[Jusung P] Writing Practice Test 501464

The blueprints show the current ground floor plan of a housing plus a proposed one with some construction work.

There are some differences between the existing floor plan and the proposed one. As we can see from the diagrams, a space is subtracted, doors and walls are moved, and at the same time, the existing room is furnished.

More specifically, on the existing floor, four spaces are recognizable, which are the kitchen, the hall, the stairs, and the living room. Meanwhile, in the proposed changes, the hall is removed. It is replaced by the stairs, which are longer than before. This means that the storage under the stairs also disappears.

In addition, the changes also make some minor alterations in doors and walls. Due to the new stairs, the original internal doors, linking the kitchen with the hall, also the hall with the living room, are removed. Instead, they are moved near the entrance. The wall between the hall and the living room is also demolished.

Finally, the kitchen in the proposed plan is furnished with kitchen furniture.

It has been a long time since people started to debate about in what way children should be taught. Some people think that children need to be taught at home, however, there are also some counterparts who claim that sending their child to school is crucial for the development of the children. In this essay, I will talk about the advantages of the two ways of teaching and provide my own thought about this topic.

To begin with, homeschooling can be good for children since they can enjoy a relaxing environment while studying. Some children are too anxious to stay in the classroom, they need care from parents. Therefore, at home, parents can help them be calmer when learning. Also, children can take a break freely without permission from teachers. When they are tired of studying, lying on the bed or watch a small TV series are easy options.

On the other hand, going to school is also very helpful for children to develop their social skills. They will meet new friends and learn how to communicate with others. Which is an essential skill to survive the contemporary world. At the same time, children will encounter many unexpected situations while staying at school. Under this condition, they will be better at problem-solving.

In my opinion, children are supposed to be sent to school rather than staying home and be taught by their parents. This is because if they do not get qualified education, their views and values can be narrow. Parents tend to teach their children what they themselves think is correct. But that is never enough for children to live through this competitive society.

To conclude, even though there are different merits of both methods, going to school seems more important for children.