[Omar A] Writing Practice Test 361328

the given diagram illustrates how soft drinks are manufactured in a factory.

Overall, The whole process consists of 5 different stages in order to produce a carbonated drinks. Starting with water cleaning to be used in the manufacturing process, and ending with delivering the products to supermarkets.

To begin with, Raw water is cleaned by a filter, softing by water softener device, mixing it with some chemical substances and pumping the water. Next, Water is evaporated by electronic heaters, then it will continue its path through a cooling pipe which freeze the water vapor. Furthermore, water vapor is mixed with carbon dioxide. After that, dioxided vapor is is mixed with; colouring, syrup and flavours. Mixing process is happening in a machine called mixing tank.

Then, output mix is filtered by a filter. What is more, Bottles and cans are being filled with the resultant soft drink. In the final stage, products are being packaged and shipped to vendors to be selled.

Nowadays, We are living in the age of computing. Everything is being completed by the help of computer and modern technology as it made life more convenient. In order to maintain that, Students in classrooms should know about the power of computer to help them during their studies. In contrast, Some people are going against that as they are concernedd about how computer teaching is affecting human's abilities. In this essay, I will dicuss the positive and negative aspects of introducing computer in classrooms and explain why the world should start doing it immedietly.

Students should have at least a basic knowledge about how to use computers as it benefits them. Actually, Computers helps students to boost their productivity as homeworks are done quickly with computers. So far, Students will be allowed to have more free time to practice such other useful things in their life. Furthermore, More success is being achievable by many classroom students as displaying graphics or playing educational animations helped them to deeply understand their lessons. Which allow them to score higher grades in exams. Computer is considered a magic tool for many students across the globe.

Although computers are good tools for helping students, It is a cutting-edge tool as well as some students are missusing it. Some people say that computers are used to cheat by many students. As an evidence, Many teachers have noticed that some students with low grades have scored high grades even though they were not studing well. What is more, a recent study carried by Harvard university has reprted that 70% of schools students have used computers to view and visit pronographic websites in their classrooms. Computer are affecting students in a bad way. Therfore, Some people believe that they should be replaced by the traditional notebook and pen.

To sum up, Computers are a cutting-edge tools. It might affect humans greatly or horribly. In my opinion, We cannot neglect the help of computers because of some symptoms of other bad attitudes. I suggest to introduce computers to students in classrooms, but with strong monittoring to stop computers misusage. With that applied, Students attitude is conducted better.