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[Harminder S] Writing Practice Test 424789

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

This picture shows the procedure of making carbonated drinks. The process fountains 5 steps starting from filtering the water to supply it to the supermarket.

At first, the water moves from water storage house and is filtered from the filter machines. After that, it goes through the big machines which fountains water softener and chemicals which are importnat in carbonated drinks. Then, the pump flows the water in electric heaters to heat it up and kill bad bacteria. Once the heating is done, after that it evaporates in the cooling pipe and the carbonation takes place by putting water in carbon dioxide cointainer. Next, the water goes in the mixing tank where colours, syrup and flavours are add on to it. Again, the filter action process starts after mixing it altogether and carbonated drinks finally transferred into the bottles and cans. Lastly, all the drink bottles are packed in the cartons and dispatched to the supermarket for the consumption by the customers.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

In today's world, the computers is used for every small thing at work or for studies. Now a days, these are used for teaching purposes and should be used in classrooms also. It is agreed that computer is such an advanced technique which is used to simplify the work. But, sometimes it has it's bad effects. Further in this essay, I am going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

One one hand, the computers are very much useful and helpful for students for study purpose. And by applying computers in the classrooms, the students are more concentrated towards their studies. Also, by using latest technology for studies, the students get interact and have a proper presence in the classroom and the teachers are also teach on computers by using their programs. It helps teachers also to give their teaching abilities a new face. For example, After covid pandamic, the schools are off and at that time the computers help teachers in making questions papers, in saving the study materials, have face to face video conferencing direct with the students and do not have to do the lot of paper work.

On the other hand, it is not totally right to depend on the computers for each and every work. As computers are machinery, it can be damaged anytime and saving importnat documents in it can be vanished with a small mistake. And not only the teachers, the students' dependency on computers for teaching purpose can have a lot of risk. For example, the gadgets like mobile, tv, laptop, computer etc. are using by the younger generation plethoraticly. And it is the main cause of distraction among students which is affecting their studies a lot.

To encapsulate, I pen down saying that the computers are useful and can be use for study purpose only. I strongly believe that that the face to face and pen paper system is still at it's best and as now a days, computers are using in the classrooms, so the school management have to put the child lock system on it so that the students can not use the computers for any other purpose which will leads to less distraction.

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