bigger living room.

The existing floor immediatly after the entrance door have the hall and the stairs, which get into a storage. At the end of the hall there are two internal doors, the right one conduces into the living room, whereas the left one conduces into the kitchen.

By contrast the proposed changes have the entrance into the living room, which, since they have remove the right internal wall, is bigger than the existe one, and on the left side there is a big door which open into the kitchen. The kitchen has like the same size, but with a big forniture that cover all the left wall.

The stars are in a different position and use more space that in the existe one.

Regarding the children education there are two different point of view; in one of them people think who could be better teach children at home, whereas others think that it is important for children to go to school.

The advantages to teach children at home could be that in this case parents can choose the teacher and could see how he or she work with the child. On the other hand it could be difficult to find a theacher who is good in every subjects because all of them are specialized in a specific field like story or geography.

Another big disavantages is that the children need to stay with people of the same age, to play with them and to speech with them, moreover could be more difficult for the children to find friends.

By contrast some people think who is better for children to go to the school. An advantages of this is which during the school the parents could go to work or do other things; however in that case they spend less time with their children. An important advantages is that the child could stay with other children and could start some friendships that otherwise, maybe, is difficult to have.

One disadvantages is that parents can choose the school, but not the teachers, so if they think that one of them is not good could be difficult to change.

While with the education at home children can not go out, with the one at school there could be the possibility to do some organized journey with the theachers and the classmates that could improve the capacity of children to stay far from home.

In my opinion it is better to go to the school, expecially for the possibility to meet new children and to start friendships that could continue for the rest of the life. In fact that aspect could be really important for single child, because in that case he or she could play with children that have the same age.

In conclusion, both the point of view have some disavantages and advantages and could be a big decision that parents have to make.