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[abhijeet D] Writing Practice Test 379157

Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1

There are five stages through which the raw water goes through to call itself a carbonated drink

Stage 1

Raw water goes through the filter which filters the hard impurities like sand ,gravel or pebbels. then it moves to tank in which it is softened with the help of chemicals. pump in turn pumps the softened water to the electric heating chamber

Stage 2

In this stage the water is heated & passes through the cooling pipe & goes to th echamber where carbon dioxide is added to it for that bitter and refreshing tatse . then it makes its way to the mixing tank.

Stage 3

Mixing tank is set at a certain temperature & the softend water equipped with sufficient amount of carbon dioxide is now added with colour, syrup & flavour maing it how it appears and tastes to the end consumer that is us

Stage 4

Then it goes through the filtering proccess once again but this time to to the specific way in which it is to be pakaged i.e in cans or bottles once this is over we move on

Stage 5

The cans and bottles are pakaged and stacked into the trucks which then deliver them to the supermarket near us .

Although these drinks are highly accessible to us but we should not forget the massive proccess water has went though to provide that feeling of sweetness and refeshment to us.

Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Writing task 2

Technological revolution has surely yielded many fruits and computers are on of them. The concept of post modern world and computers is inseperable so much so that for once we can live our lives without people in it but not computers as we can find people on computers but not vice versa and this has both positive and negative impact and it is necessary to discuss beacuse if we will not then there is a chance that it will create an imbalance in its use and mostly for the worse

computers can make our lives easier an they can connect us to the world ,do our calculations for us, help in articulating our knowlwdge and even go beyond the capabilities of humans in some aspects such as accuracy .the most important reason ,they are so important is beacause they are far more accurate as time goes by unlike humans.But there application presently in many countries is restricted to administrative,corporate and industrial use only whereas it has proved in many western countries to be a good source of interactive and creative mode of educating children in classroom .it is proven that when children have a visual memory then a descriptive one thay are far more likely to take interest in it and that interest in turn helps them retain information longer. and teaching them about computers can make them eqipped with knowledge they will need in practical world to find there way as the world runs on internet and internet on computer. various programs can be introduced for teaching students about the things that are difficult to teach without computers for eg, intead of taking about a country ,showing them what its like is better and if they are interested they would read about on there own accord which in turn will develop there reading skills.

but,unsupervised computer access in case of children can result in harmfull results as well,it is proven that children who spend most of there time on computers have less social skills ,and this bond they should have with people is somw what inhibited .teh leading cause of anxiety and restlessness in teenage children is due to the access amount of time they spend on social networking sites . i am not saying that these sites have a neagtive impact in total but partial .these media platforms instill a sense of lacking in the individual i.e thay see that they dont have what the people on that platform have which causes them to be insecure about onself and constantly trying to have things and change themselves but not knowing in which direction to go.

compurtes can be and should be introduced in classrooms but students should also be taught the effects of its continous use.and be monitered upto a certain age as to what is it that they are watching or listening to on there gadget as that young age is very impressionable and influential and its high chance that they will become what they see .we should definitly not shy away and use the technology to its utmost keeping in mind its harmfull effects . BALANCE is what makes a perfect society in this case also balance is most important

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